各位大虾请赐教！！！为本人翻译的英文挑错配中文对照（仅一段）在线等

各位大虾请赐教！！！为本人翻译的英文挑错配中文对照（仅一段）在线等~

is getting more and more rich in theory 这里改成has been greatly enriched theoretically会正式一点

from Weber's...Porter.这里可以这样写:during the development of Weber's...(一样)...Hoover's optimal scale of industral clustering theory to THE VERY RECENT CONCEPT OF "industrial clusters" BY Porter.

This paper--->The following essay

这后面改成tries to promote the measures of industral clustering that can faciliate the sustainable development of forestry industries on the basis of the discussions over both the occurrence of industrial clustering and the economic impact of the clustering onfoetry industries.

后面几乎是大改了,保证流畅与正式.有一个问题在于里面那些专业理论词汇我是没什么把握的所以就萧规曹随了..

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你英语那段的中文翻译

摘要：目的探讨相关因素的妊娠结局的影响乙型肝炎病毒infection.methods本研究旨在前瞻性分析临床资料200例妊娠合并乙型肝炎病毒感染与200例正常妊娠结果（ 1 ） HBV感染合并肝功能异常组遭受发病率最高的并发症（早产，胎膜早破，产后出血，妊娠高血压） ，无症状携带者的HBsAg了第二位，正常妊娠组的最低，差异显着（ P “ 0.05 ） 。 （ 2 ）有一个显着的统计学差异肝功能异常组与其他两组的发病率新生儿异常（死产，低出生体重，新生儿窒息等） ，虽然没有显着性差异其他两组（ P “ 0.05 ） 。结论妊娠合并HBV感染者很可能遭受的并发症，如早产，胎膜早破，产后出血，妊娠高血压等特别是在肝功能异常组。新生儿的发病率异常不仅关系到肝功能异常。

你中文那段的英文翻译

Abstract: Objective: pregnancy with hepatitis B virus (HBV) infection influence the outcome of pregnancy-related factors. Methods: Retrospective analysis of 200 cases of pregnancy compared HBV-infected persons and the existence of 200 cases of normal maternal clinical data. Results: (1) complications (premature labor, premature rupture of membranes, postpartum hemorrhage, pregnancy-induced hypertension) the incidence of abnormal liver function to the incidence rate is highest, followed by asymptomatic HBV infection group, the lowest normal pregnancy group, the difference There was a significant (P 0.05). Conclusion: HBV infection in pregnancy, high incidence of premature labor, premature rupture of membranes, postpartum hemorrhage, complications such as pregnancy-induced hypertension, abnormal liver function of these pregnancy complications have a significant effect on the incidence of neonatal abnormal liver function only abnormalities.

不包括"妊娠合并乙型肝炎病毒感染对妊娠结局影响的研究
A probe into the impact of hepatitis B virus infection on the pregnancy outcome"

帮你重新翻译了下(你的也不错)
Abstract：
Objective: To study the relevant factors of the pregnancy outcome affected by hepatitis B virus infection.
Method: The study is designed to analyse and compare clinical data of the 200 hepatitis B virus infectors cases and 200 normal cases in their pregnancy period.
a. The incidence rate of complications (premature labor, premature rupture of membranes, postpartum haemorrhage, pregnancy-induced hypertension) is highest in abnormal liver function group with HBV infection, lower is the symptomatic carriers group with HBV infection, the lowest is normal pregnancy group. And their difference is significant (P<0.05).
b. There is remarkable meaning to compare the difference of incidence rate of neonatal abnormalities (stillbirth, low birth weight, neonatal asphyxia, etc.) between abnormal liver function group and other two groups (P<0.05). And there is no significant meaning to compare symptomatic carriers group with HBV infection and normal pregnancy group (P>0.05).
Conclusion: It is easy to have complications such as premature labor, premature rupture of membranes, postpartum haemorrhage, pregnancy-induced hypertension, etc. for those pregnancy with HBV infection; abnormal liver function has significant effect on the incidence of complications; the incidence of neonatal abnormalities only related to abnormal liver function.
不过对于之后一句话“新生儿异常发生率仅与肝功能异常有关”，本人有疑问，新生儿异常发生率肯定与其他也有关系，你只能说“新生儿异常发生率与肝功能异常有很大关系”。
我只在原来译文的基础上对一些标点和语法修改了一下，译文其实是没有什么大问题的。在英语中，编号一般用罗马字母或26个字母表示，不用中文的（一），（1）之类。

你的翻译不错。基本没有什么可以改动的。只是把句子中的过去式全部改成一般现在时就可以了。另外个别单词拼写错误。比如：liable to suffered 应该是suffer。other two groups in The incidence： the 。

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