请高手批改(2) My Fevorit Friut

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请帮我批改一下这篇英语作文:My lifestyle~

My lifestyle
My lifestyle is (very healthy). I get up at 6 o'clock in the morning(,) then I (do some exercising). I exercise every day because that is good for my health. (I have a regulated eating habit,because I like eating vegetables and fruits. I have vegetables in my meals every day and eat fruits) three or four times a week. Vegetables and fruits are good for my health therefore I try (to eat them as much as possible). I sleep 8 hours (everyday so i have enough energy to study and play.) I believe my healthy lifestyle can help me to study better.

My favourite hero is Jian ming- wang.He has a round face and dark hair .He is the horner of taiwan.
when he was a boy,he was very interested in baseball.so he is very enjoy as a pitcher on school team .his parents didn't agreen with him to be a player,but he didn't want to give up. So he kept practing his pitching and gradually got better.
now he is a strating pitcher fot U.S mojor league baseball team new york .he had become a sports hero througnout the rest of the worle.he is my favourite hero!
He is a sport hero! he is not a star!!!I like him very much,do you like him too?最好先点题my favourite hero

是favourite 或 favorite , 不是fevorit.

帮你改正一下错误:
My favourite fruit is apple. Apples are tasty and look lovely. Apples contain much Vitamin which is beneficial for our health. They are sweet and attract people. There are various kinds of apples which are produced from different places. And each type has its own flavour.

应该用”apples"不是"apple",因为你喜欢的是苹果这一个种类,用复数

My fevorit friut is apple. Apples are tasty and look lovely. Apples contain much Vitamin which is benifit for our health. It is sweet and attracting to people. There are varias kind of apples which are produce from different places. And each type has its own( fevor单词是不是有错.)

My favorite friut is apple. Apples are tasty and look lovely. Apples contain a lot of Vitamins which can benefit our health.Theyare sweet and attractive to people. There are various kinds of apples which are produced from different places. And each type has its own flavor.


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