这段话～english～看看对不对
首先想说的是，因为不知道你的用途，所以不敢随便下结论，但是作为一篇文章来讲还是太过记流水账了....不管是中文还是英文...
我帮你语法上修改了一下 ，参见下文
This is our trip to Cairo. Cairo is the capital of Egypt, Egypt's largest city.
We set off at 4:10 in the afternoon of October 2nd and then took a bus to my hotel which caused about 18 yuan.
My hotel was located in the centre of Cairo, and it only take us ten minute to walk to the Nile and the museum. We stayed there for six nights and that caused 649 yuan.
In the afternoon we went to the Egyptian Museum. The tickets were 75 yuan. In the Egyptian Museum holds Tutan Carmen's gold mask which belongs to a eighteen year old young pharaoh, Tutan Carmen. The Second days we went to the Nile. The Nile is the longest river in the world and the Nile calls for the moon in the Indian language.
On the third day we took the subway and changed into a taxi to reach the Sphinx. Sphinx was built by a man named Bhave, and it has a beautiful legend.
The fourth day we went to Memphis. This is the place of the earliest pyramid, and there's a huge statue of Ramses II and I really like the story of Ramses II.
The fifth day, we came to Egypt's most famous Pyramid, the mysterious and ancient architecture, one of the world's eight major architectural wonders.
The sixth day, we came to the rare Lalili market, this is the best place to buy souvenirs. 【后面那句话我不知道你想表达什么意思就先删掉了】There's a lot of souvenirs about Egyptian culture.
In these days, we can not help but see the Egyptian culture and scenery, but also to taste a lot of food here. Egyptians like meat and sweets. The kappa step, and ful medames, sandwiches, and many local dessert balackberry brown sugar meringue and Basbousa topped with walnut
On the last day we rode a camel in the desert to play a lap. And then in the afternoon , we left Cairo. In these days we fare about 100 of the fare consumption of about 300, the other 500 of the total consumption of 12889【这句话我也不太清楚你的意思 所以没改 但是肯定是有语法错误的】
Cairo trip ended, bye bye!
The world is so big that i can't find you,and the world is so small that i lose you.
Lose 应该用过去式.其他都可以。
The world is so big that I can't find you,and the world is so small that I lost you.
世界如此大我不能找到你，时间如此小我竟失去了你。
Good morning/afternoon,dear teachers,it's my honor to have the chance to introduce myself.
My name is bi tingyu,aged 13.you can call me suphie (sophie?). i’m from no.5 middle school.
In my spare time,I like reading books, watching tv,listening to music and surfing the internet.
I’m keen on science fictions,detective novels and magic fantasies. i love harry potter best,because it’s exciting and it gives me a magic world that I can fly in full of imageneition.i also like original and novel films, such as the lord of the ring. i’m fond of playing ping-pong,I think it’s a good sport that can make me happy and keep me in good health. i love music,espersially light music.music can change my mood,I really enjoy it.
I’m calm and quiet.i love science and I wanna be a scienctist in the future.to achieve the dream, I must study very hard, which i think I am doing.
Nothing seek nothing find is my motto.i think if we ask more,think more,seek more,we’ll solve and find more.
In my opinion,love is the most important thing in our life.life without love is unhappy and boring no matter how succesful and rich you are.i love this sentense:where there is love,there is wealth and success.
That’s all for my speech. i’m just myself—a special girl. thank you.
您好，亲爱的老师，我很高兴站在这里，谢谢你给我这个机会自我介绍。
我的名字是毕tingyu ，年龄13.you可以给我打电话suphie ，这是我的英语name.i '米，由5号中学。
在我的空余时间，我喜欢读的书籍，看电视，听音乐和浏览互联网。
我热衷于科幻小说，侦探小说和魔术fantasy.i爱哈利波特最好的，因为它的令人振奋的，它让我有一个魔术世界，我可以飞在它充满imageneition.i也想原来的小说和电影，像上帝的ring.i '米喜欢玩乒乓，我认为这是很好的运动，可以让我高兴，并让我在良好的health.i爱音乐， espersially轻music.music可以改变我的心情，我很喜欢它。
我很平静和quiet.i热爱科学，我想成为一个scienctist ，在future.to让梦想成真，我必须学习非常努力，虽然我已做得很好，在我的学习。
没有寻求没有找到我motto.i认为，如果我们要求更多，多想想，寻求更多，我们将解决和寻找更多。
我认为，爱情是最重要的东西，我们life.life没有爱情是不愉快和沉闷，无论怎样成功和丰富的are.i爱你，这sentense ：只要有爱，有财富和成功。
这是我所有的speech.i '米只是我自己-一个特别girl.thank你听。
单词可能打错。还有有些首字母或i没大写。这没关系。主要看语法对了没哊。
很好啊
至少有三年的英语基础,"The students have a three-year Englis
标准答案：这句话的英语是可以的。或者有一定语言文化后，也可以反着说：The students have learnt English at least 3 years.
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凤柳布瑞： 应该说Whom do you write to? 因为句末的to是介词 所以句首应该用宾格 who的宾格是whom
双柏县14712526633： 一句英语句子,看看对否? - ？
凤柳布瑞： that可以引导宾语从句,主语从句,同位语从句正确. 此句that引导的是同位语从句,引导的同位语从句是来解释sentence的内容(I'll be able to be a scientist)的
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凤柳布瑞：[答案] 可以翻译成: 看看我们中国人的英语、、 如果你确实需要这个意思、那就对了、
双柏县14712526633： 帮忙看看这句英语句子对不 - ？
凤柳布瑞： 正确,不需要变化形式! conj,介词 adv.副词 adj.形容词
双柏县14712526633： ＂这句话是英文＂对不对?？
凤柳布瑞： There is English
双柏县14712526633： 来看看这个英语句子对不对？
凤柳布瑞： “我喜欢和我爱的人在一起”I like to stay with the person who I love.
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