求翻译几句话，好的会追加50分

求高手翻译几句话~好的追加50分！！急在线等！谢谢！！~

The reason: The thing that a hospital offers is the rehabilitation of the patients' health condition, which is invisible that it fails to measure the serving quality by using detection facilities. There are four ways that can be taken to control the matters that affect the process of medical service: 1.To construct a whole set of quality control system. 2. To control all the factors and taches that could affect the serving quality. 3. To definitude and attach importance on the position responsibilities of all crew members and departments. 4. To quantitize the vocation indexes of all the employees. Under the improvements above-mentioned, a hospital can definitely reassure to offer passable services to the patients, and subsequently increase the satisfaction index of the patients and reduce the chance of medical incidents.
The medical treatment quality is the lifeline of a hospital, which embodies the serving tenet of a hospital. And it is where the shoe pinches are for a hospital to exist and develop. The medical treatment quality management is the radical measure to ensure and improve the medical treatment quality and the core segment of the hospital management. It is also a concrete embodiment of the multi-targets management standard of hospital and a significant symbol to evaluate the management standard of a hospital. Therefore, in order to advance the core competence of a hospital, the medical treatment quality management must be intensified.


吁……终于翻完了，纯手工，力求完美。给你找了很多专业词汇（如核心竞争力应为core competence，上面两个翻译的不对），所用的语法也很地道。
提一点：你的中文中有几处是巨长的名词叠加，这样的情况若硬翻的话（像上面的那个），英文看着极为weird，因为在英语中若要说明某个观点，提出某种情况的几个改进方法时，是要依次列举出来的，这样才有条理。你这两段话是要面试的时候说么？若是，把我写的1234换成first of all, secondly, the last but not least等即可。
上面二位翻译的很简劣，让native speaker看了一定会晕的。而且有很多错误，用词也不地道。（如最后一句复制到word里，会出现fragment的情况）LZ不信可找个外教啥的，让他看看两篇翻译对比一下。
我不敢说我的是翻译的最好的，但起码比上面二位强多了。
有问题再问，恭候LZ检验。打字打死我了……

Good afternoon,every examiners. I am pleased to be able to sit here and take the exam. My name is MARK, I'm 16 years old, my hometown is in Anhui Province. I am studying in Shanghai Southwest Engineering School now. The school I'm studiying in a secondary school and my major is industrial and civil construction (civil engineering). I am cheerful, wide range of interests. Usually, I likes to play basketball, play computer, listen to music and so on. I am a happy boy.
My family is composed of three members, my father, my mother and me. My father is a businessman and my mother also. Our family is very happy, there is laughter every day.
I wants to be a architect in the future, and so that I can build many beautiful and large houses, this is my dream. Although my English standard is not high, but I will work hard to learn it. I think this is a challenge .only by defeating myself can Istand on this society. This is my self-introduction, wish all of you a happy afternoon Thank you!

英：I have read this article, the feeling great. Actor think the book has an ideal of competent wife. Washing clothes, cooking, children and other things to deal with this talented wife. On the one hand, reflects the life of a man on demand, on the one hand, and modern and also embodies the idea of social disharmony. While each Men are eager to have a beautiful and capable wife, but life should not be everything to them to do. Such as washing clothes, cooking, such as job rotation can be 2 individuals to do. The actor but all these things to the woman, in typical male chauvinism and inequality between men and women. I think in today's society should be fully respected the rights of women. U.S. to help each other towards a better life together.
法：J'ai lu cet article, l'impression grand. Acteur pense que le livre a un idéal de femme compétentes. Lave-linge, cuisine, enfants et autres choses pour faire face à cette talentueuse femme. D'une part, reflète la vie d'un homme à la demande, d'une part, et moderne, et incarne également l'idée de la discorde sociale. Bien que chaque hommes sont désireux d'avoir une femme belle et capable, mais la vie ne doit pas être tout à eux de le faire. Telles que la lessive, la cuisine, tels que la rotation des tâches peut être 2 personnes pour le faire. L'acteur, mais toutes ces choses à la femme, dans typique machisme et l'inégalité entre les hommes et les femmes. Je pense que dans la société d'aujourd'hui doivent être pleinement respectés les droits des femmes. États-Unis pour aider les uns les autres pour une meilleure vie commune.
日：この才能のある妻に対処するため、他のものを洗濯。一方で、一方で、需要を反映し、现代人の生活や社会的不协和のアイデアを具体化。各男子は美しい妻と能力があるに热心だが、彼らの生活に、あらゆることをしてはならない。ジョブローテーションなどを行うことができるには2人の服、料理、洗濯など。その俳优が、典型的な男性优越主义と男女间の不平等の女性にこれらすべてのものを、 。今日の社会の中で完全に女性の権利が尊重されるべきだと思う。米国一绪にそこの才能のある妻に対処するため、他のものを洗濯。一方で、一方で、需要を反映し、现代人の生活や社会的不协和のアイデアを具体化。各男子は美しい妻と能力があるに热心だが、彼らの生活に、あらゆることをしてはならない。ジョブローテーションなどを行うことができるには2人の服、料理、洗濯など。その俳优が、典型的な男性优越主义と男女间の不平等の女性にこれらすべてのものを、 。今日の社会の中で完全に女性の権利が尊重されるべきだと思う。米国一绪にそれぞれがより良い生活に向け、他のに役立ちます。れぞれがより良い生活に向け、他のに役立ちます。
中：繁体：我读了这篇文章后，感触很大。书中的男主角想有一个理想中的能干的妻子。洗衣服，做饭，带孩子等事都交给这个能干的妻子处理。一方面体现了一个男人对生活的需求，一方面也体现了与现代社会不和谐的思想。虽然每个男人都渴望有一个漂亮能干的妻子，但是不应该把生活中所有的事情都交给她们做。比如洗衣服，做饭等工作是可以2个人轮流做。而男主角却把这些事情全部推给女人，体现了典型的大男子主义和男女的不平等。我想当今社会应该充分尊重女性的权利。大家相互帮助，一起走向更好的生活。

I have a strong feeling after reading this book.The hero in the book is dreaming of having an ideal and competent wife who can handle everything such as doing his laundry ,taking good care of his baby and so on. On one hand ,it shows the requirement a man calls for in his life,on the other hand ,we can see a kind of idea that is not harmonious with morden society.Even though every man desires to have a beautiful and competent wife ,men should not shift everything onto women.Take doing laundry and cooking for example,they are works which couples can do in turns.But the hero wants to leave everything to his wife to handle,we can see his male dorminated thought and the unequality between men and women.From where I stand,our society should respect momen's right more.We can lead a better life only if we help each other.
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After I read this article, the feelings are very big. In the book actor wants to have in an ideal competent wife. Does laundry, prepares food, has matters and so on child to give this competent wife processing. On the one hand has manifested a man to the life demand, on the one hand has also manifested with the modern society not harmonious thought. Although each men longed for that has an attractive competent wife, but should not all matters give the life in they to do. For instance does laundry, prepares food and so on work is may 2 individuals do in turn. But the actor actually completely pushes these matters for the woman, has manifested the model androcentrism and the men and women is not equal. I want the society to respect the feminine right fully now. Everybody helps mutually, together trend good life.

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