谁能帮忙给翻译一下，不要翻译工具的

英语高手来翻译下，不要翻译工具~

30 volunteers that will be sent to the Mars will be selected all over the world by 2015.
They will be ready for not returning to the earth any more and they will keep good relationships with others.
Life on the Mars is very arduous. People there are faced with extreme cold and fear.

I am a student who is upgarding from junior college student to university student .My major in junior college is about financial management , but I changed my major into the International economics and Trade . Even so , I prefer it to International economics and Trade and I hope I could study further on it .
I enjoy wathing movies and traveling in my spare time . I was often attracted by the story ,even laugh or cry with the actors .Lately , I am watching an American teleplay ,it tells a series of stories of four talented scientists and a beautiful girl .Thay're neighbours , often helps with each other , and they are studying and growing together .
During the holidays , I did plenty of part-time jobs ,such as working as a waitress and a saleswoman . Now , I am practicing in a accounting firm . I acquainted a lot , and learned how to put into practice ,for instance , the work about business and tax administration .


翻译得比较生硬，还请见谅！希望能够帮到你。。。

American Amway company is a world-known transnatiaonal enterprise. When expanding Chinese market, Amway adapted a marketing strategy which suit to Chinese national situation, fully developing a marketing mix of product, price, place and promotion. Using the particular operation method of "store sales with employed salesman", it successfully entered the Chinese market. With the gradual increase of people's living standard, the usage of direct marketing is getting wider and deeper, especailly the store direct marketing enabled people to buy the daily goods conveniently. Carring out a questionnair for the Amway customers in Beijing, this passage points out the reason for Amway's leading position in the direct-markeing business through the understanding and analyzing of its marketing strategyies. Thus, the passage sums up the significant information about marketing strategy for the national companies, enabling the companies to develop prosperously in the firece market competition.
其实上面那位回答的人已经翻译地挺不错，但仍有一些语法错误，和一些词汇错误，我作了修改。
如其中“产品、价格、地点、促销”也就是4p，应该是product, price, place and promotion而不是product, price, place and distribution。
请参考！！

America Amway company is a world-known transnational enterprise. When expand Chinese market,it adapt appropriate marketing promotion strategy which suit to chinese situation,fully developing product, price, place and distribution market mix, using the particular promotion method "store promotion add employ salesman", successful enter into the Chinese market. With the inceasing of people's live standard, direct marketing model are used more widely and deeply especially the store direct marketing in the day-to-day life,it gives a lot of convenient to people's dayly purchase.This dissertation will do the questionnair for Beijing Amway consumers,through understand and analyze Amway's marketing strategy, point out the reasons of why Amway could be the top company in direct marketing field.Thus summarize the significant information about marketing strategy for our national company,let our companies could developing in this strong competition market.

才15分,太少,不干.

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