大家帮忙看看这篇简单的英语短文，看看有没有语法错误！快~
The colour of it attracts me a lot and the T-shirt is a beautiful fit
这句看着就不怎么舒服，你可以改为我很满意之类的话就好了吧
Smmer holiday 单词错误～～～
My dream
My friends often ask me what I want to be in the future .Maybe you think it’s a hard question ,but I think it’s easy .
I hope I can to be a doctor in the future .because I think a doctor is like an angle who（ wears) a white coat .when some people are injured and hopeless ,doctors drag them out of the abyss of death . doctor is a sacred job ,and(but) it is important .
In order to make the dream (come) ture , I must try my best to study ,because medicine is be based on our knowledge of school .I will study hard ,and learn (more）about medicine as (possible---much) as I can.
The dream is my goal ,it make (s) me( work ） harder and harder ,I won’t give up .
希望会有所帮助！！！！！
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