英语作文，你能帮我改一下吗？

~ I have some habbits， some are good， but some are bad. I like reading very much. From reading science books， I get a lot of knowledge. From reading novels， I lose myself in the stories. I like doing sports， too. It helps me keep healthy. Also I never put today\'s work till tomorrow. They are all my good habbits. They help me a lot in my daily life. However， I also have some bad habbits. For example， sometimes I do my homework slowly， and stay up till very late. During meals I prefer meat to vegetables. And sometimes I play computer games too long without having a reat. They are all harmful to my health. From now on I'll try to keep my good habbits， and give up the bad ones. Then I'll live better.我有一些习惯，有些是好的，但有些是坏的。我非常喜欢阅读。从阅读科技书籍，我获得了很多知识。从读小说，我失去了自己的故事。我喜欢做运动，太。它让我保持健康。我也从来没有把今天的工作留到明天。他们都是我的好习惯。他们帮助我很多在我的日常生活。然而，我也有一些坏习惯。例如，我有时做作业很慢，熬夜到很晚。吃饭时我更喜欢肉。有时我玩电脑游戏太久没有休息。他们都对我的健康有害。从现在起，我会尽量保持我的好习惯，放弃坏习惯。然后我会活得更好。

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