告急啊，求大神帮忙写一下英语作文

江湖告急啊，一篇英语作文，高一水平，主题：“My first train ride”~

It was 6 o clock, and I waited on the railroad tracks to board my train. With my pillowand my bag in the other, I walked up the steps into the train. It was my first time riding the train by myself.

I think it's not right for parents to punish their children. Punishment for mistakes is from the old days. In this new world, while the public is paying more and more attention on human rights, punishing children becomes an outdated tradition. I always believe that punishment is an aggressive way of exercising parental authority. It teaches children that they have to obey everything their parents have said. Nevertheless, everyone is a different individual. Even children's value judgements can differ greatly from those of parents'. Everyone is equal but no one is perfect. Unless the child does something really wrong, then the parents may exercise some authority. Otherwise, parents should talk to their child as a soul friend to give them advice and encouragements. Punishment is not the right thing.

We had a meeting in Company's first meeting room at 2 PM on June 17, 2018. Participants were all hands in Sales Department.
Meeting Notes
1) Sales managers reported the sales situation in the nation-wide market.
2) Second half-year sales tasks were disusssed. Meeting participants agreed that we should focus on development of new produts and expansion of foreign markets.
3) Please advise whether it is required to call an all-departments managerial meeting to brief the conclusions of the Sales Depeartment meeting.

应该用problem , 不是 question Verey 串错， very 才对 Want 要加ed, wanted I'm very hard 不对， 应该是 I work very hard

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