高分求改正语法错误
只改动语法错误是不够的，要大改哦，因为原文确实有点平淡，而且不够地道。
润色策略
1句型换为倒装句（起强调作用；平衡结构）
2句式多样化（全是“这里有，这里有……”可不好哦）
3让单词更得体
Here are the secret virgin forest and the last emprior's palace. Here are the first car and the first movie made in China came into being.
What's more(或者Furthermore),there is a very special nightlife. All that is for you. What are you waiting!
下面是只改语法错误的
The secret virgin forest is here, the last emprior's palace is here, the first car produced in China(首字母大写) is here, the first movie made in China is here. And （also可不能领导句子）there is a (单数名词前要加冠词)very special nightlife. The all is for you. What are you waiting(后面有宾语就加with 没有就不加)!
虽然只是短短几句话，为了达到翻译的“信 达 雅”，我可是煞费苦心，用了好长时间哦。有什么别的要求可以提出，我重改。
第一句how改为what，因为是按照句子意思是我能做什么。
第三行less前面加上making，make (less) use of 是固定搭配 (少）使用的意思。
第四行take改为taking因为是非谓语动词又不充当分句的独立成分
call改为calling
第五行protect改为protecting，动名词短语做主语成分
act改为action
How compelling and provoktive the image is! As vividly presented in the instructive cartoon above,______描述图画内容_______。
It goes without saying what the author tried to convey in the picture was indeed profound. Firstly(一般这样用比较有层次性), such a phenomenon has a rounded social concern as traditional ways of thinking have changed dramatically. Secondly, recognizing a problem is the first step to take in finding a solution. It is hard to imagine what our society would be like years later if the disturbing trends went on. Additionally ,we often ignore the aforementioned problem, and to solve it, one must adopt a driect approach which addresses all relevant issues. Examples to prove this point of view are abundent,the most persuasive ons being the ___举例____.
Considering the aforementioned reasons, we may came to the conclusion that it is high time such terrible stories were reduced, if not ended. Only when such things were solved can we maintain a happy ,healthy and harmonious scociety as we desire.
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activities吧，名词要用形容词来修饰）大致挑了几个明显的，不知道你是考什么？四六级？给多少分那是老师管的事……你重复的动词用的太多，句式简单，不要总是用make，take这样的词；另外为了使文章丰富生动，尽量去用形容词修饰每个名词和代词，副词去修饰其他成分，不要用错了。祝你好运。
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