As is vividly demonstrated in the picture above, the Internet is a spider web of thousands of netwo

04 As is vividly demonstrated in the picture above, a man is running toward the end of a race~

第一句中，toward应该是towards

第二段第六句中people应该是people's
可以写为
What's more, the progress of the society is based on everybody's/everyone's unceasing effort.

其它很好

楼主用词很大，驾驭能力略显不足，也不好说什么
我只能指出几处语法硬伤：
第一段末most如为最高级应加定冠词the most，如果是“大部分”的意思应该用副词mostly.
第二段ill-treat三次用到均应改为ill-treating.
第三段on one hand足矣，没有on the one hand之说.
最后一段倒数第二句environmental protection是指环境保护，为什么养老的话题会牵涉到呼吁立法奖励环境保护？大概是词不达意了.
最后一句building改为build.

1.As is vividly demonstrated in the picture above. As 后加It
2.businesses 是不可数名词
3.millions of individuals 没见过这种表达,用 people 保险一点
4.Internet has a great influence on our lives. influence 是可数名词，前面是很多的意思，故加s
5.Internet since the early 90’s, 改成英文格式是90's，还有一处也是
6.the communication between us becomes more and more frequent. No matter where they live, it is always very easy to express feeling to them if you would like·· between 改 among，前面是 us 后面宾格又成了 them, feeling 是可数名词
7.the meeting between friends are fewer and fewer meeting 很容易理解为会议 meet 有集会的意思,between 改 among，前者一般是表两者之间
8.we must learn to balance the fictitious and real life 后半句改下 balance the life between the fictious and the real one.

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宝兴县18048134064： 03 As is vividly demonstrated in the pictures above,the tender flower blossoms inside the greenhou英语作文,帮我看看有没有语法错误、用词不当以及怎样... - ？
谈秋悦康：[答案] 这篇最好,没有什么错

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宝兴县18048134064： as 用方式状语造句 ,as 后面的as is vividly shown in the pic - ？
谈秋悦康： As it is vividly shown in the picture.就像这样生动地展示在照片里.加个it形式主语

宝兴县18048134064： as is vividly indicated in the above chart,a young guy is sitting on the …… - ？
谈秋悦康： AS引导了非限制定于从句(和WHICH一样,但WHICH只能用在句中) 也就是说,AS后面句子的主语其实就是逗号之后的句子 所以你看不到IT还原的话就是 a young guy is sitting on the ……,as is vividly indicated in the above chart.或者可以这样 that a young guy is sitting on the ……is vividly indicated in the above chart.其中that可以是句子名词化,这样就可以做主语了,不然一个句子是无法做主语的,也就是为什么你那句话里用了AS的原因了~~

宝兴县18048134064： As is vividly demonstrated in the picture above, a football match is going on. On guarding the goal - ？
谈秋悦康： As is vividly depicted in the picture above, a football match is going on. On guarding the goal, the man on the left tries hard to keep the goal as if he is completing 'Mission Impossible'; while the person on the right hesitates to kick the ball with a false ...

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宝兴县18048134064： 04 As is vividly demonstrated in the picture above, a man is running toward the end of a race - ？
谈秋悦康： 第一句中,toward应该是towards 第二段第六句中people应该是people's 可以写为 What's more, the progress of the society is based on everybody's/everyone's unceasing effort.其它很好

宝兴县18048134064： arcgis 10.2等高线转DEM - ？
谈秋悦康： 1)首先我们要将等高线转换为TIN.在ArcGIS中,加载3D Analyst工具条,按照下图,依次点击3D Analyst—>Create/Modify TIN—>Create TIN from features….(2)在弹出的对话框中,在Layers(下图④处)中勾选需要生成TIN的等高线图层,在...

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