麻烦高手帮忙纠正我的英文翻译

麻烦英文高手帮忙帮我翻译~

歌手：乔纳斯兄弟强纳斯兄弟
歌名： Pushin '我Awy推开我
歌词：
跑，跑像你这样做，我追你
我对你的尾巴，我越来越快，你不必东奔西走
尝试修复您做什么，回头的时候
夜间消失，然后我们现在下降快

你把我带走
每失去一句话，每一个东西你说
把我带走
您尝试停止，但现在这一切都在我的今天
把我带走
如果你真的不关心只是说给我的脸
把我带走
你把我带走推动推

停止！告诉我真相事业我很困惑
纺轮这些墙壁塌下，我需要
你，超过你知道，我不放手，
我越来越密切，所以采取了我的手
并请告诉我为什么

你把我带走
每失去一句话，每一个东西你说
把我带走
您尝试停止，但现在这一切都在我的今天
把我带走
如果你真的不关心只是说给我的脸
把我带走

你把我带走推动推（ x8 ）

你把我带走
每失去一句话，每一个东西你说
把我带走
您尝试停止，但现在这一切都在我的今天
把我带走
如果你真的不关心只是说给我的脸
把我带走
你把我带走推动推

前面的都比原作好很多了，语法错误已经基本没有了，语言什么的我再稍微改了改

Actually I had already prepared something for lunch, but when my colleague suggested pizza, I couldn't help joining. We ordered a two-sort pizza, Hell's Kitchen and Pepperoni, which is really delicious along with ice coke. And French fries in this restaurant are also very good.

Pizza is one of my favorite. My first impression about pizza is from a cartoon named "Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles". The heroes in it always look very happy when they received a pizza. My first pizza experience was a famous restaurant chains in Xu Jia Hui. But all i remember now is its marvelous price instead of the exact taste of that pizza.

看了下你的原文和翻译，因为你是去酒店面试用，所以得保证翻译后英文流畅上口，听者才能对你印象深刻，过多的文辞效果只怕适得其反。试想下，你对面的考官喜欢听你背课文吗呵呵？所以介绍要：流畅、简洁、热情饱满。
你翻译的：Hi, glad to have the opportunity to your hotel for an interview.
我改后：hello everyone！I am very glad to have this opportunity to your hotel for a key
key是钥匙的意思，这了对你来说亦是一把能来此工作的钥匙。

你翻译的：my name is XXX, 22 years old，I graduated from XXX and My major is tourism management
这几句不用改
你翻译的：I was a lively and cheerful boy.
我改后：I am a lively and cheerful boy。

你翻译的：I think my work experience is shallow, but I will study hard to Improve myself.
这几句不用改

你翻译的：also i likes and suitable for the hotel reception work.I hope you can give me a chance to work in hotel
我改的：also i like this job and i am suitable for the hotel reception work.please give me a chance to work in this hotel 。

祝你成功！

1.hi貌似有点太随便了点，可以改成Good morning/afternoon/night,everyone
2.years old，I graduated 中间的逗号改为句号。
3.第一句话少了主语I和be动词am……这个错误似乎有点多。我还是帮你直接把正确的原文打上去吧。不过有较多的改动，因为你的表述太不地道了。
Good morning,everyone.Thank you for giving me this opportunity to enter the interview of your hotel.I am xxx,who is active and outgoing,and who likes sport very much.I was major in tourism management in xxx(你的学校名字).As you can see,I am an present graduate who don't have rich experience.But I have strong enthusiasm to learn how to work in your hotel from you distinguished people.So,please give me this chance.If you choose me, I will serve customers heart and soul,thus living up to your hope.That's all. Thank you.

hi, I AM glad to have THIS opportunity to COME to your hotel for THIS interview. my name is XXX, AND I AM 22years old. i graduated from XXX and my major is tourism management. i AM a OUTGOING and cheerful PERSON WHO HAS A ZEAL FOR SPORTS. i think my work experience is shallow, but i will study hard to improve myself. also i LIKE hotel reception work AND FEEL THAT I AM SUITABLE FOR IT. I hope you can give me a chance to work in THIS hotel.
错误确实蛮多的， 大写字母的我修改的地方， 你有时候会有run-on sentence， 就是两个完整句子用逗号连接， 这在英语中是常见的语法错误。。。 给分吧谢谢。。。

Are very pleased to have the opportunity to come to your hotel for an interview, my name is XXX, 22 years old, I graduated from XXX tourism management professional, I am a lively and cheerful boy who love sports, although I work for inexperienced, but I will work hard to learn, but also their own very fond of and suitable for hotel front desk of this work and hope and opportunity to give your hotel!

我是用翻译器的
应该不会有什么错吧。

Very happy can have the opportunity to come the expensive hotel interview, I call XXX this year 22 years old, I graduate from XXX traveling management specialty, I am a boy who lively deeply loves the movement open and bright, although my work experience was still shallow, but I will study diligently, will like and suits

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