one goal I want achieve at senior hight school作文?
Everyone has a dream.
Now I want to say something about my dream.What is my dream?I often ask myself.In my mind,everyone shall have his own dream.I think that having a dream means that we have an idea,and then we will do all the things to achieve the target.As long as we have a goal to be realized,we won’t be blind at least.
My dream is to become a successful doctor,helping those sick people and saving their lives.Of course,to be a good doctor is very difficult,but I will do whatever I can do to keep everyone healthy.That's my dream.I want to try my best to help the poor sick people of our country.I want to let them have an opportunity to receive excellent treatments for their illnesses without having to pay much or just enjoy them free.China is a developing country which needs good medicine and good doctors,especially in the countryside and distant villages.
Now I’m a junior student on Grade One,all my classmates and I are working hard.We all know that the entrance exam of high schools coming in the year of 2009 is a big challenge for us,so we must study harder and harder in order to go to a good high school.Thus after we finish our senior high school,we are able to go to a good university.Finally,we can find a good job in society.
Dear parents, thank you for your self-giving love. (既然不是写给你父母的信这句话就没有必要了,或者改为I want to thank my parents for their self-giving love.) As the (the 去掉)time went,I grow(grew,过去式) up gently and leavr(left, leave的过去式) my hometown for making a living, so the opporunity to contact with(with去掉,contact是及物动词) both of them is less and less.But I always believe thay my parents will love me forever.
When I was young,my home is expecially(你是想用especially吧,不过这个词太中国话了,就改为very, 如果是非常的穷就用extremely) poor.So my father have(had, has的过去式) to stay on a stange(strange) land for earning bread to ours family.(此处用一个不定式短语好一些,to earn bread for our family) And my mather(mother) raise our theer brothers to maturity self(妈妈把我们三个兄弟拉扯大,可以改为 We three brothers were brought up by our poor mother).
When I was in the(the 去掉) hige school,my parents workded more hard(hard的比较级是harder, 不是more hard) and endeavor in order to get more money afford me to study..(这一句都改一下吧:When I was in high school(根据你的上下文此处应该是junior high school), my parents worked even harder in order to get the money for my tuition and fee. )although(Although) they usually have(had) to get up early to work and late off work, they never have(had) any complain(complaint 名词).only hope(Their only hope is) that I can have a good achievemnt(in the future.)
Then I went to the (the 去掉)senior hige school in(去掉 in ) where I have(had) to depart from my hometwon to study,it is mean(It means或者It is meant that) my parents must to(to 去掉) pay more monney(money) for my school work.
Three years late(later),I went to the college in the city of foshan(Foshan),it is all know(known) that the tuition is so dear that a great number of people cann’t pay for it in china.(Chinese college students can't afford for it)But I never forgot the words,hard to learn tuition is not a problem, my parents tell me when I wound be off my family to the college.(这一句想表达什么父母告诉我只管学习,不用考虑学费?)
At present, I have graduted from the medical college,and to be a doctor.(and I am a doctor now)Involuntarily,I am longing for giving them the money each month,however,my gage(wage) is too low to send any few of (few of 去掉)money back home.Essentially(Principally), I ought to go back home for the compotation in the spring festival,at last,that days(during Spring Festival) (but) I will be on duty, (so I can't go back home this year).my dear parents I hope both of yours willl be health everyday. (I feel so sorry for my dear parents and I can only sincerely hope that they are healthy each day.)
Your son. God, 问题还不少,看在你的孝心的份上帮你修改了,看你也没几个财富值了,友情帮忙了,你的经历让我想起了我的过去 共同加油吧 未来会更好的 是吧
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