笔译高手请试：一篇有关生产线介绍的汉译英

初次接触英语笔译，先学【英译汉】还是先学【汉译英】？本人非英语专业，想备考三级笔译~

这个问题我来回答吧。

我是英语专业的，我们当时学翻译的时候是先学英译汉的课程，后来一个学期才学了汉译英，所以建议楼主还是先学【英译汉】比较好，这也比较符合我们中国人的理解掌握过程；反之，如果一上来就学【汉译英】，根据我们的思维定势，很容易弄成“中式英语”，翻译句子时用汉语思维来翻，这样就会影响到以后的学习。


此外，楼主说的三级笔译是CATTI的三级笔译吗？我参加了这个考试，但是囧得很，翻译完的草稿没来得及全部誊抄上去，分数差两分通过...

我也参加过“上海市中级口译”的笔试和口试，而且通过了，但是综合起来来看，CATTI的三级笔译难度比中级口译的难度要大一些，所以建议楼主平时练习时要多扎实基本功、多对照时事新闻做翻译练习。网站上规定要看的教程一定要看的，从词汇到句型要一一熟悉掌握，教程和考试题型有不小联系，要不他们费老大劲出的书不就木有人买了嘛，呵呵


注：楼主真打算参加考试的话，建议在掌握教程的基础上，多看看博鳌论坛还有中央的大新闻和年度总结汇报。

Prior to the introduction I would like to tell you a story, when I was a child, I signed up to take part in the English class, so in the " A for Apple B for ball " times, every morning I can to say "good morning", then is my English level is the peak period of. However, when I entered high school, every day I live to play, until now, every day in the morning I and the friend to say hello: " good morning ", and every night I and greet friends also said: " good morning ". I come from a world famous small city -- Lijiang. It is a magical place, travelers can experience the fairyland in the scenic beauty, can be in a daze think about life in the city, can be a bar affair, can experience the most honest nation amorous feeling. Russian author Peter Goullart wrote a book about Lijiang 's book was called " Forgotten Kingdom ", in Lijiang you can find the forgotten the most pure of heart, Lijiang can also forget who make you upset. So impatient people in Lijiang be poker-faced quietly in a daze, who will be there to become crazy. If you want to forget or find their own inner world, close to me, near Lijiang. Travel to broaden their horizons and grow, so when I was a child, I like travel. From the beginning of high school, every holiday I do some social practice to earn some money, then alone to travel around, I saw many, harvest a lot of. Until now, I've traveled more than half of China, such as the mysterious Tibet Nam Co, such as the wonderful Jiangxi Mount Sanqingshan, such as the great Shandong of Taishan, such as the beautiful Sichuan Mount Emei. Fortunately, when I university student in Xiamen, I saw the past never see the beauty, I love Xiamen.

踩在各位巨人的肩上，小女子的译文如下

To meet domestic market and boost our constant development, we combined our own status and brought in a TV SET production line worth more than one million RMB in January, 2007. The product line was in operation in March. Thus, we totally acquired television production capacity. In addition to monitor, the formation of a new product series— LCD TV injects vitality into our profit earning capability and sustainable development.

The TV production Line consists of assembly line, aging line, testing line, repairing line and packaging line. There are four lines in the aging line and each line has two plies. In the line, the specially made aluminum alloy guide rail and nylon triple speed-increasing roller chain drive the work board ahead. The aging line and testing line have three rows of conductive wheel and the line body is made of thicken steel channel of 40mmx60mmx2.5mm. The operational height of assembly line is 700mm and the effective height of each ply of aging line is 900mm.

According to the introduction of Mr. Wu, head of Engineering Department, the line can produce 17” to 54” LCD TV with annual output of 500,000 sets. Furthermore, the production line has the characters of good-shape, no pollution, high automatization and high efficiency. It is also designed per Ergonomics principle to lessen employee’s tiredness and can let 60 workers simultaneously work beside the line. Looking into next year, we will add another two TV aging lines. Therefore, the total of production lines will be three and the annual production capability will reach 1.5 million sets.

To adapt to the demand of domestic market and boost the constant development of enterprise, combining with self requirement, our company introduced into a TV producing aging line that is worth of more than one million RMB yuan on January 2007, which has been put into production formally on March 2007. Thus, our company has possessed TV production capabilities completely. Besides the DVD series products, our company has a new leading product—TV, which improve the capability of constant development and profit.

The TV producing aging line introduced this time consists of assembly line, aging line, testing line, repairing line and packing line. There are four lines in the aging line and each line has two layers. The line body adopts made to measure Al alloy guide rail and triple nylon multiplying chain to drive the operation of workmanship and facility board. The aging line and testing line have three rows of conductive wheels; the support of line body adopts double flat tube of 40mm×60mm×2.5mm ; the assembly line work height is 700mm and each layer’s efficient height of aging line is 900mm.

According to the introduction of manager Zhang, this TV producing aging line can be used for the TV from 17’’ to 54’’ and the annual production can reach to 500 thousands. Furthermore, the producing line has the characters of good-shape, no pollution, high automatization and producing efficiency, which also puts human body engineering theory into the design of producing line well to decrease the working fatigue index of employee. Moreover, it can accommodate 60 workers at the same time. It can be forecast that our company will add another two TV producing aging lines next year. Therefore, the total of TV producing aging lines will be three and the annual production capability will reach 1.5 million.

人工翻译。专有名词基本在网络上查实。扁通没有查到，但是方通是square tube, 所以我把扁通翻译为flat tube.

To meet domestic demand, promote the sustainable development of enterprises, in light of its own needs, I Secretary January 07 introduction of a value of more than 100 million television aging production lines in March has been officially put into operation. Now, I have a comprehensive Secretary television production in a series of DVD products, formation of another new leading products -- television, I Division sustained development and enhanced profitability. This introduction of television production from the assembly line of aging, aging, testing, repair and packaging Line; Aging set up four lines, two each; line was built with a special alloy rails and three times the growth rate of nylon chain plate led Tooling operation. Aging lines and test lines with three rows of conductive round, Line-support using 40mm x 60mm x 2.5mm thick-bian production, Face assembly line height of 700mm, an aging line of each effective height of 900mm. According to Zhang Jingli Works, which is the aging of the television production line will be used for the production of 17 "-54" TV, annual output will reach 500,000. In addition, the production lines pleasing in appearance, non-polluting, high process automation, high production efficiency; Ergonomics and the principle of good use to the design of production lines, reducing the staff of fatigue index; can accommodate 60 workers also work online. It is expected that next year, the Division will increase two aging television production lines, a total of three. Annual output will reach 150 million units.

To meet domestic demand, promote the sustainable development of enterprises, in light of its own needs, I Secretary January 07 introduction of a value of more than 100 million television aging production lines in March has been officially put into operation. Now, I have a comprehensive Secretary television production in a series of DVD products, formation of another new leading products -- television, I Division sustained development and enhanced profitability. This introduction of television production from the assembly line of aging, aging, testing, repair and packaging Line; Aging set up four lines, two each; line was built with a special alloy rails and three times the growth rate of nylon chain plate led Tooling operation. Aging lines and test lines with three rows of conductive round, Line-support using 40mm x 60mm x 2.5mm thick-bian production, Face assembly line height of 700mm, an aging line of each effective height of 900mm. According to Zhang Jingli Works, which is the aging of the television production line will be used for the production of 17 "-54" TV, annual output will reach 500,000. In addition, the production lines pleasing in appearance, non-polluting, high process automation, high production efficiency; Ergonomics and the principle of good use to the design of production lines, reducing the staff of fatigue index; can accommodate 60 workers also work online. It is expected that next year, the Division will increase two aging television production lines, a total of three. Annual output will reach 150 million units.
回答者：夏何萌 - 秀才 二级 5-28 09:59

To meet domestic demand and promote the sustainable development of enterprises, in light of our own needs, Our enterprise brought in modern television aging production device of a value of more than 100 million in january 2007. It has been officially put into operation in March. Now, I have a comprehensive Secretary television production in a series of DVD products, formation of another new leading products -- television, I Division sustained development and enhanced profitability. This introduction of television production from the assembly line of aging, aging, testing, repair and packaging Line; Aging set up four lines, two each; line was built with a special alloy rails and three times the growth rate of nylon chain plate led Tooling operation. Aging lines and test lines with three rows of conductive round, Line-support using 40mm x 60mm x 2.5mm thick-bian production, Face assembly line height of 700mm, an aging line of each effective height of 900mm. According to Zhang Jingli Works, which is the aging of the television production line will be used for the production of 17 "-54" TV, annual output will reach 500,000. In addition, the production lines pleasing in appearance, non-polluting, high process automation, high production efficiency; Ergonomics and the principle of good use to the design of production lines, reducing the staff of fatigue index; can accommodate 60 workers also work online. It is expected that the Division will increase two aging television production lines, a total of three. Annual output will reach 150 million units. 花了半个多小时，不知道你能不能满意

To meet domestic demand and promote the sustainable development of enterprises, in light of our own needs, Our enterprise brought in modern television aging production device of a value of more than 100 million in january 2007. It has been officially put into operation in March. Now, I have a comprehensive Secretary television production in a series of DVD products, formation of another new leading products -- television, I Division sustained development and enhanced profitability. This introduction of television production from the assembly line of aging, aging, testing, repair and packaging Line; Aging set up four lines, two each; line was built with a special alloy rails and three times the growth rate of nylon chain plate led Tooling operation. Aging lines and test lines with three rows of conductive round, Line-support using 40mm x 60mm x 2.5mm thick-bian production, Face assembly line height of 700mm, an aging line of each effective height of 900mm. According to Zhang Jingli Works, which is the aging of the television production line will be used for the production of 17 "-54" TV, annual output will reach 500,000. In addition, the production lines pleasing in appearance, non-polluting, high process automation, high production efficiency; Ergonomics and the principle of good use to the design of production lines, reducing the staff of fatigue index; can accommodate 60 workers also work online. It is expected that the Division will increase two aging television production lines, a total of three. Annual output will reach 150 million units. 花了半个多小时，不知道你能不能满意

In order to adapt the domestic market request, the promotionenterprise continues to develop, unifies own demand situation, I tookcharge of in 07 years in January have introduced a value 1 millionmany televisions productions aging line, in March already officiallywent into production. To this, I took charge of have comprehensivelyhad the television productivity, outside the DVD product series,formed an new leading product - television, caused me to take chargeof continues to develop and to make a profit the ability to obtain theenhancement. This introduction television production aging line by the assembly,the aging, the test, the repair and the package installs wiring iscomposed; The aged line supposes four, each two; The line body usesspecially makes the aluminum alloy guide rail and three time of nylonspeed-up chain link impetus labor 装板movement. The aged line and测试线has three row of electric conduction wheels, the line bodystrut uses 40mm×60mm×2.5mm adds thick flatly passes the manufacture,the assembly line working surface highly is 700mm, aged line eacheffective height is 900mm. According to engineering dept Manager Zhang introduced that, thistelevision production aging line may use in produces 17 "-54" thetelevision, the annual production prefers to achieve 500,000. Inaddition, this production line contour artistic, does not have thepollution, the automatic routine high, the production efficiency ishigh; And in the human body engineering principle very goodutilization production line design, reduced staff's work weary index;May hold at the same time 60 workers the on-line work. Estimated thenext year, I will take charge of increase 2 televisions productionsaging line, will always amount to 3. The annual production can reach1.5 million.

楼上用的是yahoo翻译，对吧！！！ 我和你的完全一样耶！不过说起来这样的翻译已经不错了。

我给一篇：
Be to adapt to the home market request , to promote enterprise sustained development , to needing condition combining with oneself, my department has introduced a value more than 1,000,000's TVs childbirth ageing line , has put into production in commission already formally in March in January for 7 years. So far, I attend to the efficiency having had TV all round , the ability forming leading factor product TV as soon as the new , making my department continue developing and earning profit is strengthened outside DVD product series.
This time, TV introducing to produces the line ageing ageing from assembling, tests , mends and packs line composition; The line ageing sets up four two tiers per; The line body adopt specially order aluminium alloy slide way and treble nylon speed increase chain to drive frock board to work. The line and testing line ageing are matched for having three rows of electric conduction wheel , the line body is propped up adopt 40 mms X 60 mms X 2.5 mms thickening flat exchange fabrication, assembly line face height is 700 mms , the effective line each tier altitude ageing is 900 mms.
According to what introduced by project Manager Zhang of headquarter, this TV produces the line ageing but is used to produce 17 "- 54's" TVs, Nian Chan being able to may reach 500,000. Besides, this production line external form beautiful , there is no the procedure height , efficacy contaminating , automating highly; Very good applying of ergonomics principle has been hit by and to the production line design , has reduced the weary exponent of employee's job; May accommodate the at the same time online job of 60 workers.Estimate that my department will increase by 2 TVs producing the line ageing , the sum amounts to 3 to the next year. The annual production can reach1.5 million.

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