英语作文：假如你是一名高三学生，最近你看了一则央视公益广告Family且深有感触。请用英语给你校英语报...

英语假如你是李华，最近看了央视公益广告“百善孝为先”且深有感触，~

看词数应该是高中作文，自己尽量写吧。这种材料性作文该要求的都有，你照着写就行。作文的多练，否则用法无法的高分，别放弃，别靠他人兄弟

Recently a public service advertisement Family has impressed me （and moved） me deeply.

评价：不错
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In the picture, ‘F’ stands for father, ‘M’ stands for mother, and ‘I’ is me.
评价：描述性文字中规中矩
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The picture reveals a theme that wherever there is love, there is responsibility.
评价：好评
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【新段】
When I was young, parents take the responsibility and （hold back）【shoulder】 rain and wind (by themselves)【for us.】
评价：hold back 读不懂

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Father （earns money and ）supports the family, while mother （cook meals and） do【es】 all the housework.
评价：不要重复
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In constract, I the one who （are）is loved and protected.
评价：语法错能忍吗
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As I grow up day by day, I find that parents （become old）【are getting older and older】.
评价：怪怪的
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Father has to use a stick to help him walk, and mother aren’t beautiful as she were.
评价：不错的句子
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I realize that it（’s） 【should be my】time I took responsibility and care for the family in turn. 【and enable my parents enjoy the happiness that they can get rid of burdens】

评价：不通啊！你读～
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【新段】

The public advertisement make me in deep thought.
评价：有这样的用法？
修改：用give me a lesson

Our parents work hard to let us grow up happily, but used up their energy and became old in the end.
评价：蛮感动的
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We finally grow up but to find they are old and 【in？】 grey.
评价：but to !!!严重错误连词后面加句子，扣分！你妹！气氛都被破坏了

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We were brought up under selfless love from a 【naive】 baby to an 【mature】 adult.
评价：略显单调
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（Since ）parents become old and we are （young）【surprised that ww are strong】,【。】【It's the very time for us to create a happy life for our parents. So】 we should take the responsibily and do things for our family.
评价：充实之
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Action speaks louder than words. I love you, father and mother!
评价：这次结尾好了很多！点赞，开头还得再吸引人一点。避免语法错误。
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小的时候，我总把父母对自己的爱当作天经地义，因为我不了解，也不知道父母的辛苦。现在，我长大了，我知道该怀着一颗感恩之心去体谅父母，应该担当起，照顾、孝敬父母的责任。
Small, I always love their parents as a as unalterable principles, because I do not know, do not know their parents hard. Now, I grew up, and I know with a heart of thanksgiving to appreciate their parents, should take on, take care of, the responsibility of your parents.
　　可是又有多少人是把父母放在第一位的呢？有的人总是不断地报怨自己的父母这样不好，那样不对，对父母的行为和做法挑三拣四，横加指责，甚至于直接与父母顶撞！有些人不知道自己父母身体的健康状况，不记得自己父母的生日，有的连自己父母的工作单位在哪都不知道，想想看，父母为我们付出那么多精力和心血啊！
But how many people is to give parents in the first place? Some people always complain about their parents so bad, that does not, the behavior of parents and practices of pick and choose, to accuse, or even directly contradict with their parents! Some people do not know their own physical health status, do not remember the birthday of their own parents, and some even their own parents in the work units which do not know, see, parents pay so much for our energy and efforts ah!

Fa----father, M---mother, i----I,也就是自己，Y----you, L---love, 你可以根据我给你这个提示，有爸爸，有妈妈，有我，有你，有爱，大家互相团结，互相体谅，互相包容，才能成为一个好的家庭，tight each other, understand each other, tolerate each other

你好屌，我也在考试，皖南八校

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