高中英语作文好的开头句子,关于建议方面的?

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高中英语作文建议信万能开头?~

一天,老师带领同学们去植树。路上,同学们排着整齐的队伍。天气很好,蓝天上飘着朵朵白云,春天真美啊。老师给我们分了工,我们大家就分头干了起来。
同学们先挖树坑,挖完后把小树苗放进去,再填上土,最后再给小树苗浇点水,一棵小树就种好了。大家干得兴高采烈。小刚和小红干得特别认真。小红扶着小树苗,小刚给小树苗填土,小树苗种好了,他们都高兴地笑了。经过一个上午紧张愉快的劳动,同学们在小土坡上种了几十棵小树苗。看着自己的劳动成果,同学们心里高兴极了,在老师的带领下,满意地回去了。
评改意见:从文章中我们可以看出,小作者没有认真审题,弄清题意。题目要求在观察中看看图上画的是什么季节,都有谁,他们在干什么,特别强调要注意近处两个人的动作,因此文章的重点应写图画上近处两个学生植树时的动作,分几步写清楚植树的过程,这些在文章中并没有具体地介绍,对人物动作的描写只是“小红扶着小树苗,小刚给小树苗填土。”怎样扶,怎样填,以及他们是怎样挖坑,怎样互相配合,小作者都没有写清楚。观察的不细致,反映在文章中,就让人感到语言简单,内容空洞。因而在人物的语言,神态等方面,小作者缺乏想象。描写主要人物的神态,只有一句“他们都高兴地笑了”,没有一句对话,使图画的内容并没有在读者的眼前像放电影一样活起来,显得死板。文章内容松散,有时与主题脱节。开头部分老师带同学们去植树,具体的时间,地点,原因都没有写。“同学们排着整齐的队伍”一句更显得突兀,对天气的描写与赞美,本来可以与植树联系起来,但又被作者忽视了。对劳动过程的描写,作者用“先怎样,再怎样,最后怎样”一笔带过。没有劳动的场面,没有具体的人物活动。图中的学生们从他们手里的工具以及动作可以看出,他们有的在挖坑,有的在浇水,有的扛来小树苗,有的自己干,有的两三个人一起干。文章中没有描述。主要人物的描写中,也让我们不能了解植树的步骤,过程是怎样的。
文章结尾没有起到点明中心,深化主题的作用。“在老师的带领下,满意地回家了。”满意什么,为什么满意?劳动的结果只是种了几十棵树,植树的意义何在?读后并没有使人受到教育,明白植树对保护环境,对人类生存的重要性。这是文章的一大不足。

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写作25个加分句型 �0�2 一、~ ~~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) �0�2 /~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) �0�2 例句:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. �0�2 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 �0�2 Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. �0�2 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。 �0�2 �0�2 二、 Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V / Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V �0�2 例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education. �0�2 没有比接受教育更重要的事。 �0�2 �0�2 三 、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。 ) �0�2 例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. �0�2 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。 �0�2 �0�2 四、 There is no denying that + S + V ...(不可否认的...) �0�2 例句:There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. �0�2 不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。 �0�2 �0�2 五、 It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道...) �0�2 例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. �0�2 全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。 �0�2 �0�2 六、 There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的...) �0�2 例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. �0�2 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。 �0�2 �0�2 七、 An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的优点是...) �0�2 例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create (produce) any pollution. �0�2 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。 �0�2 �0�2 八、 The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的原因是. ..) �0�2 例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. �0�2 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 �0�2 �0�2 九、 So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 (如此...以致于...) �0�2 例句:So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it. �0�2 时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。 �0�2 �0�2 十、 Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~ (虽然...) �0�2 例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不} �0�2 虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。 �0�2 �0�2 十一、 The + ~er + S + V, �0�2 / ~~~the + ~er + S + V ~~~ �0�2 The + more + Adj + S + V, / ~~~the + more + Adj + S + V~~~(愈...愈...) �0�2 例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make. �0�2 你愈努力,你愈进步。 �0�2 The more books we read, the more learned we become. �0�2 我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。 �0�2 �0�2 十二、 By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借着...,..能够..) �0�2 例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. �0�2 借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。 �0�2 �0�2 十三 、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (..使..能够..) �0�2 例句:Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. �0�2 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。 �0�2 �0�2 十四、 On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能...) �0�2 例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. �0�2 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 �0�2 �0�2 十五、 It is time + S + 过去式 (该是...的时候了) �0�2 例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems. �0�2 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。 �0�2 �0�2 十六、 Those who ~~~ (...的人...) �0�2 例句:Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished. �0�2 违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。 �0�2 �0�2 十七、 There is no one but ~~~ (没有人不...) �0�2 例句:There is no one but longs to go to college. �0�2 没有人不渴望上大学。 �0�2 �0�2 十八、 be + forced / compelled / obliged + to + V (不得不...) �0�2 例句:Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports. �0�2 既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。 �0�2 �0�2 十九、 It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的) �0�2 It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的) �0�2 It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的) �0�2 例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. �0�2 可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。 �0�2 �0�2 二十、 That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是...的原因) �0�2 例句:Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don’t like it. �0�2 夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。 �0�2 �0�2 二十一、 For the past + 时间,S + 现在完成式...(过去...年来,...一直...) �0�2 例句:For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination. �0�2 过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。 �0�2 �0�2 二十二、 Since + S + 过去式,S + 现在完成式。 �0�2 例句:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. �0�2 自从他上高中,他一直很用功。 �0�2 �0�2 二十三、 It pays to + V ~~~ (...是值得的。) �0�2 例句:It pays to help others. �0�2 帮助别人是值得的。 �0�2 �0�2 二十四、 be based on (以...为基础) �0�2 例句:The progress of thee society is based on harmony. �0�2 社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。 �0�2 �0�2 二十五、 Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的) �0�2 例句:We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. �0�2 我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 �0�2


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