(英语作文)写一篇作文,描述一下你以前和现在的变化.词数在50左右

(英语作文)写一篇作文,描述一下你以前和现在的变化.词数在50左右？~

作文如下：
i can't believe it's my senior year of high school. so much has change in the pass couple of years for me and for the school. i remember the first day i walked into this school the front gate was open wide but now there is more security guards out.
译文：
我不敢相信这是我高中的最后一年。在过去的几年里，我和学校都发生了很大的变化。我记得我第一天走进这所学校时，大门是敞开的，但现在外面有更多的保安。

英文作文技巧：

1、一句话用不同的句式来表达
为了加强同学们对语法知识在写作中的灵活应用。
2、写主题句
主题句是确保不跑题的前提，只有不跑题才有可得及格分。写主题句嘴保险的方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。
3、问题阐述
适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观地反映事实。

写作思路：通过现在与过去的对比，描述出不同的地方。
短文如下：
I was short and slim three years ago．

三年前我又矮又瘦。

Now I＇m tall and strong．

现在我又高又壮。

I was not allowed to go outside to meet people before．

我以前不允许出去见别人。


Now I can go to my friends＇ party by myself．

现在我可以自己去参加朋友的聚会了。

I＇m more independent now．

我现在更独立了。

描述如下：

i can't believe it's my senior year of high school. so much has change in the pass couple of years for me and for the school. i remember the first day i walked into this school the front gate was open wide but now there is more security guards out.

我不敢相信这是我高中的最后一年。在过去的几年里，我和学校都发生了很大的变化。我记得我第一天走进这所学校时，大门是敞开的，但现在外面有更多的保安。

基本要求

英文书写应符合书写规范，英文字母要写清楚、写整齐、写美观，字母的大小和字母之间的距离要匀称。书写应做到字形秀丽漂亮，通篇匀称和谐。

写英文字母要掌握正确笔顺。如小写字母i ，应该先写下面的部分，然后再打点。有的学生却按写汉字的习惯从上到下写，写快了，就会把点和下面的竖笔连在一起，显得十分别扭。

字形t应为两笔。不少人却将两笔合成一笔，看上去不像t，倒像l或是e，难以辨认。另外，把r写成v，把q写成把g，把k写成h等等，都是中学生书写中常见的毛病。

不少人在四线三格的练习纸上书写尚有规矩，能按字母的占格、高低和大小要求书写，但在白纸或横线纸上书写，却显得十分幼稚拙劣。字母或跳上跳下，或一律写成同一高度，占上中两格的字母与占中下两格的字母完全没有高低之别。这些现象都要防止。

另外，书写时还要注意词与词之间要保持一定的距离，不能紧靠在一起。字母之间的连写也应该按照习惯，不能随意乱来。

Hello, everybody.I'm Liu Mou.Wang Yu, this way.I just came by to check it out.I'm looking for a composition.And it's an English composition.It's about the change from the original and my present.

The spears girls birthday surprise me stare Oh my!Sunny B.Sonny.You still use dear miss Mikey.eYes, I am sure be.Sir paul's Nick.

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