急！请英语高手帮忙解答一下一个英语问题，在线等，感谢！

急！请英语高手帮忙解答一下一个英语问题，在线等，非常感谢！~

Task:Study
the
following
sentences
and
try
to
improve
them.
任务：仔细阅读以下句子并尝试改进它们。
1.We
thought
she
was
charming,intelligent,and
a
very
capable
young
woman.
我们认为她是个迷人、聪明和很有能力的女人。
改为：We
thought
she
was
charming,
intelligent,
and
very
capable.
2.Looking
out
of
the
window,the
grassland
stretches
as
far
as
the
eye
can
see.
向窗外望去，草场绵延不绝直至视力所及。
改为：Outside
the
window,
the
grassland
stretches
as
far
as
the
eye
can
see.
3.On
entering
the
classroom,the
students
stood
up
and
said“Good
morning!”
（老师）进了教室，学生们起立并说“早上好！”
改为：When
the
teacher
entered
the
classroom,
the
students
stood
up
and
said
"Good
morning!"
4.I'm
going
to
the
lecture
on
modern
Chinese
drama,because
he
is
a
dramatist
I
like.
我要去上现代中国戏剧讲座，因为他是我喜欢的剧作家。
改为：I'm
going
to
the
lecture
on
modern
Chinese
drama,
because
the
lecturer
is
a
dramatist
I
like.
5.We
have
great
faith
and
high
hopes
for
her.
我们对她寄予厚望。
改为：We
have
great
faith
in
and
high
hopes
for
her.
6.It
is
better
to
give
than
take.
给予比索取好。
改为：It
is
better
to
give
than
to
take.

1.Born in a small town in South China in 1968,he grew up to become a(a要去掉，become+职业不加冠词) musician.
于1968年出生与中国南部小镇的他长大后成为一位音乐家。

2.The girl is too young. （问题应该是出在too上……其实口语里特定语境也可以用的，建议改做very）
这个女孩很年轻

3.We entered the shop,and a saleswoman greeted us,and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves,and the prices were quite reasonable,and a lot of customers were buying them. （Chinglish很严重的……建议改成and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves,of which the prices were quite reasonable,and a lot of customers were buying them.当然可能还有其他问题……）
我们进入商店，售货员向我们打招呼。各种各样的鞋摆在货架上，价钱非常合理，很多顾客在挑选它们。


4.He visited all the famous historical monuments of this ancient city,and he also found out that the people of the city had to pay heavy taxes. （我觉得问题可能出在find out上，这个词我们学的是经过努力或者运算得出结论，而不是简单的发现，建议改为find）
他参观了这座古老城市所有有名的历史遗迹，而且发现这里的市民要付很重的税。

5.Shakespeare was one of the greatest dramatists.
（我觉得这道题的问题出在greatest上，可能出题人觉得英语的最高级有排他性，其实这句话我觉得是对的。）
莎士比亚是最伟大的戏剧家之一。

6.The singing in the film is good and the actors act wonderfully well. （这句话很难改……有一句话是The play is acting wonderfully well. 这个剧本上演非常成功。可能是IN这个介词有问题吧……或者把ACT改成PERFOEMENCE。希望大家指教。）
电影中音乐很好，演员演出非常出色。

7.Jane is better at singing English songs.（be good at不能写成be better at）JANE非常擅长英语歌曲。

1.were 我昨天要是在这里就好了
2.could speak 如果她更努力的学习，她应该可以说一口更好的英语
3.Were 如果我是一只鸟，我就可以飞回家
4.can not say 一个孝顺的女孩儿不会对她的爸爸说这些的
5.will not come 如果明天下雨，我们就不去那里了

1.were
2.speaks(不确定,我忘了,呵呵)
3.were
4.didnt say
5.will not come
1.我真想昨天来.
2.她很用功,现在英语说得更好了.
3.如果我是一只鸟,我就可以飞回家了.
4,那个漂亮的女生没有给她父亲说.
5.如果明天下雨的话,我们就不来这儿.

daiyi3 - 初入江湖 二级 支持。
翻译：
1.如果我昨天在那该多好啊!
2.如果她能更努力学习，她的英语会更好了。
3.我如果是只小鸟，那样我就可以飞回家了。
4.一个好女孩是不会跟她父亲说这事情的。（差点理解错了- -）
5.如果明天下雨的话，我们就不会来了。

1. had been
2. could have spoken
3. Were
4. would not say
5. would not come
用动词的正确形式填空：
这些题是考查虚拟语气的。
1. 要是我昨天在那里就好了。
2. 如果她学习再努力一点，她现在就能把英语说得更好了。
3. 如果我是一只鸟，我就能飞回家了。
4. 如果是个好女孩儿，她就不会告诉她的父亲。
5. 要是明天不下雨，我们就不来这儿。

用动词的正确形式填空 was would have spoken once was would not say would not come

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