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a message （saying）that my families 。。。
family 是家庭，families -家庭成员
wouldn't 和 couldm't 不同意思，你这里的语境应该是要couldn't
i'm hoping its coming - 语法没错，但表达不清，都不知道你要说什么
the year before last （后面那个year 不用）
D from college
feel 错 - feel，felt
watch it （while）eating 。。

第二句话可以改成 The answer to this question is always my mother.
usually指的是通常，而always才指一直；然后the应改为my，因为没有说明白，the + n 一般指一个唯一的事物，比如说the Earth 地球
第三句话与第二句有所重复 2,3可以合并为There is no doubt that the most important person in my life is always my mother.
第五句话和第六句话 要记住 help + sb + to do sth
第六句话改成 She helped me to learn how to stand and walk,...

also there is another topic between us.that is love.she has a boyfriend,but she doesn't like him very much.meanwhile,she thinks that her boyfriend doesn't like her much either.she said she once loved a boy during her ages in junior school, and she still likes the boy now.however she is afraid of being with him.she thinks that it is impossible,because the boy has a girlfriend now.i feel sorry for her. she can't choose the very boy she likes.the boy is a classmate of mine in my senior school.he is handsome,a gentlemen with very good characteristics, my good friend.he sat in front of me.we usually had some discussions on math problems.In my memeory,he was very clever on it.he is her good choice, but it is a pity that he has had a girlfriend already.so ...she shouldn't be the third one between them.i also talked to her my love.that's funny.the boy i have loved for 6 years is one of her classmates in her elementary school,who she can't remember very clearly.i told her that i had been waiting for that kind of boy for long.i see it is impossible to be with him,but i am still waiting,not for him ,but for the boy of his type.she asked me what kind of boy he is .i tried to express,but i don't know how to tell.love maybe love only,it couldn't be explained.she said to me:"if you were waiting someone,he might also be waiting for you."i was much affected by her utterance,and sure that i would come across him.there always was a shame in my mind."i am waiting for you",i said in my mind.what about her love.my suggestion was that she was not happy with him,so she should put breaking up at once.love is blind,but it should be clear in our minds.her boyfriend doesn't cherish her.so there is no hesitation to give up.she agreed with me.wish her to come across the boy she really love.the time with her is enjoyable,and i hope we can work in the same place,also we will be best friends forever.it is late now.it is all for today.i will come here tomorrow. C U!.MY qzone!
there is another thing today.my good friend D has arrived at Inner Mongolia.wish her had a good time.it must be a nice journey

容易吗,我
许多谓语动词形式不对
主从句时态搭配不对
过多连续的句子拥有同一主语.它们可以合并成一个.
许多时态不符合上下文
对应内容应该是要离校的大学生.可这些错误在高中也不应该有
请楼下的继续指正.还有很多错误

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