英语短文改错~~帮忙

英语短文改错，请学霸帮忙～~

第一行 anybody 改为everybody第二行 must后面加be or改为and第三行 feeling改为feel第四行 at去掉第五行 that改为which第七行 to改为with patient改为patiently第八行 much改为more第九行 his改为their共十处错误。提高的办法很简单，第一背短语，第二掌握语法。凡是让你放弃语法的学习方法都是在坑你，除非你只想学几句口语。

1、This is my first time to write an English e- mail.
is→was
2、I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment。
before→ago
3、After the school I ran to but it
删除the，but→buy
4、So far I bought two issues
bought→has bought
5、 I like every editor in you magazine
in→of
6、Learning with them always make me happy
make→makes
7、Next month I will challenge me to read an advanced magazine
me →myself
8、So I will also buy your magazine, read two magazines at the same time
read→reading
9、I think this will help me ger through my spare time meanful.
meanful→meaningful
10、Best wish to all of you.
wish→wishes

Last weeked (weekend)I was interview Professor Wang ,an eye-doctor （这种结构一般是：名词+ed-名词，但这里要表达什么意思，一只眼？近视眼（short sighted doctor））.
谁接待谁？
批语：I was interviewed by Professor Wang(王教授接待了我)； I interviewed Professor Wang （我接待了王教授）
The theme was about the problem of our country's students have short-sighredness.
批语：名词所有格一般用于有生命的名词或表示度量的名词，所以our country's students，应该用the students in/of our country.
The date （时代？日期？约会？怎么表明呢！）shows that （advanced to去掉） 50% students have short-sighredness,
and the date is situate the first os the world.
批语：此句不通。
1.that从句中的主语不能是过去分词；
2.students have short-sighredness“学生有近视”概念模糊，大概说想说students have short-sighted学生是近视的（系表结构）
3. the date is situate the first os the world.搞不明白表达什么意思。

Professor Wang said that it was complicated to explaining the cause about this.
批语：it was complicated to explaining中it 是形式主语，后置的主语可以是补定式、动名词或从句，你这里四不像，既非不定式，也非动名词。
In this world have no medicine to cure short-sighredness,
批语：动词have没有主语，介词短语In this world不能作主语，可以用there is no medicine to cure short-sights in this world,
so specialise suggesed students don't excessive (形容词不可做use的状语，加ly改为副词)ues of eyes ,and do more outside-sports.
批语：
1. suggest的宾语从句要用虚拟语气: students (should可省略) not excessively use theit eyes。
2. use of ... use的词性转变成名词，但这里需要动词。
the special tips, （什么意思？）
the sitting posture and how to use the pencil was in connection with short-sighredness.
注意英语近视的不同概念：（你都拼写错了）
short sighted 近视的，形容词；
short sight 近视眼，具体名词；
short sightedness由形容词转化而来的名词，具有近视特征的概念，抽象名词。

Last weeked I interviewed Professor Wang ,an eye-doctor .
The theme was the problem that our country's students have short-sighredness.
The date shows that advancing to 50% students have short-sighredness,
and the date situates the first os the world.
Professor Wang said that it was complicated to explain the cause of this.
In this world having no medicine cures short-sighredness,
so specialist suggesed students not excessively using eyes ,and do more outside-sports.
the special tips,
the sitting posture and how to use the pencil connect with short-sighredness.

interview改为interviewed
students改为student

interview加ing

At
present,
playing
computer
games
is
becoming
more
and
more
popular
with
people,especially
with
students：Taking
Tom
and
Mike
for
example.
Every
day
after
(the)
school,they
go
to
the
computer
bar
to
play
games
till
late
at
night,and
they
often
have
a
competition
to
see
who
wins
more
scores.
Once,Tom
didn't
go
home
until
eleven
o'clock
at
night.
When
he
got
home,he
told
his
mother
he
had
(been)
gone
over
his
lessons.Poor
mom!She
believed
him
and
cooked
two
eggs
for
him."Take
more
care
of
yourself
as
you
work
too
hard
my
dear
son."She
said.
Tom's
face
turned
red
at
his
mother's
praise.Later
he
made
his
mind
(to)
work
really
hard.

---

五台县13998863229： 一篇英语短文改错,请帮忙改一下(10处错误)One afternoon becasue Chaplie was sitting togeter with his friends and talking ,a fly flew into a room and kept ... - ？
真何亚甲：[答案] One afternoon 【when】Chaplie was sitting together with his friends and talking ,a fly flew into 【the】 room and kept flying around ChPalie's head.Chaplie waved his hands to drive it away,but the fly soon 【came】 back 【again删除】.For once it ...

五台县13998863229： 帮忙做一道英语短文改错题Quite a few of students visit net bars frequently.1._________They went there mainly to play games.Some of 2._________them ... - ？
真何亚甲：[答案] 1 去掉of 2 went→go 3 去掉第一个the(我不确定) 4 in→on 5 healthy→health 6 is后加not 7 us→we 8 work→working 9 knowledges→knowledge 10 √ 【仅供参考】

五台县13998863229： 英语短文改错,帮帮忙 - ？
真何亚甲： woman--womenin-atmuch \broken-breakingthat\is^professor --a high--highermore-lessplan-plansof \

五台县13998863229： 一个简单的英语短文改错,请英语大手帮忙,急I'm happy to write to you for the first time.You were introduced to myself by Mr johnson,my foreign teather.... - ？
真何亚甲：[答案] 按序myself→mebecause of→becausewanted→wantgood friend→good friendsstudent of→a student ofwould be→will bespecially→especiallyDid you→Do youinteresting→interestedhis→their

五台县13998863229： 英语短文改错,帮忙做一下,急!十处错误.？
真何亚甲： Many people have a best friend with which(whom) they can share everything.My best ... math and I teach him English.He is very(so) reliable,but(that) I trust him and we shared(...

五台县13998863229： 英语,短文改错,各位英语大能帮帮忙啊 - ？
真何亚甲： 第一行 but改成and 第二行 his改成my 第三行 what删掉 第四行 the删掉 第五行 On改成In 第七行 sport改成sports 第七行 happy改成happily 第七行 went改成go 第八行having前面加After 第八行 while前面加a

五台县13998863229： 英语短文改错.帮帮忙,快点啊! - ？
真何亚甲： Do you often stay up late?If you do ,well, I have to tell you that it is not good to do it .A week ago,I stayed up vrey late ,reading a very interesting book.The book w...

五台县13998863229： 一道英语短文改错题``请大家帮忙``下面短文每一行有都有可能有错误``如果没有错误请打勾`有多余词语的删掉,缺少成分的加入,用错词的做改正.Most of ... - ？
真何亚甲：[答案] 1、most of (the)large cities 2、去掉a 3、正确 4、street's 5、去掉of 6、And--But 7、first--firstly 8、about--out 9、grew--grow 10、at--on

五台县13998863229： 英语短文改错,来帮帮忙? - ？
真何亚甲： A public house which was recently bought by Mr.Ian Thompson is up for sale. Mr.Thompson is going to sell it because it is haunted. He told me that he could not go to sleep one night because he heard a strange noise coming from the bar. The next ...

五台县13998863229： 英语短文改错!求人帮解答!!! - ？
真何亚甲： 1, was happened--happened2, the bus stop--a bus stop3, waiting--waiting for4, arrives--arrived5, look--looking6, unfortunate--加ly7,front doors--front door8, He--She9, a driver--the driver10, blaming--blame