高一英语！短文改错！能改几个改几个！帮帮忙啊~

【高一英语】短文改错，改十个！（可以改词、添词、删词）请自动无视掉我自己瞎改的那几个，本人学渣..~

我觉得你改的这几个都对，1 去掉appreciate 后面的那个for，2，把therefore 改为however,他要表达的意思是说然而。3.confusing 改为confused,因为主语是人。4 continue lending,表示继续帮我的意思，这应该是高三改错题，

The
story
took
place
in
Amsterdam,
Holland
in
(定冠词
the)
early
1940s
after
the
German
Nazis
had
occupied
most
of
Europe.
The
Nazi
party
ruled
German
(德国应该用
Germany)
from
1933
to
1945.
One
of
their
key
policy
(应该用复数
policies)
was
to
kill
all
the
Jews
in
Europe.If
any
persons
known
to
be
Jews
was(应该用复数
were)
found
,they
would
be
send
(被动式sent)
to
concentration
camps
farther
east,most
(应该是副词
mostly)
in
Poland.
Families
were
separated
but
（表示并列应该用and）
transported
in
trains
.For
much
(可数名次用
many
修饰)
days,they
go
(过去式
went)
without
food,water,sanitation
or
fresh
air.To
avoid
this
terrible
fate
,some
Jewish
families
went
into
hiding,often
under
(应该用with，固定搭配)
the
help
of
non-Jewish
friends.
全文正确的说法是：
This
is
a
true
story.
It
took
place
in
Amsterdam,
Holland
in
the
early
1940s
after
the
German
Nazis
had
occupied
most
of
Europe.
The
Nazi
Party
ruled
Germany
from
1933
to
1945.
One
of
their
key
policies
was
to
kill
all
the
Jews
in
Europe.
If
any
persons
known
to
be
Jews
were
found,
they
would
be
sent
to
concentration
camps
farther
east,
mostly
in
Poland.
Families
were
separated
and
transported
in
trains.
For
many
days,
they
went
without
food,
water,
sanitation
or
fresh
air.
To
avoid
this
terrible
fate,
some
Jewish
families
went
into
hiding,
often
with
the
help
of
non-Jewish
friends
This
diary
was
written
during
the
time
when
Anne
and
her
family
moved
to
escape
from
being
killed
by
Nazis.

答案类似，看着改吧 Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken to gether. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
1.【答案】Every day, he spends too much time with his work.
with改成on
【解析】spend some time on sth.
2.【答案】With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night.
把so删掉
【解析】上文不是句子，是with独立主格结构，故下文不可以用连词连接句子。
3.【答案】Hard work have made him very ill.
have改成has
【解析】主语为 “Hard w ork”为单数。
4.【答案】He has ruined his healthy.
healthy改成health
【解析】代词所有格要修饰名词。
5.【答案】That is which other teachers say.
which改成what
【解析】既要引导表语从句又要在从句中作宾语，只有“what”具有这种双重功能。
6.【答案】Yesterday afternoon，I paid visit to Mr. health a Johnson.
在visit前加 a
【解析】pay a visit to为固定搭配。
7.【答案】I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped.
her改成his
【解析】代词指代的是Mr. Johnson为男性，所以要将“her”改成“his”。
8.【答案】Quietly I step into the room.
step改成stepped
【解析】讲的是过去的事，要用一般过去时。
9.【答案】I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together.
picture→pictures
【解析】some of the picture说明不止一副画。
10.【答案】I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
much→much
【解析】as many as意为“多达”是从数上面来说的。as much as意为“像……一样”表示程度。

第二行with→on
三have ha
worry about
quiet→quietly
picture→pictures
many →much

第一行 hard-working

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