请教英文翻译方面的问题，希望资深权威人士不吝赐教，万分感谢了！

请教一简短的英文翻译，谢谢您的不吝赐教！~

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你好，
——第一句
“Every time I see him, he's been reading” 这句话是对的，其实是一种时态的混搭，“i see him " 与 " read" 可以说不是同时发生
时态混搭说明：
Every time I see him, he's reading 从句一般(现在)时+主句一般(进行)时
Every time I see him, he's been reading 从句一般(现在)时+主句现在(完成)时
不是同时发生：
Every time I see him, he's been reading
（每当我看见他，他都正在读书，而且已经读了有一段时间了）
与“Every time I see him, he's reading”相比，原句主句多用了完成时，表示“read”这个动作在“i see him”之前就已经持续了一段时间，楼主可以参考翻译“而且已经读了有一段时间了”来理解。

——第二句
Every time I have seen him, he's been reading
对错我不知道，但如果楼主只是理解是否see与read两动作同时进行，那答案是yes
原因：这句话不是时态混搭：
Every time I see him, he's reading 从句一般(现在)时+主句一般(进行)时
Every time I have seen him, he's been reading 从句(现在)完成时+主句(现在)完成(进行)时
如果楼主这样对比，其实可以很容易看出两动作是同时进行的

另外：Every time I see him, he's been reading.
Every time I have seen him, he's been reading.
这两句话实际英语交流中根本不会出现，希望楼主不要纠结于此。

以上纯属个人意见，希望对楼主有所帮助 ^ ^

不正确的地方不止两处.

Starting an enterprise could solve not only the employment problem of the graduates themselves, but could also create more jobs and accelerate technological innovation and the commericalization of scentific reserach, thereby generating more societal wealth, promoting social economic development, and acheiving a postive synergy between economic and employment growth.

没有办法告诉你这么翻译的原因, 但是绝对正确.

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By helping college graduates to start their own business, not only can it solve their employment problem, but it also help in creating more jobs, promoting technology innovation and commercializing laboratory achievements. As a result, it will create more social wealth, push forward social economic development and achieve positive interaction between economic development and employment expansion.

Are you kidding me?! "By helping college graduates to start their own business, not only can it solve their employment problem...." Who the heck is "it" that both helps graduates and solves the employment problem? God? That sentence does not correctly identify the subject noun; whereas "Starting an enterprise", as written by the original author, is a gerund that properly serves as the subject noun. It's okay to be wrong, but it's less okay to correct others and be wrong.

句子本身中英文不能直接翻译。英文一般不会使用无主语巨子，除非前后文联系非常紧密。
not only ... but also 一般用在句头，而且动词要重复用。Bring about 不是一个常用短语，最好不要用。Thus是很强烈直接的因果关系联结，例如我吃了饭所以饱了一类的关系。不适合用在这里。
By helping college graduates to start their own business, not only can it solve their employment problem, but it also help in creating more jobs, promoting technology innovation and commercializing laboratory achievements. As a result, it will create more social wealth, push forward social economic development and achieve positive interaction between economic development and employment expansion.

Starting an enterprise can not only solve the employment problem of the graduates themselves, but also create more jobs (and) promote technology innovation and (the commercialization of) laboratory achievements, (and as a result) create social wealth, push forward social economic development, (and) bring about positive interaction of economic development and employment expansion.

并列动词没问题，但是并列的最后一项和倒数第二项之间要有连词and。
我把thus改成了as a result，更清楚一点。
我还把你的“conversion”改成了“commercialization”，更符合语义。

更好的改法是断成两句：在“achievement” 后面改逗号为句号。另起一句话写，As a result， it create。。。

Starting an enterprise can not only solve the employment problem of the graduates themselves, but also create more jobs, promote technology innovation and laboratory achievements conversion, thus create more social wealth, push forward social economic development, bring about positive interaction of economic development and employment expansion.
我的建议是 1.but also后面是可以加一个并列动词的，create正确 promote最好改成promoting或用像楼上说的，改做and+promote
2.thus后用creating，pushing，bringing
3. 我个人认为conversion可以用，不过最好再加个动词 accelerate the conversion of laboratorial achievements （不好用laboratory）

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