帮我看看这几句英语对话有没有什么错误
楼上滴，
就是 can you tell me how i can get my friend back?这句是对的。
can you tell me后面句子是陈述语序~
第二个也是对的， would like do sth,..
there are many beautiful places, some make you linger from
我觉得应该是 There are many beautiful places,some of which make you ...那是两个句子，说着加句号分成两句。不过我觉得我那样改的更标准~
I also want to help you, but how can I help you do
应该是but how can I help you,
each response may be a long time
我觉得 may take a long time 要好点吧~
1.【be需要】系动词连接，the large amount of是说总数，【the要换成a】但是更好的是will be wasted（in vain是徒劳的，一般是努力，精力；wasted是浪费的）
2.【用of】一般是the chance for sb to，the chance to do或者the chance of th（用to的话就是要用succeed或者make it）
3.整体上没有错误，但是win in the…可以换成【Have an advantage in 】（相对有优势的）
4.用【most】替换all，严谨一些。
5.同【1】
6.后面那个地方用一个【what's more】递进一下，感觉更加强烈。
what's more，it has a side effect in children’s attitude and health
是说：强制孩子学艺术，不仅没有好处，反而对他们的身心都有负面影响。
如有疑问欢迎追问交流O(∩_∩)O~
希望能有所帮助
2.第二句后面 GOT与前面GET有些重复。不妨改成 But I haven't managed to make it.
3.对的
4.对的,couldn't 语气比can't委婉
5.No. I am just telling the truth.
6.Well. Maybe ,rather than looking for a girlfriend,fishing is more suitable for me.
7.对的
8.I think so 改成 I suppose. 这个用的频率少些，前者用烂了
9.对的
10.I have to go home to prepare for fishing tomorrow.
11.这个太中式英语了。 就直 接改成 Good luck.
12.I will call you after I come back from my dad's .
13.没错，不过改成这样会更好 All right. I am looking forward to your phone call.
改错的顺序是从头开始的 我也按A,B分。
A: need后添加 to
B：没错
A::I'M just telling the truth.
B:i have to go home and prepare for fishing tomorrow.
B:i'll wait for your calling
倒数第三行A: I wish you will get a big fish.
应为A: I wish you would get a big fish.
因为wish后的宾语从句要用虚拟语气。
A: You need buy a car and get a driver's license.
B: You know I had been trying to get it since two years ago. But I haven't got it yet.
A: Haha you are so lucky! I guess you couldn't find a girlfriend either.
B: Are you laughing at me?
A: No. I just tell the truth.
B: Well. Maybe fishing is more suitable for me than looking for a girl friend. I'd better give up.
A: Are you only interested in fishing?
B: Yes,I think so. What time is it now?
A: About 5:00pm.What's matter?
B: I have to go home to prepare for the fishing tomorrow.
A: I wish you could get a big fish.
B: Thanks. I will call you after fishing.
A: OK, I'll wait for your call
I wish you will get a big fish.这句中 从句中用虚拟语气。把will改为 would
第一句：You need to buy a car.....
各位帮我看看这几句英文。我找的结构对不对?
I've heard it all before。I是主语 have heard是谓语，it是宾语，all before是状语表示时间。And I can take care of myself 。and是并列连词（与前面的句子并列虽然在这里省略了）can是情态动词 take care of是谓语 myself是宾语。汗了~楼主要加油啊！
帮我看看这些英语句子语法正确不正确.帮忙纠正。
1.It's worth doing everything for you.或To do everying for you is worthy.2. instead是副词，instead of改为replace.3.那句中文有歧义，所以我不能确定你这样翻译对不。I can't help loving you.我觉得这样才是你想表达的意思。我无法控制不去爱你。4.I hope you are away from illness....
大家帮我看看这几个英语句子,顺便给我分析一下句子结构,谢谢了_百度...
1、that用为抽象名次的指示代词，在这里只带抽象意义的“行为（behaviour）”，that of others就是别人的行为 2、as是when的意思，course是路径的意思，就是“当他驶入急转弯时”3、这句话是倒装句，主语是the fortunes，正序为：the fortunes of technology companies rarely have appeared to differ s...
各位帮我看看几句英文语法对不
1. She is an outstanding student. I was deeply impressed by her not only because she is a specific student in our department, but also because of her capability and eageress for further academic pursuit that she demonstrated in learning knowledge involved in my class.2. Miss Wu ...
帮我看看这两句话对吗 英语?
（a）When I arrived at the bus station，Number 20 bus was left.句子错误，leave离开的动作发生在arrived之前已完成，表示过去的过去，要用过去完成时，had+过去分词，应改为was left改为had left。（b）What did you say when you from A to B?when引导的时间状语从句缺乏谓语动词leave，此处...
请帮我看看这句英文对吗
also 在一般情况下是放在后面的，但是当起语气的强调作用时是可以提前的，不违反语法规则。
有没有英语大神来帮我看看这两句话都对吗
第一句 I have been finished my homework. 应该把been去掉，改为I have finished my homework. （如果不去掉been的话，这句话的意思就是“我被家庭作业完成了”）第二句My homework have been finished by me.是对的 区别：修改之后的两句话 表达的意思一样，但第一句主语为“我” 是主动语态...
帮我看看这个英语句子对不对
deserve:动词，应受（奖赏﹑ 特殊待遇等）; 应得; 值得:可以在它后面直接加名词或者to do 的结构。例子：The article deserves careful study. 这篇文章值得仔细研究. (这句中study是个名词)She deserves a reward for her efforts. 她积极努力, 应得到奖赏.They deserve to be sent to prison....
几个英语句子帮我看看对不对
一:I may be retire我有可能退休 这句话对吗?不对 retire是动词 前面不能加be 二:I have nearly finished我这就做完了 这句话是什么时态 现在完成时 三:I will buy a mink coat for you我将给你买件貂皮大衣 这句话对吗?正确 四:Then what will we do然后我们怎么办? 这句话对吗?一般...
英语好的来帮我看看这个句子对不对。
不对 应该是 What are doingat five yesterday afternoon？这应该是一个过去进行时，在过去某个特定的时间在干什么要用 were\/was +doing
郸甄复尔：[答案] 第一句:Items are shipped from China using Airmail,which reaches most countries within 15 to 25 business days.If you want to reseive it in a shorter time,you may choose EMS (5-10 days).We will supply ...
淮安市13387742170： 哪位达人能帮我看看这几句英语回答有没有什么错误吗?或者有没有什么更地道的回答能表达我的意思?1.Q:Describe your college life.Is it different from your ... - ？
郸甄复尔：[答案] 1.My college life is busy and substantial.It is quite diffierent from that of my high school. On the one hand, when I was in high school, I could devote almost all my time to my study. But in colleg...
淮安市13387742170： 帮我看看以下几句话有无问题Which the school do you have attended?Which the school have you attended?What's the school have you attended?What's the ... - ？
郸甄复尔：[答案] 第一句错了. Which the school have you attended?the 去掉 What's the school have you attended?改为 what,the 去掉 第四句错了 补充: which what 后面不能直接加 the 的 第一句你把过去是和完成时混淆了,这句是完成时态,所以要用 have done sth ...
淮安市13387742170： 英语高手帮忙看下这几句话有没有错误的地方When are we going to school?We're going to go at eight.When are we going to go home?We're going to go at ... - ？
郸甄复尔：[答案] 前两个对的 第三个是We're going to have (a party )at half past six. 其实三句话的回答语直接说时间就可以啦,如:at eight 这样简洁
淮安市13387742170： 懂英语帮我看看这段对话有没有语法错误Stranger:whats your name?You:I do not speak English,each response may be a long time,please waitStranger:... - ？
郸甄复尔：[答案] 楼上滴, 就是 can you tell me how i can get my friend back?这句是对的. can you tell me后面句子是陈述语序~ 第二个也是对的,would like do sth,.. there are many beautiful places,some make you linger from 我觉得应该是 There are many beautiful ...
淮安市13387742170： 高手帮我看一下这几句英语有什么语法错误或者用词不当?(A) In the last three mounth of the year,attendance were off their september peak,falling back by ... - ？
郸甄复尔：[答案] A)mounth改成months300,000 vistor a mounth 换成300,000visitors a month(B) upwards改成upward.(c) rocketing改成rocking(D) the number of 换成 a number of (用法不同)(E) 删除through,把the number of 换成a n...
淮安市13387742170： 高手帮我看看这几句有没有什么语法错误和用词不当的错误!(A) In the last three mounth of the year,attendance were off their september peak,falling back ... - ？
郸甄复尔：[答案] (A)里面month而非mounth
淮安市13387742170： 哪位英语达人能帮我看看这几句英语回答有木有错误?或者有木有更地道的表达方法?1.Describe a traditional dish in your country.What are the ingredients?... - ？
郸甄复尔：[答案] 1.Describe a traditional dish in your country.What are the ingredients? A:One of the most famous dishes in my country is Buddha skipping wall.Some famous persons,such as president Reagan and Queen Elizabeth have tasted it before.Beyond all doubt...
淮安市13387742170： 帮我看看这几句英文有没有错误,简历上的Have sociology,economics,statistics,management and other professional basic knowledge.Ability to sort and ... - ？
郸甄复尔：[答案] I have the basic knowledge on sociology, economics, statistics,management and other professions.I also have the ability to arrange and analyse documentations and statistics.Further, I am able to indep...
淮安市13387742170： 帮我看看这几句英语有没有问题？
郸甄复尔： make a difference 中不能加 yourself ,还有,what you are dreaming of,be content to do sth.最后一句要倒装:could you ...... only if you do believe yourself ....
