请求英语大师！我写了一封英语信给英语老师…希望能帮我纠正错误…

请求帮助，我英语老师要走了，想为老师写一封英语信，可碍于基础不够，求有心人士手工翻译一下！~

My dear teacher
I've got the sad news that you'll be transferred from our school,which means,you'll leave us soon.But do you know that we feel so frustrated and miss you so much? The more we have is regret and shame.
I'm a transfer student who've got along with you for only several months,but your careness seems limitless!Every time after school,I can go a length of way with you and also have a talk with you.At the beginning I always thought of how long these days would last for. As the final exam would come and you got no idea of my English grades,I kept thinking that if you know my grades,you may lose hope and take no notice of me anymore! When I got the result of the final exam,I felt extremely happy as I got 89 points.To my surprise,you doubted if I didn't do well in my exam. Do you really keep such a high valuation of me in your mind? Then because of the removal of our original English subject representative by accident,you chose me to be the subject representative unexpectedly! You know what I thought at that time? I thought that represtentatives of other subjects are all top students,but you just didn't know I was a paper tiger actually.To tell the truth,It was the 89 points that became my highest grades in English exams.So I became the representative by chance!But now you'll leave,it is so sorry of me not to learn English well,I just hate myself! I've made my mind not to be the representative and I'll tell it to my head teacher tomorrow. I guess that no teachers will make me,who got only 77 points be a representative , except you. My dear teacher,wish you cheerful.Just keep in mind not to find one who only get 77 points to be your representative any more while you're in a new calss.
an English subject representative who got only 77 points

纯手工翻译，希望你喜欢 ：）
希望我的回答能帮助到你O(∩_∩)O哈！有不懂的继续问我噢~

Dear Miss,
My name is ***.





Yours,
***

下面按行：

teacher去掉，有前面的 mrs 即可
how do you do? 是初次见面的问候，这明显不合适。可改为how is everything?
'm 与 have 冲突，去掉 'm ; are --- is
most 前面加 the ; 没有 teacher woman 的说法，自己决定去掉哪个
attractive 为形容词，不能直接放在这个句子中，考虑 和 and 删掉
……
……

算了，我直接在你原文上改了：

Dear Mrs. Huang,

How is everything ? I miss you very much !
I have many teachers now , and I love them all . But my favourate teacher is you (my english teacher). In my eyes , you are the most beautiful woman in the world . I love your sweet smile!

I like your class very much . You often told us interesting stories and played a trick in your class . So I always felt happy in your class .

Thank you for your help me a lot .Whenever I asked you some questions , you would answer me very quickly . You taught me many english points, so my english was nice at that time !

Though you were strict to me sometimes , I knew you loved me so that you did it ! You looked like my mother and gave me a lot love !
But I made you dissappointed. My Entrance examinations results for High Schools were very poor . There are Chinese 121.8 , Maths 128.5 , English 135.3 , 8A1B ( History B,what a pity! ). They were added up to 385.6 . So I was ashamed to see you.

I am studying in the Third High School , and I will work hard at school . Don’t worry about me !

There was a concern in good faith on my front, but I do not cherish it, if God give me a chance, I will tell you:“Dear english teacher , Thank you. I Love You !”

Best wishes and Happy Teachers’ Day !
Love your student , Wuhansen.
2009.9.10

第三行：I’m have many 改为I have,But my favourate teacher are you 改为is you。
第四行：you are most 改为you are the most
第五行：your sweet smile and attractive 改为attraction
第六行谓语建议全部改为过去式，class改为lesson
第八行Thank you for you help me 去掉you 改为helping或者去掉for you
But I disappinted to you 改为But I disappinted you by my poor Mid-Term Examination(期中考，如果是高中入学考试是Entrance examinations for secondary or high schools )result

So I no go to see you with no face .改为So I was so embarrassed that I would not to tell you.

落款 Love your student 改为yoursXXX

..................................................Sept.10, 2009
Dear Mrs.Huang,
How do you do ? I miss you very much !
I have many teachers now , and I love them all . But my favourate teacher is you (my English teacher). In my eyes , you are the most beautiful teacher in the world . I love your sweet and attractive smile!
I like your class very much . You often tell us interesting stories and play a trick in your class . So I always feel happy in your class .
Thank you for helping me a lot .When I ask you some questions, you always answer me very quickly . You teach me about many English things , so my English impoved a lot at that time !
Though you are strict with me sometimes , I know you love me that you do it ! You look like my mother and give me a lot of love !
But I made you disappinted . My Zhongkao’s result is very poor: Chinese 121.8 , Maths 128.5 , English 135.3 , 8A1B ( History B,what a pity! ). Add up 385.6 . So I was ashamed to see you.
I am studying in NO.3 High School , and I will work harder at school . Don’t worry about me !
There was a concern in good faith on my front, but I do not cherish it, if God can give me a chance, I will tell you:“Dear English teacher , Thank you for your hard work . I Love You !”
Best wishes to you!
Happy Teachers’ Day !
Love from yourstudent,
Wu Hansen.
文章太长，不方便给出更改痕迹。I hope you will make great progress in senior high school.

亲爱的Mrs.Huang教师，
你怎么办？我想念你非常！
我现在有很多老师，我爱他们所有人。但我favourate老师，你（我的英语老师） 。在我看来，你是最美丽的女教师的世界。我爱你甜蜜的微笑和有吸引力的！
我喜欢你的阶级非常。你经常告诉我们，有趣的故事和作弄你班上。所以，我总是感到很高兴在你的课堂。
谢谢你帮了我很多。当我问你一些问题，你会回答我非常快。你教我英语的事情很多，所以我的英语水平是最好的时光！
虽然你是严格的，我有时候，我知道你爱我，你这样做！你看起来像我的母亲，给了我很多的爱！
但我disappinted给您。我国Zhongkao的结果是非常糟糕。他们中121.8 ， 128.5数学，英语135.3 ， 8A1B （史乙，真可惜！ ） 。添加了385.6 。所以，我没有去，没有看到你的脸。
我就读于三忠高中，我将努力在学校。不要担心我！
有人开始关注诚意我前面，但我不好好珍惜，如果上帝给我一个机会，我会告诉你： “亲爱的英语老师，谢谢你。我爱你！ “
最良好的祝愿您，
祝教师节快乐！
爱你的学生， Wuhansen 。

文章翻译过来是这样的，对吗？
1、把zhongkao改为secondary school entrance exam （中考）
2、把you are most 改为you are the most
3、把Thank you for you help me去掉for you
4、把class改为lesson
5、把favourate改为favourite
我是这样看！希望能帮助你！

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