英语高手来修改作文，谢谢！
首先，你第三人称。。没用
句式基本正确
不懂追问
满意采纳
Despite the burning sun this morning, I went to my english teacher's house with notes and had a grammar lesson.
I came back home after that and had a fulfilling lunch. Also, I have catched my favourite variety show, Running man, on my mobile.
I had a quick nap after that and woke up to work on my English in the late afternoon. I hope my English is as good as the rest of the classmates.
At six o'clock, my father and I played tennis in the playground.
我英文也一般般 但希望有帮到
我改了些 语病 和 不通顺词语
外加一些单词
楼主意思大致都看得懂 就是一些小毛病 谢谢
It is you who explore our minds with your extensive knowledge and your noble spirits. After 20 days of studying in your class, a new dream has come up in my mind --破折号I want to be a person like you who is optimistic， brave， industrious， intelligent， and knowledgable. I'm clear that it is a long-term goal for me. Nevertheless I will keep on fighting for this goal till the end of my life. Farewe, my friend! take care my friend!
先表扬你勇于用新词汇。不一定要用难词来表达, 我用我的写作来表达同样的意思。多加点内容煽情会更好
Last 20 days that I study with you are the most memorable experience in my life. You are such a experienced teacher with wisdom. You always impart us knowledge with patience . No matter how many times we stuck in a specific question, you always are willing to help, never show a sign of unwillingness. You have many good qualities, such as working hard, making great efforts on the goal you set, very intelligence and the faith that you always be optimistic to life even encountered a very difficult task. All of these qualities have influenced me a lot, in the end, I decide to be a person like you. I have set this long-term goal, and am determined to pursue it in my lifetime. Last, take care my friend.
Everything Has Two Sides. In recent years,schools in China began to focus on student's practice ability. I think this is good for some students
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