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中国的文化，绝版的文化，我们来迟了。
天空，流动岁月的云。那场火还在烧吗？美得心痛的风景固化为刺，鲠在您的咽喉，红肿、发炎、结疤。之后，成了不堪回首的耻辱。飞溅的血泪湿透你最苍白的灵魂。飘的风轻轻地，翻越沉重的黄袍。看，记忆之外的笑容，没有了内容。中国的文化，绝版的文化，我们来迟了。
你用含泪的声音，一千次一万次地呜咽，辗转于历史的莽莽余音。你在永恒中相思、相望，你在这迷茫的世界中，不可抑止的流泪，泪水缓慢地坠于地上，忧伤难诉。中国的文化，绝版的文化，我们来迟了。
袅袅的萧声撞击着你酸涩的痛楚，一双女人的手锁住了一个崩溃的王朝，一个男人不小心输掉了半壁江山。所有抗争都成了徒劳，生命不可承受离别的凝重的伤痛，沉闷的绝望笼罩着你那脆弱的心灵。中国的文化，绝版的文化，我们来迟了。
风雨千年，沉默千年。你那沉默忧郁的灵魂，孤独地跋涉着，那凄婉的故事在风中流传，在水中漫朔。穿过苍苍莽莽的地平线，飞越泪水斑斑的守望，悲怆而来。在时光的隧道里，一群群石匠，弯下腰，挥动着凿刀，一刀，便凿开一个泣血的故事。一切，便凿开一段圣洁的伤感。中国的文化，绝版的文化，你流着泪，淌着血，穿越了千年的风雨，也震憾着千年的沧桑。
走近你，没有陌生的词能修饰你苍凉的华丽，只有白发插满时光的隧道，猎猎张扬。一个民族，因为你而自豪。走近你，我无法诠释你生命的密码。但我驻足之时，面对着沉默的你的时候，我却总能感受到一种生命的冲动、力量的翻滚。走近你，我才发现你指引着我们前进的方向。哪里，都交融着你的历史。日月穿梭，回时转序都融入你那高耸的身躯。
中国的文化，绝版的文化，请停止你的哀怒，停止你的哭泣，停止你的悲伤，停止你的迷茫，因为有我们在。放心吧，有我们在，你的生命会再度辉煌！放心吧，有我们在，你的精神会带着绚丽！放心吧，有我们在，绝版的你从此不再绝版！
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这篇思接千载的佳作，有两点颇值借鉴：一是角度不凡：对历史风云、古典文化不了然于心，是无法写出如此佳篇的。从这个角度说，写“坚守绝版的文化”这一话题，是需要勇气、智慧与才情的，作者显然做到了，而且写得很漂亮！不管是阿房宫里那场大火，还是长城边的血泪，虽然满载历史的辛酸，但作为华夏子孙，我们怎能忘记。二是情感独特：文章不仅能充分展示考生的才华，更能看出其内心对传统文化的固守与热爱，这种情感超越了一般的情感范畴。

To walk in this beautiful way this road leads to eternal life happiness if you want to have a free life on this road to walk in the beautiful way you all the pain of heart ran this way is all sages will directly cause a heaven to walk around in this magic way tomorrow you will all the beauty of the scenery, you'll see people of good will with you all the way walk on this Lifechanyuan to and the way your life will be better, more like a day lovers sing and dance, day and night because we are walking in the great creator
the opportunity to let me out of my body city sights, less to attend a tourist group. To such occasion


I was invited to a day of travel, wujiaqu agricultural or five creek, a new farm-turned


32 kilometers, is apart from the urumqi city, I have never been to the place. not


I accepted the invitation without hesitation.


This is an outing local organizations of the disabled persons' federation. A 30-strong party's "special citizens" and take care of them, and it was a "special group


"By people with cerebral palsy, polio, permanent spinal cord injuries. Some sitting in wheelchairs and crutches some lean on, and some limped their head and hands tightly in the point of view of the strange turn. They can create a unique attraction in yourself! But I everyone wore


A happy face and talked living each other, I joined the many on April 30, 2009.


"Disabled" has been rude remarks, but for my subconscious to admit


I because I belong to that "a lot." I live in a world


"Normal." I can't literally what's in my parents' care. The use of the Internet and mastery of English have pushed me away from consciousness further I disabled. To this


At that moment, I, for the second time, standing in the cool morning air and "a lot


"" wait for the bus, I become more than ever conscious of my" neurological problem, "and an hour of waiting seems to be endless.


Finally, here comes the bus. I got on with my mother and choose a seat


In the second row window. The engines when everyone sitting together


Guarantee wheelchair in the aisle. From an attractive gnome miss two


In my seat to it, I take my eyes and focus it on the window. The past corn fields, and your vineyards, and your vegetables plantation, the bus stopped


After hours in looks like a small parking lot of a scenic spot called "4 th annual exhibition tulips."


Tulip! Tulip! Noble, elegant, charming plant! Why is it that I plant looks almost like a gentle miss? The thumb girl asked me a picture book watching my mother in the past when I was young-narrative


A beautiful girl tulip-like to climb out of flowers I love tulips since, but didn't get a chance to get a real see them until now... .


But until the bus, under huge difficulty, a few feet


Close to the import of some 30 minutes, I just get off to catch up with the first thing I saw in my favorite flower.


Arrange in the fertile crescent beds are lush red and yellow dazzling under the blazing sun. Despite warning "you stay in there, we will have a photo


Taken in it, "my hip to the latest I bed. Bend over, I help me stare at a specific tulips, six petals on a red" university student village officer"


The valve stem. Several half-folded around the stem long triangle leaf like two small set out if support bar and flowers. Without the thumb girl in the petals are discovered, but a tiny gold pistil stand straight in purple and yellow star-patterned velvet, support their own the sun


And the brightness of the I.


"Attention. Time to take the photos!!!" The support from the fans screamed. I turned around, and quietly packed into a swimming pool, a unified standard mode to "cheese! A true tourism", and then he started. Tulips.


Along with the mall red, yellow, pink, orange, red and purple, and red, cream, white, bead light is silver, purple flowers, light gold, rose red wine, the only color I know their names. Together they a wide array of colors


- - - magenta-yellow combination, red-white, purple-silver, pink-gold, to name just a few, creating a world of color. In the brick-wide ramshackle paved roads in


Flower, I became a clumsy butterfly looking for a perfect patch


Tulips. This goods is charming, I to my mother and partner. No, no, wait


I think this one is better... , I decided to not hesitate. Finally my head spin


Tulip overwhelmingly efforts to show off their tonal, the color, came down


My wings, get a conclusion, it's real hard to find a set of superior to any other, every color, each mode is a create they reflect natural-create preference and prejudice is a long time ago know human.


Now, tell your friends share doubles your happiness. I think this sentence a bit weak, when I see one of my friends in a wheelchair shooting flowers


And calcium. He is a handsome man in his 30 s. Ten years ago he broke his neck, and in a terrible accident paralyzed since abandoned.


"Wow, I hope I can have a camera like this." I went over and asked, "is this


A type? "


"Ah, 40 GB hard drive." He replied with a smile.


He smile makes my happiness grow at least five times.


"You want to take a picture of yourself?" Mother good-naturedly asks one teammates, serious polio. To my surprise, he responded with an enthusiastic nodded his head. His next move let me surprised. In the struggle he stood in a crooked legs, push his wheelchair go. A hand in his pocket, one hand and a bottle of water, his hoarse, "I'm ready."


This is nearly 3 o 'clock, we finally reached the other side of the road, where all of the members have a nice meal of fish. , we hopped on the bus is ready


To go back home.


Everyone was tired, trapped in return-except me. In silence, I stare at operation landscape of the window. Everything was back"


Normal "color-unattractive green and gray. A strange thought crossed my mind. Those tulip can be seen is a" strange ", "abnormal", or "disabled? "They can, in fact, as long as they put the natural differences.


May feel ashamed of unique appearance were given a


Thinking?


"It's all your fault! I should be more high, will not have


All this pain! "Suddenly, this exchange parent-daughter talk rang my ears, I watch the gnome miss, he wants her MP3 player ears and insert she like music. She likes obviously


"No, tulips," I want to say is, any tulips people feel sadness is abnormal, "you.


Just do pretty different, not disabled. For each of the thumb girl, here is a special tulip went to sleep. There is nothing wrong is very special, but it

又到草黄时节。遍野的绿色斑驳着消失，只有那干枯的浅黄渐次布满了人的视线，是生命终结时最柔韧的余唱。

喜欢看落叶掉到枯草上的情景，红的叶片，黄的草茎，很鲜明的美丽，看着它们，会想起夕阳一轮西下，缓缓下坠时那种有些凄凉的辉煌，会想起石阶上风烛残年的白发老人携手而行，从容安然的那一抹温馨，那一些些的感动。
寒冬的第一场风雪后，它们会在地面消失，重新回到大地母亲的怀抱里安息。等待，漫长的等待之后，第一声春风轻柔的呼唤，就会将它们的子孙全部叫醒。

喜欢看草绿江南岸的亮丽，萧索的冬季在它们的浅笑声中逃遁，是怎样柔嫩的一茎茎新绿哦，在石缝里，泥土上，勇敢地挺直它们的细腰，在乍暖还寒的冷风凄雨里，一寸寸地成长，一点点把堤坡，大地湮染，蓝天轻风下编织出让人振奋的春衣。
萋萋芳草，踏之何忍，用手去轻轻地触摸吧，仿佛婴儿皮肤般细腻，一丝丝在手掌心滑过，若干纤小的生命韵律从手传递到心，不由人不在心中感叹：如此细弱的植物竟然有这样顽强的生命，硬生生率先回应春风，引来了桃红柳绿，蜂飞蝶舞，春光明媚。

喜欢看盛夏里的草长莺飞，小草在炽热的阳光爱抚下，将生命里所有的美丽一起释放，无边无际的绿色原野，把各色怒放的花朵衬托得鲜艳欲滴，蓝天在视野里也变低了，似乎弯了腰屈尊来与小草亲近。
这个时间里的小草是最硕大最柔软的新床，诱惑着我们把自己的身躯无比舒坦地交给她们，没有了焦虑，没有了烦恼，在青草的簇拥下，做一个最轻松的美梦。

闭了双目，阳光下喧腾的青草芳香就包围了我们的嗅觉。是怎么样温馨而又好闻的一种清香啊，没有各色花香的浓烈，没有名牌香水的清雅，就是稻子成熟时的那种香味，是牛羊奶里的那个香气，是大自然的原香，是大地的味道，是自家母亲怀抱的味道。
是啊，小草，你原就是牛马羊们的主要食物，通过它们，你变身为洁白的乳汁，鲜美的肉食，温暖的毛皮，奔腾的力量，托起了一个个民族和国家。

天苍苍，野茫茫，风吹草低见牛羊。时光苍茫处，仿佛见一代雄主成吉思汗，扬鞭策马统领万千铁骑，横扫欧亚大陆，所向披靡。小草，造就了前无古人的马背英豪。

离离原上草，一岁一枯荣。野火烧不尽，春风吹又生。柔韧的小草，你究竟是什么呢？是我们无数卑微弱小的生命吧？我们是平凡的草民，却也可以描绘春天，为大地梳妆，弱小的生命联合起来，还可以改变环境，创造世界。

那首熟悉的歌曲在我的心里，婉转悠扬地响起：没有花香／没有树高／我是一棵无人知道的小草／从不寂寞／从不烦恼／你看我的伙伴遍及天涯海角……
参考资料：榕树下

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