大家帮我看看我的英文简历，看看哪里写的有问题!!!
日期最好这样表示:Dec. 15th, 1981
改完后的Self Assessment:
After being Software Engineer for two years,I have a better understanding on computer Industry. During the two years,I learned a lot of IT skills and good abilities, including Logistic Analysis and Expression. This builds up my confidence. I knowed that English is very important to a IT person, so I study in my spare time, and now I am an active, innovative man as well as a good team-worker.
最后一句:Thank you for your patience.
没有什么大的问题了。.:)
还算可以吧，就是教育那个栏位太中国话了，你就这样写即可：XXXX.XX to XXXX.XX XXX大学 XXX学位，即可！
1.2005/07--2005/09 Xinchi Technology Co., Ltd
Card Game Group Software Engineer Intern
Responsible of card games development (为responsible for C game development：负责纸牌游戏开发)
2.
Responsibility:
Design of the Architecture, realization of functions and integration test.（不明白你要表达的意思。是不是讲主体设计，实现其功能并完成其综合测试。如是，Main design work（主要设计工作）比较好）
3.
Operating System:
Familiar with MINIX kernel; Fluent user of LINUX/UNIX. （Fluent user ？Fluent表流离、流畅地说、讲，看你也可算是牛人一个，用Proficiency in LINUX/UNIX 吧，精通LINUX/UNIX)
4.
Rich knowledge and experience in database theory and standard SQL; Skillful in SQL Server and familiar with Oracle. （有技巧的有经验的不用SKILLFUL，用experienced in SQL Server and familiar with Oracle.能表现你有丰富的实践经验，而非理论而已。)
5.
Skillful in reading and writing professional material，having the ability of listening, speaking.英语不好就讲practical skills in english writing and reading, fine in professional material, good in listening and speaking.
英语好就讲一句EXCELLENT in english,然后用你的口水让他明白什么叫EXCELLENT。
简历写的不错，要是本人写的就很不错了，一般英语不是问题了。
最后讲一句，牛！真牛！
Personal Information
Name: Gender: Male
Date of Birth: Nov, 1981 Degree: M.E.
Major: Applied Computer Science Research Area: Data mining
Address: 17-415, Nankai University, Tianjin, P.R.China
Mobile:
E-mail:
Objective :
To obtain a challenging position as a software engineer with an emphasis in software design and development.
Self Assessment:
Self-motivated; Team work spirit; High responsibility and attribution; Hard working, cooperative; Respond well under high pressure; Modest and easy-going.
Education Background:
2004/09--Present : Nankai University Computer Application Master
2000/09--2004/07 : Xiamen University Environmental Science Bachelor
Working Experience:
2005/09--2006/09 Yield Dynamics, Inc.
Metadata Group Senior Software Engineer Full-time
Enhanced and maintained the Genesis software.
Achievements: Developing while maintaining. Quickly fixed bugs and successfully completed the complex merging enhancements; Urge forwarded the File Base project.
2005/07--2005/09 Xinchi Technology Co., Ltd
As a Card Game Group Software Engineer Intern.
Responsible for card games development
Achievements: Successfully developed a card game named Chudadi.
Projects Experience
2006/05--2006/09 File Base Server
Project Description:
Filebase is a file database which stores, retrieves and manages files. Ins and outs of files through Filebase server are dependent of file attributes. To speed up the retrieve, several indexes are used.
Responsibility:
Participated in the design of framework; Completed a cross-platform thread library and a dynamic thread pool. In addition, completed a B+ tree index and found out the best way to store it.
2005/05--2005/09?Chudadi Online Card Game
Project Description:
To design one card game based on network for 263 Corporation.
Responsibility:
Design of the Architecture, realization of functions and integration test.
2005/03--2005/05 MIS of Zepu, Inc.
Project Description:
To enable Zepu to meet its goals and business challenges.
Responsibility:
Design of the database tables to meet BCNF, realization of Stored Procedures, development of the client.
2004/10--2004/11 Data Mining of the Credit Card Dataset
Project Description:
To analyze the dataset in order to find out valuable potential information by using data mining algorithms.
Responsibility:
Realized Apriori algorithm, and successfully searched out many potential relation information.
下面还有，呵呵！！！！
问题补充：Professional Skills
Programming Languages:
Rich developing experience in Standard C/C++; Profound understanding on object-oriented and generic programming theory; Familiar with design patterns; Expert in multi-threads programming; Skillful of cross-platform developing; Rich Experience in C/C++ programming under Linux/UNIX. Fluent user of make, gcc/g++, gdb; Experience in writing Makefile; Some experience in C# and JAVA.
Operating System:
Familiar with MINIX kernel; Fluent user of LINUX/UNIX.
Database:
Rich knowledge and experience in database theory and standard SQL; Skillful in SQL Server and familiar with Oracle.
Network Technology:
Systematically studied network technology; Familiar with TCP/IP, experience in Network Programming.
Others:
Knowledgeable at mathematics; and sldo knowledgeable at parallel programming.
Language Abilities
English: 2001/06 CET-4, 2002/06 CET-6
Skillful in reading and writing professional material.good ability of listening and spoken
如果要是去外企,一些对于外国人来讲的隐私信息可以不要的,当然,现在国人也跟风了.
Objective
To obtain a challenging position as a software engineer with an emphasis in software design and development.
~~emphasis on
Self Assessment
Self-motivated; Team work spirit; High liability and attribution; Hard working, cooperative; Respond well under great pressure; Modest and friendly.
Education
2004/09--Present Nankai University Computer Application Master
~~~~~~~~~~专业和你上面的不一致啊，
2000/09--2004/07 Xiamen University Environmental Science Bachelor
～～～～学校，专业，学位之间是不是应该用分号隔开啊
Work Experience
2005/09--2006/09 Yield Dynamics, Inc.
Metadata Group Senior Software Engineer Full-time
Enhanced and maintained the Genesis software.
Achievements: Developing while maintaining. Quickly fixed bugs and successfully completed the complex merging enhancements; Urge forwarded the File Base project.
2005/07--2005/09 Xinchi Technology Co., Ltd
Card Game Group Software Engineer Intern
Responsible of card games development
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~for
Achievements: Successfully developed a card game named Chudadi.
～～～～～～～～developing a card game named chudadi successfully
大家请帮我看看这段英文~~谢谢大家了~~
My favorite example of unexpected utility is dinosaur paleontology.我最喜欢的意外的学科例子就是恐龙生物学。1. unexpected 这里是动词过去式做定语，表示“意外的”。用一个完整的定语从句来表达就是...utility that is unexpected...What could be more useless than studying these extinct giants？
能不能帮我看看我提问的那几句英文怎么翻译?
Don’t you believe me? 你不相信我?(表惊讶)Are you not coming? 你不来吗?(表怀疑)回答一般疑问句除用yes和no外，也可用certainly，probably，perhaps，of course，all right，with pleasure等代替yes，用never，no at all等代替no。如：—Can you help me? 你能知帮个忙吗?—Certainly. 当然...
能帮我看看自己翻译的英文对不对吗?谢谢!
1. First of all, we welcome the host－ @@debut!=> Let's welcome the MC:XXX 2. "Hello everyone ~ I'm a host @@, and he is the second special host Mr. Meow ，and the special guest Miss Google “=> "Hello everyone! I'm your MC XX, and this is your special ...
帮我看看英文作文
to face the problems. You often talk with me when I'm in trouble ,but sometimes you are too strict to me .I know you want me to do better. Thanks again for all what you have done for me.Yours...我重新帮你改了一下，你对照原文看一下，错的很多，大小写也要注意！
请大家帮我翻译成英文
My dear,I like you so much.I like your figure in the court,your charming smile,your manner towards others. I donnot know whether you treat me well is because you also like me or you are kind-hearted, but I am willing to waiting for you quietly, paying out for you ...
帮我看看这个英文句子。
这句话的意思是当你到的时候，我已经剪完头发了。注意前面“你到的时候”是已经发生了所以是过去时，又因为剪头发在你到的时间前面，所以是过去的过去即过去完成时。过去完成时的形式是had+动词的过去分词 时态有16种、一般现在时 I have my hair cut。一般过去时 I had my hair cut.一般将来时...
大家帮我看看我的狗狗是什么品种
中华田园犬。简称： 土狗 英文名： chinese rural dog 类型： 中型犬 分类： 看家犬 伴侣犬 枪猎犬 【性 格】性格比较温顺，对主人绝对忠诚，归家性能好，记忆力强。不容易主动攻击人类，可以群居，地域性强，容易饲养，忠诚度高，不易生皮肤病，广泛用与农村的看家护院和早期的狩猎。
...银渐层 ,英文名叫什么?大家也顺便帮我看看我的猫品相如何???_百度...
我一般都给宠物起食物名，豆腐花
各位帮我看看这几句英文。我找的结构对不对?
首先楼主要知道主谓宾是分别是什么词性，主语和宾语都是名词，谓语是动词。英语句子有两大结构：主谓宾，主系表。系动词是is,are,am之类的词，表语是形容词。don't want才是真正的谓语 don't是谓语助词（也叫助动词）to know\/to hear是宾语 宾语不能是动词和形容词 必须是名词 <'to'+动词>可看...
想去加拿大,大家帮我看看我的情况~~
你问了几个问题，我来总结一下。1) 贷款问题： 你不能贷款。 贷款是给永久居民和公民的。 外籍学生是不能贷款的。2）国外有亲属对你有什么帮助？ 国外的亲属只能给你经济上个帮助，对于学校是否会录取你没有帮助。3）你是否能申请到比较好一些的大学的博士？ 这个问题得分两方面来说。首先：你需...
晋巧妇宝： 1.2005/07--2005/09 Xinchi Technology Co., Ltd Card Game Group Software Engineer Intern Responsible of card games development (为responsible for C game development:负责纸牌游戏开发)2.Responsibility: Design of the Architecture, ...
碌曲县18455164838： 帮忙看下我的英文简历 - ？
晋巧妇宝： 格式方面我觉得你还可以去网上找一些范例看看,因为你不是用word编辑的,所以有些地方该居中分栏什么的,还有待商榷.education方面,你可以简短的介绍一下你的专业性质,因为如果是我,我就对你的专业不了解,你仅说自己毕业于那...
碌曲县18455164838： 大家帮我看看我的英文简历 写的有什么不对的地方 - ？
晋巧妇宝： 日期最好这样表示:Dec. 15th, 1981改完后的Self Assessment: After being Software Engineer for two years,I have a better understanding on computer Industry. During the two years,I learned a lot of IT skills and good abilities, including Logistic ...
碌曲县18455164838： 请高手帮我看看我的英文简历!!! - ？
晋巧妇宝： Dear Sir/Madam: My name is Wang manman. I graduated from the Beijing Unit University this year .I am honored to have the opportunity to present my resume to you. (When I am going into the society, for exploiting my talents better, so I recommend...
碌曲县18455164838： 我的英文简历,帮忙检查一下有没有错误,能美化更好,Self Evaluation:I am confident,optimistic and responsible,I have high sense of team spirit and also with... - ？
晋巧妇宝：[答案] i have read your resume very carefully.it is quite correct.i find no misspellings and your sentences organize well.but i find it hasnot been finished maybe.right?you should add something at last.this ...
碌曲县18455164838： 英文简历帮我看看哪里不对 - ？
晋巧妇宝： guys 改成people 较好些 guys 太口语化..后面几段,我就不说了..你这是书面的,跟口语不同,你这个语法问题还是比较多的,应该要注意. 我的想法是,你要些求职信,应该多阐述你的内心,你的爱好以及你在为实现你的目标而正在做出的努力和已取得的成就等等...还原给雇主一个真实的你,一个不一样的你,你最后说你不是很聪明,但是很勤奋.光说一些结论性的东西,给老外讲道理是没用的,拿出东西证明给人家看!
碌曲县18455164838： 请英语好的人帮我看看我翻译的简历对不对? - ？
晋巧妇宝： 计算机水平 -> Computer skill level2006-2007学年下学期 -> School year of 06 - 07, semester two写的应该是:My experience has given me a basic understanding of the Office software. I have also learned to work under great pressure. I am ...
碌曲县18455164838： 有哪位老师帮忙看一下我英文简历那还有问题,急... - ？
晋巧妇宝： 有很多问题啊.我给你改吧.RésuméName: Liu Chun Hua Gender: Male Ethic: Chinese Date of birth: Nov 1990Height: 177 cm Marital status: Unmarried Residence: Hukou, Jiangxi Educational level : Undergraduate Graduate school: Jiujiang ...
碌曲县18455164838： 跪请英文高手看一下我的英文简历,帮忙指正 谢谢 - ？
晋巧妇宝： working in the American company long time assume the office of sales and training manager. 这句话有问题,你是否还在从事这个工作?不是的话不应该用working in.assume你在这里想指的是什么意思?Had good people management and communication skills这句话换成Excellent people management and communication skillsaled in the market many years 这句话不通的还有一些问题啦....不一一指出了
碌曲县18455164838： 请大家帮忙看看,英文简历里的这句话怎么写？
晋巧妇宝： 1“首先,很感谢你花时间来看完我的这份简历”2“希望我能得到在这家店工作的机会”
