帮我修改和丰富我的英语Daily report演讲稿
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哦停止。今天我不想告诉你他们的故事,我只是想介绍一个
人物给你。
犯错…你认识他吗?哦,是的,这是Hatake卡卡西。这一个。
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他是我最喜欢的卡通人物在所有的漫画。我爱他因为没有
只有他的英俊,但还他的性格。现在,让我来说说
他。
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首先,对自己的外表。他是一个神秘的人,他总是戴着一个面具。他所有的粉丝们想知道他遮面。所以…
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关于他的遮面,有不止一个猜。什么是他的真面目…地球上吗?谁知道!但我们可以猜想,他一定很帅,因为…是的…
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接下来,关于他的性格。迟到和缓慢的是他的主要特点。
“有一只黑色的猫在我的路…”“我帮助一位老太太过马路…”“我迷了路在人生之路上…”这些
Maybe you will think 把think改成doubt
common不是comman!
而且建议你把they have no comman改成they might seem to have little in common这样比较正宗
homosexal也拼错了（罪孽啊~~~~）是homosexual
What percentage of people now are homosexal?有语法问题，是What is the percentage of people that are now being homosexual?
The average ratio from several studies are that 9.56% of men are homosexual and 4.75% of women are homosexual改成
The average ratios from several studies indicate(show) that 9.56% of male are homosexual while only 4.75% of women do the same(are homosexual)
下一句的So 改成that is to say
中间还有一段很乱，可改成
. Today's China is traditional social or family-based. The unfilial actions including issues about dying without children so that nobody would inherit status, family names are the most serious matter.
Homosexuality with no birth, of course, can not be accepted.But a woman,a social docter named 李银河 in 2003 gave the suggestion about the Legalization of Homosexual Marriage to the National People's Congress (NPC全国人民代表大会)
虽然Not homosexuality and birth这句我还是不太明白这句话的意思,只好改成同位语形式，你看要是意思不对就算了
Ar last I want to say that It is difficult to have a reasonable discussion of homosexuality because of all the rhetoric in our times coloring and disguising the issues.but now still have some one stand out and let public face up to the problem about homosexal
这两句很混乱，第一句意思不对劲，我觉得你可能想写every coins has two sides,it's hard to come to a reasonable result.
第二句没主语，还有些拼错了的的地方
Now today I chose this topic just want you can know more about homosexal , won’t discriminate them and try to understand them .Because God loves everyone!这句也不对，Now和 today重复了won’t应 改成don't
我帮你改好了，直接回复在你qq上面了，你可以看下，呵呵~
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