悬赏20，英语短文改错，求大神帮助！

英语短文改错求大神帮助~

run_running
jump_jumpy
small_young
not去掉
as去掉
interested_interesting
the very_a very
for_of
am_was
hardly_hard

1、has->had
2、in->for
3、not to have-> not having
4、saying-> saying about
5、himself->him
6、accept->recieve 或者删去accept 后面的it
7、truth 前面加 the
8、去掉 be
9、Final -> Finally
10、me->myself

I joined in the Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, but I was wrong. The climb burned my legs, and the wound hurt me so much. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when we reached on the top, I forgot about all of this. The clouds were so close that they seemed touchable. I have never seen such a blue sky. Although I have seen many kinds of birds before, this was the first time that I realized birds were beautiful. When it was time to leave, I felt strangely disappointed. I realized that I wasn’t ready to go home!

I went with my Bird Watching class for a trip last weekend. I thought there would be a nice place for us to rest but I was wrong. My legs,got sunburned from all the hiking. My legs really hurts a lot. My P.E. class was much more easier to me compared to this. But I forgot all about this.this.when we reached on the hill top finally. The clouds were so close to us that it seemed touchable. I had ever seen a sky such blue. Although I had seen many kinds of birds before, this was the first time I realized that birds were actually very beautiful. When it was time to leave, I felt very disappointed and I realized that I wasn’t yet ready to go home!

burn-burned 去掉on ever-never kind-kinds disappi[ointing-disappointed

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