麻烦各路高手为小弟检查一下有多少语法错误
Nowadays, it is quite common that college students take up a part time job as tutor . It brings about something good as well as not very good at the same time.
In many families, supporting a child to study at a college is not very easy, most of their family income has to be spent on their children. If a college student could take up a part time job ,it would reduce the economic pressure for his family.
This is the good effect of the college student to take up a part time job as tutor.
And what is the disadvantage to the college student whose main task is study ? it will affect his study to some extent, when he takes up a part time job.
This is the graet disadvantage of taking up a tutor's job.
As far as I am concerned, I think it is good to have a part time job, but I think one should strike a balance between job and study.
表达得不错。不过避免再用很多的同样重复句子，使文章冗长。 前面讲过的不必重复，阅读者自然明白
we should be patient and politely 。politely错误，为副词
don't be so tence when you are in a job interview. tence 错误
(改后)As we all know, the colleges have widely opened their doors. It is a good thing, because there is more chances for young people to get in college, receiving better education.
<But at the same time,the colleges' opening their doors wider bring something bad also.Nowadays,enter a college is more and more easily than before,it means there is more and more college student in the society,being a college student is not means deriving a job.>
But at the same time, it also brings something bad. Nowadays, entering a college is easier than before, and it means that there is more and more college students in the society; therefore, being a college graduates do not guarantee good jobs.
<As the quality of college student rising so fastly,more and more college student can not get a job.
In my opinion, it's no doubt that colleges' opening their doors wider is good for development of society,but people who get a chance of studing in college should work hard to improve his ablity so that he can get a job.>
As the quality of college students get higher and higher, more and more graduates could no longer get jobs.
Im my opinion, there is no doubt that colleges' desicion is good for development of the society, but people who get a chance studying in colleges need to work harder in order to get good jobs.
因为文中很多有重复,或是没必要的语句,这是我的修改,参考一下吧...
As we all konw, the colleges have open their doors wider.This is a good thing.It creates more opportunities for people to study in a college and recieve better education.
However, at the same time,opening their doors wider would bring something bad as well. Nowadays,entering a college is more and more easy than before.It means there is more and more college student in the society,being a college student does not equals to securing a job. As the quality of college student decreases so quickly, more and more college student cannot get a job.
In my opinion, it's no doubt that colleges accepting more students can be good for the development of society, but people who get a chance to study in college should work hard to improve his ability so that he can get a job.
Comment: quite a well written piece for a Chinese citizen, continue to work hard! I have corrected most of your errors. Your main error is that you don't end your sentence correctly. you often puts a coma althought the sentence is already complete. Hope this will enlighten you. Good luck!
bring --brings
enter--entering
it--which
there is --there are
college stu--college students
is not means --does not mean
college student --college students
so fastly--so 删掉 fast
额```很多句子的说话都不正确,就是读起来非常拗口.只是把有语法错误的地方整理出来了
路过， LZ要加油啊！ 我改天有时间了帮你全部改过来， 现在认真上班ING！
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