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Peking Opera is being introduced to primary and middle school students in an effort to promote the traditional art to the younger generation, Beijing News reported on last Tuesday.
The country's first set of textbooks about Peking Opera was compiled and published by the Beijing Association of Promoting Quintessence of Chinese Culture and People's Education Press in 2015.
The textbooks for optional courses have been put on trial use in junior middle schools in the Fengtai district and will be used in middle schools across the city. The textbooks for primary schools also will be rolled out.
Since 2008, Beijing has promoted a program to provide opera training at dozens of primary schools. Schools apply for funds from the city's education department to hire professional actors and actresses to work with students as young as 6 or 7.
Peking Opera arose during the rule of Emperor Qianlong in the Qing Dynasty (1644-1911). It flourished for decades in China and as its fame spread, it drew audiences in other countries, including the United States and Japan.
Yet over the years, its popularity diminished. While a significant number of people listened to radio productions of Peking Opera before the 1980s, generations born after that pursued pop culture over the traditional arts.
in which food is taken to be eaten somewhere outdoors.我知道你想写一个从句，但是写的是错的。in which是一个用于位置的从句。这句话可以改成picnic is a pleasure trip that we can eat some delicious foods in outdoor。这就是一个定语从句。we should first prepare necessary food
这句话改为We should prepare nessary foods first.食物应该用复数。first不应该用在should后面。mest这个写错了哟，用复数meats。we can buy some fruit from the market,这句话可以在we前面加一个And，水果应该用复数。my friend likes bread so i will buy some too
这句话重复了。but i will buy some breadafter seven o'clock.at this time the bread will be cheaper。这句话写错了，你想写：在七点的时候买面包，因为它便宜。是不是？等你回了，我再给你改这句。把时间标明，是什么时候的七点。picnics are exciting把主谓都改成单数。大概是这样了。
Thank you very much for helping me. I was having a hard time studing my project until you gave a hand to me. You let me have more interested in studying knowledge. You often encourage me to face the problems. You often talk with me when I'm in trouble ,but sometimes you are too strict to me .I know you want me to do better. Thanks again for all what you have done for me.
Yours.....
我重新帮你改了一下，你对照原文看一下，错的很多，大小写也要注意！
Dear teacher
Thank you very much for helping me. I was having a hard time studying my project before you gave a hand to me. You make me have more interest in learning knowledge. You often encourage me to face the problems. You usually talk with me when I'm in trouble .But sometimes you are very strict with me thought I know you want to see me do better. Thanks again for all what you have done for me.
Yours
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dear teacher
thank you very much for helping me. i was having a hard time studing my project until you gave a hand to me. you let me have more interesting(interest) in studying knowledge. you often encourages me to face the problems(difficulty). you often talks with me when i'm in trouble but sometimes you are too strict with(on) me i know you want (me to do better)to see me do better. thanks again for all what you did for me.
i had had[过去完成时] a hard time 【to】[study] my project until you gave a hand to me. you let me have more interest[ed] in studying knowledge. you often encourages me to face the problems. you often talks with me when i'm in trouble but sometimes you are too strict with me [.]i know you want to see me do better. thanks again for all what you did for me.
首先一个错误you often encourages me（YOU是第二人称，把ENCOURAGE后面的S去掉）
第二句可以改成I LEARNED THE PROGRAM WITHIN A VERY HARD TIME UNTIL YOU GAVE ME A HAND.
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