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1.Deng Yaping
Deng Yaping, 28, from Henan Province, is a talented woman player of table tennis. She was the table tennis champion of the ll th Asian Games and the 41st World Tabte Tennis Championship. And in the 25th Olympic Games she won two gold medals. Why can she make such brilliant achievements with the disadvantage of her short figure? Her hard work and determination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages. At the age of 4, she began to play table tennis underthe guidance of her tather. When she was 8, she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school. In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team. On her way to success, she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything.
译文:
邓亚萍
邓亚萍,女,28岁,河南人,一位杰出的乒乓球运动员。她分别在11后亚运会和41届世界乒乓球锦标赛上获得冠军,并在25后奥运全中获得两枚金牌。为什么她能在个子不高的状况下取得如此辉煌的成就呢?是她的勤奋和决心弥补了她的缺陷,指引她走向成功。4岁时,她在父亲的指导下开始打乒乓球;8岁时就夺得业余体校全国冠军;1998年,成为国家集训队员。在成功的路上,她向我们证明了:个子矮小并不重要,勤奋才是成功的关键。
2. 作文原题:
最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。

60%的同学认为:
1. 不应收门票
2. 公园是公众休闲的地方
3. 如收票,需建大门、围墙,会影响城市形象。
40%的同学认为:
1. 应收门票,但票价不宜高
2. 支付园林工人工资
3. 购新花木

满分作文列表:

高考满分作文1(1号题)

Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

3. The Olympic Games
The Olympic Games are held every four years in a different city in the world. Athletes from different countries compete in a variety of sports which are divided into winter and sum mer games.
The Olympics began in Greece more than 2 700 years ago. The first recorded Olympic competition was held in 776 B. C. It was held in an outdoor stadium and about forty thousand people watched the event. The first thirteen Olympics consisted of only one race running. The games had been held regularly for about 1 200 years. Then, in the year 397 the Olympics were prohibited by the Roman Emporor.
It was not until 1896 that the first Olympics of modern times were held in Athens. From then on the games are held every four years rugularly. The Olympics have become the world's most important athletic events and a symbol of sporting friendship of all the people of the world.
www.cooyu.net
[参考译文]
奥运会
奥运会每隔四年在世界上一个不同的城市举办一次。来自不同国家的运动员在各类运动项目中角逐。这些运动项目又分为冬季项目和夏季项目。
奥运会起源于2 700多年前的希腊。第一次有记载的奥运会竞赛举办于公元前776年。比赛是在露天体育场进行的,大约有4万人观看了比赛。前天十三届的奥运会只有一个项目:赛跑。奥运会一直定期举办了约1 200年,然后,公元397年,被罗马皇帝禁止举办。
直到1896年,第一届现代奥运会在雅典举行。从那时起,奥运会定期每四年举行一次。奥运会已成为世界上最重要的运动赛事,也是全世界人民在运动中体现友谊的象征。
4. The Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports
To a Chinese, the task of learning English well is not easy. So I, like many other English learners, have met with difficulties in learning English during the past seven years. But I managed to overcome them and made much progress.
The spelling and meaning of words can be said to be the first difficulty I met as a beginner. But I found our my own way to deal with them. As to spelling, I never copied a new work again and again to remember it, but tried to find its relevance to the sound. In fact, as long as I can read the word out, I can write it out. As to the meaning, I rarely recite its Chinese translation but often put the word into the sentence to learn its meaning. Moreover, if you use a word quite often, its spelling and meaning will be no problem. After all, we are learning English in order to use it.
Grammar and idioms may be another difficulty. But I have also got over it. I have not read lots of grammar books. But I spent much time reading the articles written by native speakers or specialists in English. By doing so, I came to gain “a sense of English language”. I began to gain a feel for which sentences are “good English” and which are not.
Finally, I want to say that overcoming all these difficulties requires perseverance. In the past seven years I spent at least an hour on English each day. I believe this is an important reason why I am able to make progress in learning English.
5.Saving Our Earth

It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. For one thing, rubbish may cause a lot of pollution. It may pollute the air, the water and the places we live in. For another, it may do harm to people's health.

So in our city, rubbish is well dealt with. First, it is sorted. Then old newspapers and glass are recycled. The harmful wastes are buried and the waste water is cleaned before it goes into the river. The government has already made laws against pollution caused by rubbish.

But that's not enough. We must all try our. best to prevent rubbish from polluting the environment so as to. save our city and our living place.
回答者: canspringbefar - 经理 五级 1-2 14:52
第四部分:书面表达(共两节,35分)
第一节 情景作文(20分)
一、 内容要点:
1. 讨论
2. 爬山
3. 捡拾别人(或收拾自己)的垃圾
4. 投放垃圾
二、 说明:内容要点可用不同方式表达。
三、 One possible version:
Last Thursday,we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.We came up with several choeces such as going boating,climbing a mountain,and going to an amusement park.Finally,we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day,we set off early in the moring .While climbing the mountain.we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.However.when we reached the top,we were shocked to see litter here and there,such as bottles and banana peels.Then we started to pick up the litter.Afterwards,we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.
第二节 开放作文(15分)
One possible version:
From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil.The compasses are big,drawing a circle with ease,while the pencil is small,drawing a line with great effort.I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better.At the same time,however,he should realize the pencil has his own advantages.The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses,even pictures.So in my opinion,while we are confident in ourselves,we should recognize strengths in other and show due respect for them.

1.Deng Yaping
Deng Yaping, 28, from Henan Province, is a talented woman player of table tennis. She was the table tennis champion of the ll th Asian Games and the 41st World Tabte Tennis Championship. And in the 25th Olympic Games she won two gold medals. Why can she make such brilliant achievements with the disadvantage of her short figure? Her hard work and determination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages. At the age of 4, she began to play table tennis underthe guidance of her tather. When she was 8, she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school. In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team. On her way to success, she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything.
译文:
邓亚萍
邓亚萍,女,28岁,河南人,一位杰出的乒乓球运动员。她分别在11后亚运会和41届世界乒乓球锦标赛上获得冠军,并在25后奥运全中获得两枚金牌。为什么她能在个子不高的状况下取得如此辉煌的成就呢?是她的勤奋和决心弥补了她的缺陷,指引她走向成功。4岁时,她在父亲的指导下开始打乒乓球;8岁时就夺得业余体校全国冠军;1998年,成为国家集训队员。在成功的路上,她向我们证明了:个子矮小并不重要,勤奋才是成功的关键。
2. 作文原题:
最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。

60%的同学认为:
1. 不应收门票
2. 公园是公众休闲的地方
3. 如收票,需建大门、围墙,会影响城市形象。
40%的同学认为:
1. 应收门票,但票价不宜高
2. 支付园林工人工资
3. 购新花木

满分作文列表:

高考满分作文1(1号题)

Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua

3. The Olympic Games
The Olympic Games are held every four years in a different city in the world. Athletes from different countries compete in a variety of sports which are divided into winter and sum mer games.
The Olympics began in Greece more than 2 700 years ago. The first recorded Olympic competition was held in 776 B. C. It was held in an outdoor stadium and about forty thousand people watched the event. The first thirteen Olympics consisted of only one race running. The games had been held regularly for about 1 200 years. Then, in the year 397 the Olympics were prohibited by the Roman Emporor.
It was not until 1896 that the first Olympics of modern times were held in Athens. From then on the games are held every four years rugularly. The Olympics have become the world's most important athletic events and a symbol of sporting friendship of all the people of the world.
www.cooyu.net
[参考译文]
奥运会
奥运会每隔四年在世界上一个不同的城市举办一次。来自不同国家的运动员在各类运动项目中角逐。这些运动项目又分为冬季项目和夏季项目。
奥运会起源于2 700多年前的希腊。第一次有记载的奥运会竞赛举办于公元前776年。比赛是在露天体育场进行的,大约有4万人观看了比赛。前天十三届的奥运会只有一个项目:赛跑。奥运会一直定期举办了约1 200年,然后,公元397年,被罗马皇帝禁止举办。
直到1896年,第一届现代奥运会在雅典举行。从那时起,奥运会定期每四年举行一次。奥运会已成为世界上最重要的运动赛事,也是全世界人民在运动中体现友谊的象征。
4. The Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports
To a Chinese, the task of learning English well is not easy. So I, like many other English learners, have met with difficulties in learning English during the past seven years. But I managed to overcome them and made much progress.
The spelling and meaning of words can be said to be the first difficulty I met as a beginner. But I found our my own way to deal with them. As to spelling, I never copied a new work again and again to remember it, but tried to find its relevance to the sound. In fact, as long as I can read the word out, I can write it out. As to the meaning, I rarely recite its Chinese translation but often put the word into the sentence to learn its meaning. Moreover, if you use a word quite often, its spelling and meaning will be no problem. After all, we are learning English in order to use it.
Grammar and idioms may be another difficulty. But I have also got over it. I have not read lots of grammar books. But I spent much time reading the articles written by native speakers or specialists in English. By doing so, I came to gain “a sense of English language”. I began to gain a feel for which sentences are “good English” and which are not.
Finally, I want to say that overcoming all these difficulties requires perseverance. In the past seven years I spent at least an hour on English each day. I believe this is an important reason why I am able to make progress in learning English.
5.Saving Our Earth

It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. For one thing, rubbish may cause a lot of pollution. It may pollute the air, the water and the places we live in. For another, it may do harm to people's health.

So in our city, rubbish is well dealt with. First, it is sorted. Then old newspapers and glass are recycled. The harmful wastes are buried and the waste water is cleaned before it goes into the river. The government has already made laws against pollution caused by rubbish.

But that's not enough. We must all try our. best to prevent rubbish from polluting the environment so as to. save our city and our living place.

第四部分:书面表达(共两节,35分)
第一节 情景作文(20分)
一、 内容要点:
1. 讨论
2. 爬山
3. 捡拾别人(或收拾自己)的垃圾
4. 投放垃圾
二、 说明:内容要点可用不同方式表达。
三、 One possible version:
Last Thursday,we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.We came up with several choeces such as going boating,climbing a mountain,and going to an amusement park.Finally,we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day,we set off early in the moring .While climbing the mountain.we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.However.when we reached the top,we were shocked to see litter here and there,such as bottles and banana peels.Then we started to pick up the litter.Afterwards,we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.
第二节 开放作文(15分)
One possible version:
From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil.The compasses are big,drawing a circle with ease,while the pencil is small,drawing a line with great effort.I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better.At the same time,however,he should realize the pencil has his own advantages.The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses,even pictures.So in my opinion,while we are confident in ourselves,we should recognize strengths in other and show due respect for them.

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