英语改错“This is problemis very important.We'll farther......"
Dear Amy，I have a problem，but I’m writing to ask you for（这里改成I’m writing to you to ask for较好） an （把an改为some或者直接去掉an，因为advice是不可数名词）advice．this is a secret，so don’t tell anyone else．My cousin and I used to getting（use to do sth，这里getting改为get）along very well in(把in改为with，get along well with的意思是与----相处融洽) each other and we were good friend（friend要加S）．Last week we talked about our plan and we are （把are改为were）planning to spend the summer holidays together，but now I don’t think I want（这里要加一个to） invite him home．Recently I has discovered that he’s started to tell lies．When I told him it was wrong to tell lies。but she（这个人到底男的女的？你打错了，你用him ，he ，his，这怎么蹦出个she来？是he吧？） just laughed at me．“should I keep quietly（keep是持续性系动词，后接形容词，quietly改为quiet） or tell his parents？”
It is important to deal with the rubbish in cities.rubbish must be treated properly. Otherwise it may cause a lot of problems. It may pollute the air and water. When people breathe the polluted air and drink the polluted water,they may get ill.our city has begun to pay attention to the problem.as far as I know,much rubbish is sent to different factories. Rubbish ,such as old newspapers and giass,are recycled. waste gas is cleaned before it is poured into rivers. we should pass laws to pretest people from throwing rubbish everywhere. We should do our best to take care of the environment.
this problem is very importantproblem前面不要有那个is
This problem is very important. We’ll further discuss it
把第一个is去掉
不要is
