请高手帮俺检查一下这篇英语小作文！请高手多多指点，细致检查，谢谢合作！！
Whether we should open school campus as tourist attractions?此句话明显成分残缺，根本没有表达完整的意思。帮你改成：Whether we should open school campus for tourist or not is under debate.
In campus tourism increasingly hot today,school campus whether it should open became the focus of the topic. 这句话改成：With the capus tourism increasing intensely, school campus whether it should open their tourism or not become the focus topic.
So, whether we should be college campus open?这句话改成：Then, how should we open college campus tourism?
Some people think that opening campuses as tourist attractions is wrong.你的介词用错了，不是用as，是用for。
Opening the campus badly damaged campus environment and safety. 这句话改成：It is badly damaged the safety of campus environment for opening the campus.
However, some people think that opening campuses can let students and social more produce exchange. .
Let the students to their study direction has certain cognitive.这句话明显的成分残缺，不完整。
这两句话改成：However, some people think opening campuses can make students get more social chance to deal with others and recognise thier study direction tendency.
On the one hand may in students' vacation time opening campuses. In students' learning period close campus or opening part of campus.
改成：In my opinion, it can open in students' vacation time or students' learning period close campus and opening part of campus.
你的语法需要加强，句子中有很多都不成句，句子残缺以及意思混乱严重。
个人建议：
你需要从语法看起，读，记，背，体会语法以及语法应用情况，了解句子结构（包括词性，成分作用以及用法，句子构成，从句，语法现象以及用法等等）
词汇量方面，需要多记固定的句子表达以及单词。
语音，多跟着书本模仿，当然英语书本的难度一定要与你自己的实际水平相一致。
祝你学习进步！
英文句子中词语没有错误，只有个别地方有比较小的失误。
Christmas Day is coming.I have to send this e-mail ahead of it because I can only surf on the internet once a week( I am a high school student).
The heavy schoolwork makes me so busy that I can't have enough sleep.When I am tired I will read the story Falls Chance which will make me feel better.To be sincere, this is the best English story that I've ever read.You and Rolf are really great writers.
Wishing you all the blessings of a beautiful Christmas season.
I have a goodtime with it. had→have 写作文注意要时态一致，讲的都是现在的事情，而不是过去发生现在不存在了，用现在时态。
It has soft, yellow feathers, which keeps the little duckling warm and comfortable. 可合并为一句。写作文注意尽量同样的词少重复、主语一致。
While as a duck, it seldom says it wants to swim. 鸭子一般是善于和喜欢游水的，而亲你的鸭子很少说想去游泳，为了使行文连贯突出，遂加While as a duck 尽管作为鸭子。
就这些吧 你的作文还可以的。注意行文多用连词。
My Amazing Pet Can Talk
I have a duckling as my pet, and I have had it for a good some time now. It is a special pet. It has yellow and soft feathers, which keep the duckling warm. The most amazing thing is that it can talk. What a joy! Every time when I step into the balcony, where I keep my duckling, it will shout,"I am hungry and bring me something to eat!" Then, it will jump and jump, and will not stop doing so until I give it some shrimp to eat. The strange thing about it is it almost never says it wants to swim. A month ago, it said it wanted to go out and play. What a cute duckling!
我在语法，语句，标点符号等地方做了修过，希望对你有帮助。
I have a small pet TalksI ducks as my pet. I have a row with it. It has a yellow feathers. It's feather aresoft. It makes little duck warm and comfortable. This is a special pet. The most amazing thing is that it talks. How interesting! When I walked into the balcony, it will shout loudly: "I'm hungry, give me something to eat!" Then its jumping and jumping until I give it some shrimpsto to eat. It rarely said it wanted to swim. A month ago, it said it wanted Togo to play! A cute, little duck!
倒数第二行“.”大写
我觉得很好
没语法上的错误
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