英语大神们帮我分析一下这段翻译的合理不合理

求英语大神帮我分析一下这几个句子，不是求翻译。是分析它们的语法，谢谢了~

.Her study of 62 formerly inactive women who began exercising three times a week for six months was published in the journal Medicine & Science in Sports & Exercise.
句子主干成份：Her study was published in the journal Medicine & Science in Sports & Exercise. 她的研究被发表在体育运动方面的医学科学期刊上。
of 62 formerly inactive women 是定语，修饰study，她的研究，是什么研究？是关于62个不活跃的妇女。
who began exercising three times a week for six months 是定语从句，修饰women，这62个妇女，是开始每个星期锻炼3次，连续坚持了6个月的那62个妇女，而不是其他女人。
Iron deficiency is very common among women in general, affecting one in four female teenagers and one in five women aged 18 to 45, respectively.
句子主干：Iron deficiency is very common among women in general
缺铁在妇女中是非常普遍的。
affecting one in four female teenagers and one in five women aged 18 to 45, respectively. 分词短语做结果状语。
（缺铁）影响了四分之一的未成年女性和五分之一18到45岁的成年女性。
And because women often restrict their diet in an effort to control weight, they may not consume enough iron-rich food, and are liable to experience a deficiency.
主句是： they may not consume enough iron-rich food, and are liable to experience a deficiency.
她们没有摄入足够的富含铁食物，所以就容易导致缺铁（症状发生）。
because women often restrict their diet in an effort to control weight,
这是原因状语从句，解释主句没有摄入足够富含铁食物的原因。
因为妇女们经常限制她们的饮食来控制自己的体重，

My brother, Jimmy, did not get enough oxygen during a difficult delivery, leaving him with brain damage, and two years later I was born.
leaving him with brain damage 现在分词做状语。使他大脑损伤。

生硬不合理，语法问题多多。 Listing用在股票上市，而不是商品上市。drop to bottom没有主语，不知道在说什么。phone应该是复数。其他问题不再赘述。
按照这个翻译回译的中文是：七彩4G卡新股上市，落到底，更令人激动，1 500M, 0月租，不要钱。本店手机支持付款，只有身份证+卡就能申请半小时离开去往心仪手机。经营业务：手机维修，手机配件，手机升级已经解锁，电脑维修，软硬件服务。

把“0月 rental, no money”改为“rent free”

Colorful new listing 4 g card, down to the end, more wonderful, 1 yuan package 500 m flow, 0 a month, don't don't money. Our phone support installment, only need id card + can deal with bank card, phone right half an hour. Business: mobile phone repair, cell phone accessories, cell phone upgrade unlock, computer maintenance, software and hardware service.

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