亲爱的英语高手，请帮我看看我新翻译的英语句子的语法对不对

亲爱的英语高手们手动帮忙翻译个句子呗~

“那幅肖像，时刻提醒着每个行为对他灵魂的影响，因为每个罪恶都使他的形状毁容，或使他衰老。”

这是奥斯卡·王尔德的小说《道林·格雷的画像》

简介：天生漂亮异常的道林格雷因见了画家霍华德给他画的真人一样大的肖像，发现了自己惊人的美，又听信了亨利爵士的吹嘘，开始为自己韶华易逝，美貌难久感到痛苦，表示希望那幅肖像能代替自己承担岁月和心灵的负担，而让自己永远保持青春貌美。他的这个想入非非的愿望后来却莫名其妙的实现了。他开始挥霍自己的罪恶，最后这幅肖像却成为了记录恶行的证据，他因肖像而生也因肖像而死。

Last week I already told the workers that they needed to pay attention to these issues. If you think that there is still a need for that, I can arrange for another training course on the issues found out in the production of these goods,which will last one hour starting at 2:00 tomorrow afternoon.

要求不高也要先提醒一下常出现的问题要注意：
1. 冠词、冠词、还是冠词。你常常不用冠词，甚至当中文里有"一个'的时候有不用英文的"a"。用的时候，总忘记在元音开头的名词前，不定冠词是"an"而不是"a"。另外，seeking the truth是指找出一件事的真相，而一般的寻找真理不应该用定冠词，是seeking truth。
2. 主语。你的句子里最混乱的就是主语。主语可以加定语来修饰，但是你仍然要记住主语是哪个词，而不能另写一个新的词当主语。Science as a process of research , it is mainly...这句，本来Science是主语的，但是你写完了定语之后，把原来的主语忘了，又写了个it当主语。这种情况发生好几次了。

词汇：
科学共同体 scientific community
个人角度 personal perspective
漫长 protracted
曲折 tortuous
之所以 the reason that
深奥性 profoundness
隐秘性 covertness
无限性 limitless
渗透 permeate
理论评价 theoretical evaluation
不可或缺的 crucial

改正过的正文：
Science as a process of research, is mainly deployed by the subject of scientific research, the scientific community and the scientists or people of science. Even from the personal perspective of a scientist, the process of scientific research is a protracted, tortuous, and complicated process filled with both sweetness and bitterness. The reason that scientific research is a protracted and complicated process, is primarily determined by the profoundness, covertness, and limitless of the object of research (the reality) as well as the thought process of the research subject. Science as a process of research activity and a maker of spiritual products, has some unique characteristics. Nonetheless, we still emphasize that seeking truth and relying on proof make up the essential features of the process of a scientific activity. Seeking truth runs from the start of a scientific activity to its end. Relying on proof permeates all of the basic and applied research activities, and is crucial for the processes of both scientific invention and theoretical evaluation.

Science as a research activity, mainly by the scientific community that is the subject of scientific research, scientists or scientific people started.
Even from the perspective of individual scientists, scientific research activities is also a long, tortuous, complex and full of ups and downs of the process
The reason why scientific research activities is a long and complex process, mainly by the study (objective reality) of the esoteric nature, and the hidden and infinite nature of the thought processes of the main decisions.
The spirit of science as a research activity or the production process, with some unique features.
However, we still have to emphasize that the pursuit of truth and resort to prove that the process of scientific activities constitute essential characteristics. Pursuit of truth through the scientific activities always, resort to prove that penetration in all base
Basic research and applied research activities, inventions and theories within the scientific evaluation process is essential even for a moment.

Science as a research activity, is mainly composed of scientific research subject namely science community, scientists or scientific American launch.
Even the scientists personal point, scientific research activities are also a long and tortuous, complex and full of suantiankula process
Scientific research activities are a long and complicated process, is mainly caused by the research object (objective reality) of esoteric sex, confidentiality and limitless and research subject thought process sexual decision.
Science as research activities or spiritual production process, with some unique features.
However, we still want to emphasize, to seek truth and resort to proof constitutes the essence of scientific process characteristics. To pursue truth throughout scientific activities throughout, resort to proof permeability in all base
Besides art1 function and applied research activity, it in scientific inventions and theoretical evaluation process is an instant indispensable.你对着看看吧 你语法没有问题的

不错，语法都对

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