英语作文 书面表达 假设你是李华，你的朋友Jenny向你询问如何保持健康，请你给她发一封邮件提些建议...
Dear Jenny,How nice it is to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. Here is my advice.First of all, try to develop a balanced diet. You had better eat more fish, meat, beans and so on, especially fresh vegetables and fruit so that you can take in enough nutrients. Don’t eat too much food with sugar because it is bad for your health and can make you put on weight. Secondly, you ought to take enough exercise and learn to combine work with relaxation. Take part in sports as often as possible and you will find you’re much healthier. My last suggestion is that you should make sure that you sleep for at least eight hours a day. Remember not to stay up too late. Yours, Li Hua 试题分析：这是提纲式作文，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【亮点说明】范文中有一些常用的词组和词组： take in 吸收，理解，put on weight.增加体重，Take part in参加， as often as possible尽可能经常， stay up too late 熬夜，You had better eat more fish, meat, beans and so on, especially fresh vegetables and fruit so that you can take in enough nutrients.这句话用了结果状语从句，My last suggestion is that you should make sure that you sleep for at least eight hours a day.这句话用了表语从句， 还有文章使用了First of all, Secondly这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。
Dear Jenny,How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.As you know, food is very important to us teenagers. Since we grow very fast, we need nutritious food very much, things like fresh vegetables and fruits, fish and meat, and so on. But I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar and fat. And you should get plenty of sleep. It is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day. Also, you should take physical exercise regularly. It will be good for your health. Only in this way can you keep fit.Best wishes! YoursLi Hua 试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
Dear Lihua,How important is keeping healthy to us? I think most people are in agreement that fruit and vegetables are good for health,I think it's also fine to eat some meat or fish.You had better eat meat that's well cooked. People who eat a balanced diet should be healthier than those who only eat biscuits and hamburgers ,On the other hand it's important to exercise, such as running, walking,climbing the hills, playing all kinds of balls.and,don't stay up late ,you're supposed to have enough sleep, sleep at least 8 hours.The main thing is to have a good balance.
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the Way to Keep Healthy
Dear Li Hua,
Hello.Thanks fo your e-mail.I would like to give you some advice on how to keep healthy.In my opinion,first, it is necessary to form the healthy eating habit.You should eat more meat,eggs and beans,as well as vegetables and fruit.Second, it is important to do regular exercise,including running,swimming and playing ball games.Exercise can build up your bodies.Besides,have enough sleep.Don't stay up late at night.
Wishing you happy and healthy.
Regards
Yours
Li Hua
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