求英语短文修改，谢谢！！！
首先Monday首字母大写，i don't 改成 i didn't，forget改成forgot，speed is 改成was，low改成slow，我认为就这些吧
I agree 100 percent.
Different things need to be delt with different ways.
I see a boy fall into the river.
Many people fear that all things be denied.
It is more important to calm down and come up with how to help the boy in danger.
第二行：that->who， days->days'
第三行无错，
第四行我感觉optimistic、brave、industrious、intelligent and knowledgeable，
第五行Farewe->Farewell，
第六行take care，my good friend!
你的问题很难的，至少很费时间。你一点分都没有，谁给你好好解答啊。
上面的错别字就不说了,正确原文如下,如有不足,还望指教!1With the development of the world, people have to enrich themselves endlessly by lifelong
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