请问下面这段英语作文【自己写的,水平有限】有什么错的语法点吗?包括标点。谢谢了

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~ 这句话I go to bookstore for buying a book that called How To Improve Your Writing Skill.
1.bookstore前面要有冠词,可以是泛指的一间书店a bookstore,也可以是特指的一间书店the bookstore
2. go to the bookstore to do sth./ go to the bookstore for sth. 前者表示去那里干嘛,后者表示为了什么而去的
3.如果用that引导定语从句,要that is called sth.
也可以直接用过去分词作后置定语 a book called sth.
4. 貌似一般书名里,the这类的冠词,to 这类的词,可以小写

所以那句子可以改成 Today,I go to the bookstore for a book called How to Improve Your Writing Skill.
或者Today,I go to a bookstore to buy a book that is called How to Improve Your Writing Skill.

这句 My writing skill is too terrible.So,I want to improve my writing skill as soon as quickly.
1.前面提到了my writing skill,后面可以用it来代替,看上去简练点
2.直接用so连接两句完整的话使它们变成一个句子也行,My writing skill is too terrible, so I want to improve it.........

另起一句话也行My writing skill is too terrible.So I want to improve .......
虽然so后面加逗号的情况有见过,不过以前我老师说最好不要加,直接so I want to......

3.貌似没有as soon as quickly的,要么就as soon as possible. 要么就 as quickly as possible

这句Only in this way can I progress rapidly in the future.
progress也有动词前进的意思,这句子应该是对的,个人觉得Only in this way can I make progress rapidly in the future. 稍微好一点,毕竟make progress比较常见

这句But still,remembering that we all have difficulties to overcome.I
直接用remember that,用动词原形,就类似于祈使句那样,叫别人做什么

4.这句I believe that I can do everything what I can.
everything 作为先行词,引导词要用that
I believe that I can do everything that I can do.


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