小女子不才，写了一封英文信，请高人指点一二，只求意思通顺无歧义就好。拜谢~

小女子不才，写了一封英文信，请高人指点一二，只求意思通顺无歧义就好。拜谢~~

以前我们在一起学习的时候只欣赏你的作品你对我的启发和影响很大，现在你又亲自带来你的书对我又是一个很大的帮助，我细细的看了你的作品，一直被克莱尔的诗和你作品中所反映的那种意境感动，久久不能忘怀文采也很好值得我学习。感谢老天的安排让我们相识，我很珍惜我们的友谊。
When we studied MA course together, I was influenced by your art. I got many inspiration from your works. Now I have read your book carefully, I can feel the kind of artistic conception from Clare's poems and your images and your literary grace as well. These are worth studying for me. Thank for God's arranging us to meet, I cherish our friendship a lot.
我现在在写一篇论文我们的学科带头人也是政府文化部门的负责人。他对你的作品也很赞赏，我想以你的才华和作品在中国办画展如果你有兴趣，我愿意把你的作品介绍给更多的中国人，你要是感兴趣的话。
Now I'm working on a dissertation, and our course leader is the chief of city government culture department. He has good comments on your works, too. I think that with your talent, you can have an exhibition in China if you like. I will help you introduce your arts to more Chinese, if you are interest.

中国和英国都是古老的有传统文化的国家，我现在参与一个课题是比较中西文化。我在那段留学时光也从你身上学到了不少东西，这个年纪还在求学，受到你的影响，我想这可能是佛菩萨的安排，把约翰克莱尔的诗你的作品带来中国。美是不分国度的。不受语言的影响。都会受到灵魂的冲击。引起共鸣。我觉得你的作品酷似中国传统的农民画有相似之处，我相信我去英国学习是有使命的，我们的相遇也是一种缘分。我愿意做这项工作，把你的作品中的美分享给中国人。
Both China and Britain have long histories and traditional culture, I want to compare the two cultures, which is what I am working for. I learnt more from you when I was studying abroad. As you said in your book:'Had I been a little more alert I might have thought about trying out a few more in this vein, but actually I then forgot about it for a decade, though something must have stayed at the back of my mind.' I believe that there is a mission I went to study in England, that was to bring John Clare's poems and your arts to China. There is no boundary as to art. I feel that there is a relationship between your work and Chinese rural painting. I'm glad to share your works with Chinese people.


我跟你介绍下我的工作，我正在研究想进行一些对比的工作。对比在以下几个方面：1色彩 2.地域 3.受到的影响你是约翰的诗，我们是民间传说。4.技法，丝网和版画。可能会用到你的文字和作品。希望你能支持和帮助我。
我希望你能再次来到中国，把你的艺术和才华带来我们东方人民。
Then, I want to introduce my plan, comparing the two countries' works in the following aspects: 1. colour 2. region 3. influence (You are influenced by Clare's poetry, we are influenced by folklore). 4. Techniques.
I may quote your text and works in my subject. Hope you support and help me.

Hope you come and sharing your art to Oriental people.

以前也经常跟大学的日语外教写信，都好久不写了，简单的写了以下一些内容，内容都有些工作化了，尽量写的柔和了一些，供你参考


××先生：

　私は××です、お元気ですか？メリークリスマス！
　いままでいろいろお世话になってまことにありがとうございました。
　ヒアリングの授业を受けて本当にいい勉强になりました。自分がもっと顽张らなければならないですね。これから教えていただくところもいっぱいあると思いますので、どうぞよろしくお愿いいたします。
今度中国にいらっしゃるとき、ぜひご连络お愿いいたします。

最後、お体を大切するようにお祈りいたします。

以上、なにとぞよろしくお愿いいたします。

Now I’m working on a dissertation (个人意见这句话和后面的没关系).our course leader who is the chief of city government culture department （watched） your works, and ( gave highly commend on it). I think with your talent, maybe it’s time to have an exhibition in China. I will help you to introduce your arts to more Chinese, if you are interest.

China and Britain (both)are ancient and have traditional culture countries, I want to compare the two culture difference and similar, which is I working for.(now i am working on a topic which is about the difference and similiar of culture between the two countrys ) I have (leart much) from you since that time, in your age still in academic study assiduously.(个人认为这句话汉语的语义也表达得不是很清晰) As you said in your book:“Had I been a little more alert I might have thought about trying out a few more in this vein, but actually I then forgot about it for a decade, though something must have stayed at the back of my mind.”（说实话，引号内的话我没看明白）I believe that there is（was） a mission I went to study in England, that is bring John Clare’s poems and your arts to China.(i belive that i went to study in Englian with a mission and it is to bring your asrts to china) Art is regardless of the state (and) language, it (impacts) (on) our souls. I feel that there is a relationship between your work and Chinese rural painting. I’m glad to (show) your Art to Chinese people.

Following, I want to introduce my plan (to you), (i want to do some contrastion) in the following aspects: 1. colour 2. region 3. influence (You are influenced by Clare's poetry, we are influenced by folklore). 4. Techniques.
I may quote your text and works in my subject. Hope you (will ) support and help me.

Hope you come and (share) your art to Oriental people.

我根据我自己的意见改后面三段，（改得不好的地方请原谅~）希望能对你有所帮助~

What a hot day today, I can imagine how beautiful Northampton it is now.
What a fantastic reunion we had in 798 last time, i am very grateful for those heavy books you brought for me from far away.
How’s Clare and your dog?

During the period we’ve been studied together on MA Course, I was benefited and inspired a lot by your talents via reading your painting.
It’s so delighted to read your newly delivered books, what a timely help!
I am very moved by the artistic conception from Clare’s poem and your paintings, you both are exceptional literary talents I never met before, I am sure.
To be honestly, I do cherish the friendship between us, and I believe something is predestinated, like the reunion, we call it fate, in China.

When we 【studied】 MA course, I was 【great】 influenced by your art 【and】got 【so】many inspirations from you. 【Recently】 I have read your book 【carefully】, I 【am moved by the 】artistic conception from Clare’s poems and your 【imagination】 and literary grace as well. These are 【all】 worth studying for me. Thank god's 【arrangment】 to 【make us encounter】, I 【will】 cherish our friendship 【forever】.

- - 我无意看到 改了一段…… 改的不好或有错误见谅啊……

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