(英语)怎么样才能翻译好一句话或者一段话？

你认为人们能怎样保持美?英语翻译一段话~

How do you think people can keep beauty?(精锐老师，希望对你有帮助）

The Dragon Boat Festival is traditionally celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month on the lunar calendar, and is therefore often called 'Double Fifth Festival'. In Chinese, the holiday is called Duan Wu Jie.
The Dragon Boat Festival commemorates the life and death of the famous Chinese scholar-statesman Qu Yuan, who lived some three centuries before the birth of Christ. Qu Yuan was a loyal minister that served the King of Chu during the Warring States Period. Qu Yuan was a highly respected and trusted advisor to the King of Chu. He fought the corruption of other officials of the court.
Initially, Qu Yuan was favored by his sovereign, but over time, his wisdom and erudite ways antagonized the other court officials. Eventually, the intrigues of his rivals exerted enough ill influence on the King that Qu Yuan soon found himself in disfavor. The King began to not listen to Qu Yuan's suggestions and advice. Not long after, the King banished Qu Yuan from Chu. While in exile, Qu Yuan composed many poems expressing his sorrows and concerns for his country and people. Amongst his most famous poems is "Encountering Sorrow," a poem describing his search for a good sovereign that would listen to good advice regarding government.
In the year 295 B.C., at the age of 37, Qu Yuan drowned himself in the Milo River. He clasped a heavy stone to his chest and leaped into the water. Knowing that Qu Yuan was a righteous man, the people of Chu rushed to the river to try to save him. The people desperately searched the waters in their boats looking for Qu Yuan, but they were unsuccessful in their attempt to rescue him. Every year the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated to commemorate this attempt at rescuing Qu Yuan.
When it was known that Qu Yuan had been lost forever, the local people began the tradition of throwing sacrificial cooked rice into the river for their lost hero. However, a local fisherman had a dream that Qu Yuan did not get any of the cooked rice that was thrown into the river in his honor. Instead, it was the fishes in the river that had eaten the rice. So, the following year, the tradition of wrapping the cooked rice in bamboo leaves was begun. The cooked rice wrapped in bamboo leaves later came to be known as zong zi.
There is also another version of the story. When it was known that Qu Yuan had been lost to the river, the local fisherman had a dream that the fishes in the river were eating Qu Yuan's body. The local people came up with the idea that if the fishes in the river were not hungry, then they would not eat Qu Yuan's body. So the local people began the tradition of throwing zong zi into the river to feed the fishes in hope that Qu Yuan's body would be spared.

首先先找出"主句"得主词跟谓语. ((因为不一定会有宾语
什麼是主句?
主句: 前面没有连词, 介词的句子. ex: (I like my cat) which is lazy. {括号中为主句}
接下来将介词片语找出来.
什麼是介词片语?
介词片语(NP): 一个名词前面带介词的一个短语. ex: This is the base (of the volcano.) {括号中为NP} ((先翻介词片语再翻被他修饰的名词)
最後是找从句.
从句是什麼?
从句基本分为三大类: 形容词, 名词, 副词.
形容词从句分为有逗号及无逗号两者. 有逗号顺著翻, 没有则先翻译再翻他形容的名词.
名词从句顺著翻
副词从句也是顺著翻.
ex: 形容词从句(没逗号): The reason why she was angry was very obvious.
他生气的理由很明显.
(有逗号): My boss, who is very demanding, ask nothing but perfection.
我的老板, 一个很苛求的老板, 什麼都不要求就要求完美.
名词从句: That the earth is round is a fact.
地球是圆的是一个事实.
副词从句: When we are young, we are full of hopes and anxieties.
当我们年轻的时候, 我们充满希望即热忱.

觉得在翻译之前, 不管是对中文还是英文都要有一定的了解唷~

夯实自己的中文基础。
真正优秀的译者，在两种语言中都能任意驰骋、游刃有余。

平时多看报纸杂志之类的，熟悉用词，每种情况下的用词都有讲究，更多的是练习，比如在China Daily 中找到一段来翻译对应中文版。希望你能坚持下去

找到主谓宾是很重要的，尤其是谓语。一般的简单句中只有一个动词，它就是谓语。
要是复杂的从句就要这样判断：找出句子有几个动词，这个句子就是由（n-1) 个从句构成的。翻译时要判断出哪个是主句，可以看出中心思想。从句都是围绕主句进行解释说明的，再慢慢组织语言，就好了。
祝天天进步~

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