帮忙短文改错

帮忙，，，短文改错~

nowadays millions of people of all age(ages) take pleasure in a(the) hobby which is both interested(interesting) and fun . and every year more and more people start a stamp collection of(on) your(their) own and discover(have) an intersst which can even last lifetime ,starting your collection of stamps are(is) easy because they are everywhere . holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters from friends can all provide you for(with) stamps (加from) all over the world .so once you`re(you've) started collecting seriousely ,you will probably want to join in(去掉） the(a) stamps collections` club which exist(exists) to add more stamps to your collection.

I’m very glad to know that you would(改will) arrive at Kaifeng for a visit on(改at) 8:00 a.m.
next Saturday. Warm(改Warmly) welcome to our city. It is a pity that I can’t meet
you at the station with(改for) some reason. However, don’t worry. I’ll tell you where(改how)
to get to Kaifeng Dragon Pavilion Park. After you get out of the exit, walking(改walk)
straight ahead for about 50 metres. Then I(改you) will find the No. 1 bus stop. Take it
and get on(去掉on) off at the stop of the Dragon Pavilion Park. It may takes(改take) you about
30 minutes to arrive there. I’ll wait for you at (加the) gate of the park at 9:00 a. m.

With the National College Entrance Exam draws （drawing）near,I
feel more and more nervously（nervous）.I know that my parents depend
on myself (me) to realize their dream .Over the past three years,
I have been working hard so as to live up (to 不辜负的意思) their expectations.
I know how disappointing they will be if I should (should去掉)fail the
exam.I asked my teacher for some advice.He said,"That（改为Tt）
doesn't matter whether you can(will) be admitted to a key university,
and there will be nothing to regret for(for去掉) as long as you have
tried your best." His word （words）encouraged me a lot. I will face
every single day with a smile but（and） I believe I will be a winner.问题补充：

I found a reference book in a （the）bookstore near our school。
The book was just what I was badly in need for（for去掉）；However，
it was too cheap（expensive）. the owner of the shop could only give
me the （a）discount of10 per cent。My deskmate's suggestion
was that I bought（buy）（本句是省略should） one online. He said goods online were
usually much cheaper.Following his advice , I surfed on （去掉）
the internet. and to my great delight, the book offered （+was）
at half（+the） price online。I immediately purchased it online
ithout hesitations（hesitation）.Thanks to my deskmate, I saved sbout
40 yuan,with that （which）I treated jim to a meal the other day
括号里就是改好的了，不懂追问吧O(∩_∩)O~

draws改成drawing
nervously改成nervous
myself改成me
live up 后加to
disappointing改成disappointed
That改成It
word改成words
but改成and

what改成that
cheap改成expensive
bought改成should buy
offered改成was offered
with that改成with which

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