英语作文 来自英国的学生到中国高中中学参加音乐俱乐部,写申请信
呵呵，对于第一次写英语作文，你已经很不错了。但问题还是有的。
1.British school and chinese school is different 。这里的表达上不是很好，可以改为
schools in britain are different from thoses in china.其实最好的呢是用（educational system教育系统）这个词来代替school你以后自然就会了。
2.i like get up late 一个小错误，like doing/to do 不能直接加动词原形。（i like getting up late)
3.subject is different ,sujects are different 要用复数。
4.British school have English literature。这里呢要注意动词的单数第三人称啊，(schools)而且English literature也可以就简单说english.
5. I think English literature be equal to chinese(be 改成is).
6.British school have cooking but china do not have （schools ,还有cooking 后最好加个class.当然不能说but china do not have
没有关系代词thoses，改为but thoses in china do not have.)
7.here in before 只是个错误的直译啊，应该为all the above are ……differences最后要用复数啊。
继续加油吧。希望能对你有帮助。
如下：
“中国传统音乐”是指中国人运用本民族固有方法；采取本民族固有形式创造的、具有本民族固有形态特征的音乐，不仅包括在历史上产生、流传至今的古代作品，还包括当代作品，是我国民族音乐中一个极为重要的组成部分。
"Chinese traditional music" refers to music created by Chinese people by their own national methods and in their own national forms, which includes not only ancient works produced in history and spread up to now, but also contemporary works, and is an extremely important part of Chinese national music.
组成部分
“中国音乐”则不仅指古代传承下来的音乐，也指中国人按西方理论创作和改编的音乐。
“中国传统音乐”是指中国人运用本民族固有方法、采取本民族固有形式创造的、具有本民族固有形态特征的音乐，不仅包括在历史上产生、流传至今的古代作品，还包括当代作品。
传统音乐是我国民族音乐中一个极为重要的组成部分，传统音乐与新音乐的区别并不在于创作时间的先后，而是在于其表现形式及风格特征。
传统音乐的划分最早见于中国音乐研究所编写的《民族音乐概论》，分为五大类：歌曲、歌舞音乐、说唱音乐、戏曲和器乐，但大多院校在教学中把歌舞音乐并入民歌，于是就变成四大类：民歌、民族器乐、曲艺（即“说唱”）音乐、戏曲音乐。
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families tor the British students．
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I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them．Looking forward to your reply．
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