请帮我看看这篇短文有哪些语法错误.
我觉得全文时态最好改成过去时
最后Finally these symbols are totally showed Esperanza’s dreams and thinking; the house and her mother’s hair imply the meaning of family
改成Finally these symbols have totally shown Esperanza’s dreams and thinking; the house and her mother’s hair implied the meaning of a family
" in purpose "应该是"on purpose"
"make a brief introduction to myself"应该是"introduction of myself"
"open the Conference " 应该是"opening"
"our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive"应该是"will be sure"
My dream house is a single house.
It has three storeys.
On the first floor there is a big living room,a medium-sized dining room, a kitchen and a bathroom.
On the second floor there are three bedrooms and a bathroom.
On the third floor there is a reading room,with collections of books and a bathroom.
Outside of the house, there is a swimming pool, because the sport I like best is swimming.
There is a garage, of course. I hope to keep the car in the garage.
And there is a very big garden, I hope to plant many flowers and trees in the garden.
This is my dream house.
表示某处有某物时要用there be，而 have/has/had则是用于人拥有......
第一行is 后加 a
第二行 have改为 has
第三行 and后 加a
第四行 has 后加 a and 后加a
第五行 两个it has 都改为there is because I like sport is swimming改为 because i like swimming
第六行 car后加is it has改为there is to后加plant
第八行 dram 改为dream
请帮我检查一下这篇英语短文有没有错误?
This English story is very good .So this story not have T(错误的） words.
大家帮忙看看这篇简单的英语短文,看看有没有语法错误!快~
A busy weekend Hi,I am[人名].I'll have a busy weekend!On Saturday,I'm going to the cinema by bus.Then,I'm going home and read some magazines.On Sunday,I'm going to pay a visit to see my grandpanrents.What are you going to do on the weekend?
英语作文改错,请帮我看看这篇作文有什么错
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