初学英语写日记，求指导~ 每日一篇，有不对的地方帮忙改正一下，谢谢~~
Hi！我看了你的日记，内容很好，只是一些语法读起来有些不顺，［原文］，（我帮你改的）。建议你可以多读一些短故事，不要死背英文书里的句子／语法，因为组成英语句子有几千种方法，建议灵活运用，同时也能增加你对英语的兴趣。
I'm Sally. I worked as a customer service in a software company. [The] (My)
job is so busy every day. I [need] (have) to sit in front of the computer
and reply to my [costomer's] (customer’s) problem [ceaselessly]
(好像没有这个词？建议换成 hourly 小时的). [I don't know this job is good or not] (你说的是“我不知道这份工作好不好”建议换成 I’m not sure if this job
suits me 我不确定这份工作适不适合我) but I hope I can [learn more things] from it （learn what？试举例说明＋学到的好处）.
I usually spend the weekend with
some friends. [We have a lot of activities such as shopping, singing or
travelling.] (I usually spend the weekend shopping with some friends, we also have
other activities such as singing and travelling.) I feel so [frotunate] (fortunate)
[bacause] (because) they are in my side (always by my side).
Whether my work or life I have been trying, and I hope (that) our future will be better.
希望我的回答帮可以帮助你！加油！：）
1、如果你想表达的是为明天的饮食制定了一份计划，那我建议这样表达：So I drew up a plan for my tomorrow's diet. 或So I made a plan for my tomorrow's diet.
“制定一个计划”可用：draw up a plan或make a plan
“明天的饮食”应用：tomorrow's diet，因为如果你把tomorrow放在句末，那前面的时态就应该用将来时（will fix），而不应该用过去式。另外fix主要是修理的意思，用在制定计划不是很合适哦
2、你日记所表达的是明天的计划，所以不应用过去时态，应将Kept改为Keep
2，Because it is the weekend, so I have enough time to do some things that I want to do。
Because 和so不能同时出现在一个句子中，可以改成：Because it is the weekend,I have enough tome to do some things that I want to do.
3.看电影的正确表达：go to the cinema, see a film, watch the movie. see a movie 不正确。
至于that，在那个句子是正确的，属于定语从句。如果要用what的话，最好这么说，Because It is the weekend, I can do what i want to do.这里属于宾语从句。
2012-11-18
Today is weekend, so I have enough time to do some things that I want to do. I got up at 10:00 in the morning. Then I went to see the movie with my friend. In the evening, i enjoyed the dinner with my family. How it is a beautiful day!
because 和so 不能同用，同样用法的还有although 和 but
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