谁来帮我修改下英语的值日报告(初一的)..谢100
Duty Reports
No.1
A Report
by Gao Yin
Class 4, Senior I
Dear Mr Wang and my classmates,
Today is Thursday and it’s Sept. 10. It’s fine.
Today is Teachers’ Day. First, let me say : “HAPPY TEACHERS’ DAY!” to Mr Wang and all the other teachers. Teachers are gardeners. They are working hard to help us study well. Now we are students studying at school, and in the future, we will be builders of our great motherland. We should try our best to study hard and do well in our studies.
I like English very much. And I hope Mr Wang and my classmates will help me with my English so that I can make rapid progress in English.
Mr Wang, we are all here and get ready for the class.
That’s all. Thank you.
No. 2
A Report
by Yang Hui
Class 5, Senior I
Dear Miss Zhang and my classmates,
My name is Yang Hui. I’m on duty today. I’m very glad to have a chance to give you a duty report.
I was born in summer. Summer is a beautiful season. But I like autumn better. In autumn, the leaves turn yellow, and some of the birds are flying to the south. It gets cooler and cooler. The autumn wind blows gently on our faces and makes us feel pleasant. Autumn is a season of harvest. I hope that all of us will study harder and learn more in this golden season.
I studied in No. 3 Middle School last term, and now I’m studying at Deyang No.5 Middle School. I’ll put my heart into my studies and make great progress in this beautiful school.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
No.3
A Report
by Xiao Ming
Class 1, Senior I
Dear Ms Li and my classmates,
I’m Xiao Ming. Iam from Jinghua, a little town not far from Mianzhu County. Have you ever been to or heard of Jinghua? If not, I’d like to tell you something about her.
Jinhua, my hometown, is very beautiful. She lis in a valley. There are many mountains around her. And all the mountains are covered with trees and flowers. When spring comes, the leaves turn green and the flowers bloom everywhere. She looks really like a “golden flower”, just as her name means.
Great changes have place in my hometown in the past 20 years. Many tall buildins and new houses were set up in the town. New schools were opened. People’s life is getting better and better. The people in my hometown are working hard to make her more beautiful.
Last week we had a maths test. As I was not careful enough, I didn’t do well in it. In the days that followed, I was very sad. I make up my mind to study harder than before. I often think about the fact that others can do well in the test, why can’t I? I’m sure if I study as hard as others, I can certainly do as well.
So much for my report. Thanks for listening.
Good morning everyone. I'm on duty today. Today's lessons include:politics[ˈpɔlitiks], mathematics[ˌmæθiˈmætiks], computer[kəmˈpju:tə], English[ˈiŋɡliʃ], Arts[ɑ:ts] and Chinese[ˈtʃaiˈni:z]. Have a nice day! Thank you.
Good morning everyone ,I'm on duty today. Today is X day ,the weather is hot.Today I have several questions for you. First of all, What's your hobby? Um..I'm very much interested in music./I like music very much.
Secondly, what's your favourite food? /What kind of food do you like best? As is for me ,I like dessert most,such as, ice cream lemon pie ,iced tea.
Thirdly,what do you want to be in the future? I want to be an editor or a hostess.It is because I like Chinese and I want to have ajob in a TV station.
Besides,I asked my friends something about animals just now. The answers are various.Some like tigers.while others like birds.But most of them like monkeys and pandas.Monkeys are running and jumping all the time.They like eating nuts ,bananas,pears and many other things.Pandas are usually sitting there ,playing with their bady pandas or eating the food.They are friendly with children.
Finally/At last,thank you all （或用Many thanks）for listening to my duty report,I hope you have a good day today.
OK!Done.句式表达上有一些chinglish,少量拼写错误，总体来说还不错。经过修改，现在没问题了。
PS:英文写作和口语表达中尽量使用简单常见的句式，避免汉语思维直接翻译成英语。
1.hostess表示电视节目主持人，anchorwoman指的是新闻类节目播音员。具体想表达什么意思，你自己选。
另外hostess 常见意义为“女主人”，air hostess 空姐。
2.dessert 指（饭后）甜食（如馅饼、果馅饼、冰激凌等），当然像一些水果、甜酒之类的也可以作为甜食用于餐后。
Good morning everyone ,I'm on duty today. Today is X day ,the weather is hot.
Oh, What's your hobby? Um..i'm much interested in music
and what's food do you like? for me ,I like dessert,for example ice cream lemon pie ,iced tea.
next,what do you want to be ? i want to be an editor or hostess,Because i like chinese i want to work for TV station.
Just now ,I asked my friends about animals. Some like tigers.
some like birds.But most of them like monkeys and pandas.Monkey are running and jumping all the time.They like eating nuts, bananas,pears and many other things.Pandas are sitting there playing with their bady pandas or eating the food,They are friendly to children.
At last ,thank for listening to my report,i hope you have a good day today.
i'm very much in music 改为 l'm interested in music
what's food do you like 改为 what food do you like
about拼错
some拼错
Monkey are running ……改为Monkeys run and jump all the time
pearsand many other things 改为 pearsand and many other things
Pandas sitting there playing with their bady pandas or eating the food改为 Pandas sit there playing with their bady pandas or eat the food,
Good morning ，everyone.I'm on duty today. It is X day and hot.
Oh, What's your hobby? Um..I like music very much
and what food do you like? For me ,I like dessert,such as ice cream, lemon pie and iced tea.
next,what do you want to do in the future ? i want to be an editor or hostess,Because i like chinese i want to work for TV station.
Just now ,I asked my friends about animals, like tigers, comelikebifds.But most of them like monkeys and pandas.Monkeys are running and jumping all the time.They like eating nuts,bananas,pears,and many other things.Pandas sit there playing with their bady pandas or eating the food.Theyare friendly to children .
Finnally ,thank for listening to my report.i hope you have a good day today.
Good morning everyone ,I'm on duty today. Today is X day ,the weather is hot.
Oh, What's your hobby? Um..i'm very much in music
and what food do you like best? For me ,I like dessert.For example ,ice cream, lemon pie ,ice tea and so on.
Next,what do you want to be in the future? I want to be an editor or a hostess.Because I like chinese and I want to work for TV station.
Just now ,I asked my friends about animals. Some of them like tigers or birds.But most of them like monkeys and pandas.Monkeys are running and jumping all the time.They like eatingnuts,bananas,pears and many other things.Pandas often sit there playing with their badies or eating food,They are friendly to children .
Finally ,thank for listening to my duty report,I wish you a happy day today.
这是我改完的
呵呵，100分就是好使，这么多人回答，我也改改.
Good morning everyone ,I'm on duty today. Today is X day ,and (加个连接词)the weather is hot.(看看具体情况，万一不热呢...)
Oh, What's your(自己问自己？还是下面的同学问你？) hobby? Um..i think music is my favourite.(这句我基本上全改了)
and which kind of food do you like?(what's food是不对滴) For me ,I like dessert,such as (for example后跟句子较好)ice cream,lemon pie,chocolate and so on.(和这一类的,把你的冰茶改成巧克力了，个人觉得冰茶不是甜食)
next,what do you want to be ? I want to be an editor or an anchorwoman,for i like chinese,so i want to work for TV station. (把你的hostess改成anchorwoman了，我觉得hostess这词意思较多，有女主人，服务生，空姐...所以改成anchorwoman，这词主要就主持人的意思了，就是不知道你的同学能听懂不,还有喜欢中文？所以要在电视台工作？觉得没什么联系，建议改个理由)
I asked my friends about animals just now.(just now 放后面还舒服点) Some of them like tigers.Some like birds.But most of them like monkeys and pandas.Monkeys are always running and jumping.They like eating nuts,bananas,pears and many other things.Pandas like sitting there playing with their babies or having food.They are friendly to their children.
Finally,thanks(用thanks或thank you都行) for listening to my report,i hope you all will have a good time today.That'all.
祝你值日报告成功!记得放松。
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