请各位英语高手帮我找找翻译的错误，或者有什么更好的表达，高级语句也行

请各位英语高手帮我找出翻译的错误，或者优美或高级的句子~

1 "我明白了一个道理" It occurred to me that......句型较好
"整天没事地站在那里" 译成"stand there all day" 太拘泥于表面形式了!为什么不意译成"keep an idle life_style
2 "必须" 译成have to较合英语习惯 must be stand... be 去掉
3 "practise myself hardly " hardly是个大错!它的意思是"几乎不" "严厉"用"tough"合适. 即:get a tougher training 或 be more self_motivated也可以.
4 ",which can make me stronger and stand " 改为"so that I will be able to..."目的状语从句
5"花了太多钱了" 译得辞不达意 用"spoil too much money"较合适. 后面
6"该省省了" 译为 I must abondon the practice.
7"对我好像没什么意思" = show no sign of keeping company with me 或 show no willingness to date me
8"也许我想太多了" 译为" maybe I have it a burden on my mind.
总之,希望作者摒弃汉语式的思维习惯和行文习惯

那是我日夜思念深深爱着的人啊that's the one i have been missing days and nights,the one I deeply loved

That is my day and night miss deep love man that 's the one I have been missing days and nights, the one I deeply loved

到底我该如何表达,她会接受我吗How the heck can I express it?Will she accept me?

Exactly How do I express, she will accept me? How the heck can I express it? Will she accept me?

也许永远都不会跟她说出那句话Maybe I'll never say those words to her.

Maybe never say to her that sentence Maybe I "l l never say those words to her.

注定我要浪迹天涯,怎么能有牵挂I was bound to wander around the world ,being free from care.

I want to roaming, how can have cared about I was bound to wander around the world, being free from care.

梦想总是遥不可及,是不是应该放弃Dreams are always unreachable .Should I give it up?

Dreams are unreachable, Should give up Dreams are always unreachable. Should I give it up?

花开花落又是一季,春天啊,你在哪里.

Blossom is one season, spring ah, where you are.

Flowers blossomed and flowers drooped.Oh,Spring,where are you?

Flowers blossomed and Flowers drooped. Oh, Spring, where are you?

青春如同奔流的江河,一去不回来不及道别Youth is like a turbulent river .Once gone,never back.

The Youth like running the rivers, never say goodbye to back less than Youth is like a turbulent river. Once gone, never back.

只剩下麻木的我没有了当年的热血Only leaving a numb me without the passion I had.

I have not Only numb that reached the blood Only leaving a numb me without the passion I had.

看那漫天飘零的花朵Seeing the flowers that are dancing in the sky

Look at the sky the fallen flowers Seeing the flowers that are dancing in happiest

在最美丽的时刻凋谢

In the most beautiful moment wither

drooping at their most beautiful

Drooping at their most beautiful

有谁会记得这世界它来过Who remembers that they have been to this world?

Who will remember this world it to Who remembers that they have been to this world?

转眼过去,多年世间,多少离合悲欢Time flew,people got together and farewelled

A moment in the past, many years the world, and how much on-off Time flew, people got together and farewelled

曾经志在四方少年羡慕南飞的雁There were teenagers who have great dreams and they admired the wild gooses.

Once at the four winds young envy the geese fly south There were teenagers who have great dreams and they admired the wild gooses.

各自奔前程的身影匆匆渐行渐远Travelling for their dreams,they gradually broke apart

Their future figure in a hurry rush habbit is Travelling for their dreams, they gradually broke apart

未来在哪里平凡,啊..谁给我答案In the future,where will we be ordinary?AH! Who can give me the answer?

In the future where ordinary, ah... Who gave me the answer In the future, where will we be ordinary? AH! Who can give me the answer?

那时陪伴我的人哪,你们如今在何方Those who accompanied me at that time,where are you now?

At that time to accompany my man, where you are now in Those who accompanied me at that time, where are you now?

我曾经爱过的人啊,现在是什么模样The one I loved ,what,s your appearance now?

I have loved man, now what shape is The one I loved, what, s your appearance now?

当初的愿望实现了吗,事到如今只好祭奠吗Have you accomplished your dreams ?

At the beginning the wishes realization of it by now had to memorial? Have you accomplished your dreams?

任岁月风干理想再也找不回真的我Ages killed my dreams ,andI can't find the real me back

Air drying ideal for years will no longer find back to really me Ages killed my dreams, andI can 't find the real me back

抬头仰望这漫天星河那时候陪伴我的那颗Look upon the stars in the sky.Look the star which accompanied me then

The sky looked up at the Milky Way is that time to accompany my that bright Look upon the stars in happiest, Look the star which accompanied me then

这里的故事你是否还记得.

Here story if you remember.

Do you still remember the stories here?

Do you still remember the stories here?

生活像一把无情刻刀,改变了我们模样.Life is like a NON-MERCY knife,changed our outlook

Life is like a ruthless kedao, changed our appearance. Life is like a as MERCY knife, changed our outlook

未曾绽放就要枯萎吗,我有过梦想Droop before blossom? I had dreams .

Not bloom will wither? I have a dream Droop before blossom? I had dreams

今天是我第一次用英语记日记,我将尽我最大努力把它放在英语,坚持每天保持它为什么我要写日记吗? 赫赫.那有一些理由。首先,我想提高我的英语写作和警告我学习更多,少玩些电脑游戏。此外,我想给我下来我每天会发生什麽事,我能体会到在未来,也和大家分享一个人的日子. 最后,也是最重要的,我想它能提醒我要做一个好人,我愿意,但有时我不能控制自己。我将不遗余力地成为一个有用的人,所以无聊的今天,我们课程的政党的那一天我本来不想去上课,因为我很少会在下午之前,没有干部贡献类,不要参加大学生党员,从而导致我却没有力量去竞争不过,我认为我的室友都想去上课,如果我有一个不在的时候,就意味着我没有机会参加了这所大学,所以我跟他们去我参加了一个？.？数学书研究和完成我的作业,但我可能会退出今天,我决定签署了大检查,文化我不想告诉父母,因为我怕会辜负我的父母了但是我真的会努力学习,我希望我能通过请我的父母和我的未来效益特有的在我的课上,有一个女人,她从不时看着我的眼睛,她向我打招呼谈论她亲爱的在qq,她会不理我昨天晚上我也说说她亲爱的,她不理我了,我也不管她我认为她不会说喂我,因为每次她不理我了,我就向她道歉但这一次我没有令我惊奇的是,她招呼我今晚,连她不敢看,我.赫赫独特的女性。

Today is my first time to write diary in English, I will try to use English to write and insist everyday to write. Why do I want to write a diary? Ha ha, there are several reasons, first, I want to improve my English writing and remind me learn more less playing computer games. In addition, I want to write down every day I happened, let I later can pry taste, can also share with someone, finally, also is one of the most important, I think he can remind me to be a good person, because many times, I want to do but sometimes can't control myself, I will try my best to do a good deed. Today very wearily, we are on the day of DangKe, originally I afternoon don't want to go, because I rarely do contribution, not before class cadre, also did not join student cause me to no strength to compete with others. Will only waste my time. However, I consider my roommates are to go, and if I missed the means that I am in this university had no chance into the party. So I still follow them to go, but I took this math book go there to study and to finish our homework. But I'm likely to quit. Today, I made a big decision to exam taken an examination of oneself, I didn't tell my parents. Because I was afraid I met again let them down, but I'll do my best to learn and hope I can test come over to enable parents happy, also good for my future. Strange, I class a woman, he greeted me completely didn't see me, and when I'm on the QQ spoke of his dear, he ignores me. Last night, another, he ignored me, I didn't also the back to her, I think she would never say

hehe？没有这个词吧？;
warn myself to do sth;
what happened就可以了，去掉to me;
At last ,also the most important 改为last but not the least;
I originally don't want~~将放在句首originally

warn me 应该是warn myself
play less computer games 应该是 play fewer 因为 game 是可数的
would like to wirte 拼错了
somebody 改成 someone

太多了吧

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