英语作文，哪里有错
第一段 Where stress come from? 应该是 Where does the stress come from?
第二段 class 改为 classes
第三段Adults also has pressure. has 改为have， boss 改为bosses
这是从语法方面来说的。
内容上：
第二段主要描述的是孩子们的压力，要具体说父母望子成龙望女成凤，所以给孩子报了很多特长班之类的课程，父母的期望给了孩子很大的压力，让孩子失去了自由，父母要理解孩子，不要给孩子报那么多课程，尽量选择孩子感兴趣的课程，这样才能两全其美。
最后最好总结一下，要不然太突兀的就结束了。
number one 前最好加个the 显得更通顺
various class 应该是classes
lost在这里用过去式不是很好，因为整段都是一般式，会显得很突兀，还是用回原型lose比较好
pressure用pressures更好
companion加复数companions
or the elder变为and the elders
the edler 为 the elders
though 和but不能一起用的，只能用一个，这个错误给改卷老师看到会大打折扣的哦
sometime 在这里必须改为sometimes,才能表示“有时”
这只是我的个人建议，本人大学英语专业研一，希望能对你有帮助，有什么不懂的可以问我，大家一起交流交流
还有一个错误，刚才没仔细看，不好意思。就是倒数第二行的will makes will后面要加原型，所以为will make
我最喜欢的歌手是hebe她所在的组合名称是SHE，她们很受年轻人的欢迎
正确写法如下:
My favourite singner is Hebe.
She is in the music team.
The team's name is S.H.E.
The team S.H.E is popular.
(最后一句你想表达的是她们很受欢迎是吧，该这么写)
popular 拼错了
你的书写应该加强
She is in the music team
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