英语短文改错 学的好的达人 帮帮忙啊 一共10处 请一一指出啊 先谢谢了啊
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第一行：by the plane 应为 by plane
第二行：tirp 应为 trip
第三行：must went 改为 must go
第四行：arrived Beijing 应为 arrived in Beijing
第六行：place 改为 places
第七行： impressing 改为 impressed
第八行：had 改为 were
第八行busttook估计你是打错了
第九行：photoas 应为 photos they 改为 we
最后一行：roast 应为roasted real 改为 really
按照文章先后顺序：
1. meeting和discuss中间加入to
2. go boating改成going boating
3. and going改成or going
4. we decide改成we decided
5. warmly sunshine改成warm sunshine
6. to the top中的to去掉
7. were shocking改成were shocked
8. they started改成we started
9. pick out改成pick up
10. and happy改成but happy
how time flies.I've （gone）(been) here for half a year.there (has) (is) so much to
do in college,so there is very little (times) (time) for (sleep) (sleeping).My parents always
remind me that it is important to take an advantage of all that is available
in college. But it's equal important to take care of my own (healthy) (health).
For this reason,I've started going to the gym more often.I (sometime) (sometimes) go to the
movies to have fun.There is no room for boredom here;I just wish I (have) (had)
more hours a day.As you can tell.I'll (be) very happy.Thanks (for) asking!
I hope you are happy,(either) (too)!
how time flies---how quickly time flying
.I've gone here ----.I've been here
there has so much to do in college,so there is very little times for sleep--
there is so much to do in college and quite little time to sleep
an advantage --- advantage
equal--the same
healthy--health
I've started going ---I've been starting
sometime --- sometimes
to have fun---for fun(你原来的也对，只是不美观）
boredom --bedroom
I just wish Ihave ----I just wish i had
As you can tell.I'll very happy.Thanks asking!
I hope you are happy,either!-----------with best wishes
1.gone-been has-is
2.times-time sleep-sleeping
3.an-去掉
4.equal-euqally healthy-health
5.sometime-sometimes
6.have-had
7.I'll-I'm Thanks-Thanks for
8.either-too
dear Jane
how time flies.I've （1gone改成been） here for half a year.there （2has改成is） so much to do in college,so there is very little （3times改成time） for sleep.Myparents always remind me that it is important to take an advantage of all that is available in college. But it's （4equal改成equally） important to take care of my own （5healthy改成 health
）. For this reason,（6I've去掉ve） started going to the gym more often.I （7sometime改成sometimes） go to（8加个see） the movies to have fun.There is no room for boredom here;I just wish I have more hours a day.As you can tell.I'll very happy.Thanks（9for） asking!
I hope you are happy,（10either改成 too）!
I've been here
there is so much
little time
all (things) that are不确定
own health
I started
I sometimes
go to the movies?没打全
I just wish I had more
I am very happy
Thanks for asking
happy, too
修改如下:has--have
is available 去掉
equal ---equally
healthy---health
sometime --sometimes
to have fun-- have fun
here---here去掉
As you can tell---If you can tell
I'll very happy--I'll be very happy
Thanks asking!---Thanks for asking!
东廖化积：[答案] 1 by plain 2 earlier→early 3 went→go 4 arrived in 5 places 6 like→such as 7 more 8 impressed 9 had→were 10 real→really
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