托福写作模板：花长时间做决策是否是好的品质

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下面给大家带来几个实用的托福写作模板，欢迎阅读参考。

托福写作模板：花长时间做决策是否是好的品质

题目：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:

Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is often considered as a bad quality for a person. However, some people think that it is a good quality for a person.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

范文 1：Argument 1 (for)

It is wise to take plenty of time to make an important decision. If you stop to think, you can make a logical decision that is not based on passing emotions. Time lets you evaluate possible outcomes and consult with others.

Most importantly, emotions can cloud logical thinking. Giving yourself adequate time to consider a problem lets you look at it calmly. For example, I once got into an argument with a co-worker and was furious enough to quit my job. In my anger, it was the best decision, because I could not imagine looking at that person again. However, I went home and thought about what had happened. As I calmed down, I realized it would be better to talk with my supervisor and the co- worker. The next day I did. Now we work together well. I have a good job, but I would not if I had made the decision to quit in haste and anger.

Not only does taking time allow anger to fade, it also gives time to think through possibilities. It is important to look not just at the immediate decision, but also at its effects into the future. Considering different outcomes and possibilities can be a slow process. In the argument with my co-worker, I needed to look not just at my immediate satisfaction of getting away from the person I argued with. I needed consider what would happen if I quit my job: I could not pay my bills or save money for fun activities. I would need to find a different job. Any important decision has dozens of effects, so it is wise to evaluate what those might be.

Finally, you can get the opinion of others if you take time. You can discuss the situation with family or friends. You can consult the internet or other resources. If you get the advice of people who are not involved or who have more experience, you will have a greater chance of seeing all sides of the problem. You have all the information you need to analyze the different possibilities. For example, if I had talked with my family about quitting my job, they might have suggested changing to a new department in the same company, or other reasonable solutions that I may not have thought of on my own.

Giving yourself time to think lets you base the decision on logic, think about potential effects, and find more information. Therefore, it is wise to take time when making an important decision.

emotions can cloud logical thinking 情绪会模糊或影响 逻辑思维

in my anger 在我愤怒的时候

in haste and anger 在匆忙和愤怒的情况下

allow anger to fade 让愤怒消退

the immediate decision 立即做出的决定

the different possibilities 不同的可能性

base the decision on logic根据逻辑做出决定

范文2：Argument 2 (against)

When it comes to making a decision, you should go with your instincts and commit to an answer as soon as possible. If you take too long to consider, you can inconvenience others, miss opportunities, and make a poor decision.

It is important to remember that your decisions affect not just you but also the people around you. They must wait for your answer before they can go on with their own activities and plans. For example, if you are thinking about going on a vacation, you need to arrange for someone to take care of your pets or home. That person can’t make other plans until he or she finds out if you really are going. Therefore, if you take too much time to make a decision, other people are inconvenienced.

You might also miss opportunities if you are very slow about making a decision. While you are thinking, an event might be filled, a sale might end, or an offer might be withdrawn. The vacation example is a good illustration. If you see an advertisement for a cruise and take too long to respond, there may be no spaces left because other people responded faster. The friend offering to care for your pet cat may decide to do something else for the weekend, leaving you without help. In the end, your careful consideration was for nothing because the opportunity to go on vacation is no longer there.

One last concern about debating for a long time is that only you can know what is right for yourself. Everyone has different opinions, and those opinions may or may not apply to you.Others mean well by giving you advice, but they do not know every detail about you. For example, it is common for others to suggest entering a career where you can make lots of money, such as becoming a doctor or lawyer. However, if you like working outside alone, you will be unhappy and stressed in a career like that. Instead, you should follow your own instincts and enter a lower-paying career that you are happy in, such as becoming a gardener. If you allow yourself time to change your mind and listen to others, you will end up feeling unfulfilled or disappointed.

Therefore, it is important to make decisions in a timely manner. If you take too long to think them over, you can cause problems for others, miss opportunities, or follow a path that is not ideal.

go with your instincts 根据你的直觉去做,凭直觉行事

be inconvenienced 不方便

your careful consideration was for nothing 你的仔细考虑是徒劳的,是无用的

others mean well by giving you advice 别人基于好意给予你建议

a lower-paying career 一份薪水稍低的职业

allow yourself time to 给自己时间去做

in a timely manner 及时地

托福小 作文 的高分技巧

想要拿到写作的高分，大家在平时的复习中，就要掌握一些写作的技巧。这样才能够让我们的备考更有效率的复习。具体的面对托福独立写作，有哪些高分技巧呢? 为大家整理了详细的内容，供大家参考 。

一、“the clearer the better”

很多考生对满分标准存在误读，集中体现为以下三类：

第一类虚构型。部分考生从未认真阅读过官方指南上的评分标准和范文，因此虚构了用词越大分数就越高的要求。

I want to go to the most notorious university in the U.S.

这位考生解释说，他认为表达“著名的大学”用“famous”太俗、太低端，恰巧在背单词时看到了“notorious”有十分著名的意思，就自认为使用后能瞬间变身“高大上”。

殊不知“notorious”虽有十分著名之意，但是贬义词，意为声名狼藉、臭名昭著。考生有这样的“理想”，相信ETS的考官看到后定会大跌眼镜。

考生务必注意，活学活用虽是好事，但表达的第一要义是准确、清楚。满分标准明确要求使用“合适的措辞(appropriate word choice)”，而非所谓的“大词”。

第二类误入型。很多考生学习积极性很高，在看美剧、听英文歌曲时学到的词汇、 短语 立即就用在了托福写作中。

Government should give a damn about environmental problems.

虽然满分语言中明确要求使用“习语(idiomaticity)”，但上述表达中“give a damn about”过于口语化，而写作要求使用书面语，因此这个短语虽然“地道”但放在 文章 中显得格格不入。更何况“damn”本身就上不了台面，属于“four letter words”一类，受过良好 教育 (the well-educated)的英语母语使用者是不会在写作中使用类似表达的。

第三类妄想型。很多考生在阅读了满分标准后，提出疑问：“ 句子 越复杂分数就越高吗?”不可否认，满分标准明确指出需要“使用不同的句法”，但考生也要量力而行。例如：

A large amount of people go abroad to learn knowledge, which we will find good job in big company with this experience.

这位考生的语法显然不过关，除了从句使用不当之外，还出现了人称前后不一致、可数名词缺少冠词、动词搭配不当等诸多问题。事实上，我们只要用“and”连接两个分句就可以清楚的表达核心思想：

A large number of people go abroad to gain knowledge, and they will find a good job in a big company with this experience.

以上三类考生犯了舍本逐末、本末倒置的错误。虽然满分标准中指出“允许考生出现次要的词汇或语法错误”，但这绝不意味着语法不重要。影响表达的语法错误绝不属于“次要”的范畴。

从低分要求到满分要求纵向分析，不难发现语言升级需要建立在一定的基础上。这就好比是登山，不经过山腰是无论如何也不可能登顶的。因此考生要根据自身语言实力使用适当的词汇和语法结构。

即使有一定基础的考生，首先也要突破3分标准的限制： 造句 和选词的不熟练使得文章缺乏清晰度，并且偶尔使意思含混不清(may demonstrate inconsistent facility in sentence formation and word choice that may result in lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning)，在表达清楚的基础上，进而使语言丰富、多变、有内涵，向满分标准冲刺。

托福写作常见的那些失分点

托福写作中有一些易犯错误，将它列举出来，考生可以对照自己的写作看一看，有则改之无则加勉，不要为不必要的失误丢分。

托福写作段落过长，不分段。一大段一大段的内容看起来冗长没有逻辑性，让人失去读下去的兴趣。适当分段，让文章整体看上去简洁明了。

文章结构不平行，使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。

不知所云，不知道想要表达些什么：Many companies began using computers mouth.

句子别扭，措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。

不要使用缩写形式(can’t，don’t，it’s，we’ll，they’ve等等)，而应当使用单词的完整形式(cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。

主语与动词一致问题，主语和动词在单复数方面要一致。

句子不完整Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to gets into college. For example, my friend in high school.句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个

非常常见的错误，修改的 方法 是将两个句子连接起来。

介词多余I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因而不能在它们前面添加介词。

跑题或不相关There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.这个意思与okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意思很普通大多数人都已经知道到了，因而就没有必要再说出来。

标点问题I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.这是一个非常普遍的问题！许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时候。

单数/复数Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.单词需要从单数变为复数，或者由复数变成单数。单数可数名词单数可数名词不能单独使用，应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词(a, the, my, his, her, Gary’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。

拼写错误主语、动词或宾语有问题I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本结构有问题　缺少主语、动词或宾语，或者这些成分重复。

代词指代不明If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.代词所指代的指示词(介词所代替的名词)不清楚。

除此之外可能还有一些问题就不一一列举，希望考生在平时练习中就多注意，不要烦一些低级错误。

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