请帮忙检查一下这篇短文，如有错误，请提出，谢谢！（文章内容关于天津意式风情街）

请帮忙检查一下这篇短文，如有错误，请提出，谢谢！~

整体不错，有几点需要修改
第一、one of the most beautiful cities(中国漂亮的城市有很多，此处用复数；另外，one of后也跟复数）
第二, we are lack of water, air pollution,traffic congestion,注意到lack of后面的三个名词，你想要表达的是缺水，空气污染严重，交通拥堵，那么用lack of 只表达了缺水，所以应该修改为we are lack of water, serious air pollution and traffic congestion
第三,And we believe we can solve the problems soon and make this city better and better.这句话你连续用了3个and,且不说在语感上，就说你这句是想要对前文的内容进行转折，“以上问题存在，但是 我们会尽快解决”所以，建议你把第一个AND改成But
第四,Hoping you can come here in the future,so much for this.首先，应该是Hope you can come 而不是Hoping.而且这句话最好的表达方式是Hope you would come to visit one day.
So much for this 应该放在Hope 前。应该为; So much for this time,hope you would come to visit one day.

你看一下，然后自己修改重新排序。

你求解析式，最后不是应该y关于x的解析式嘛，怎么还会有k ，最后的结果应该是y＝（）x±（）

Welcome to Tianjin Italian-Style Area.It lies on the south of Tianjin Hebei District.It’s famous for beautiful historical places.It’s the unique Italian-Style building resources,people can see different periods buildings .It also includes over 30 former residences of celebrities,e.g. Liang Qichao,Cao Yu…Every year it attracted many visitors,that made it become the communication in economy and culture between China and foreign countries.

把of this style去掉 eg 改为for an example或者for a instance it will attract 改为it attracted

可把of this style去掉 eg 改为for an example或者for a instance it will attract 改为it attracted

抱歉啊 我不知道是英文的 我也是个学生 英语水平不高

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